Jamie
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Post by Jamie on Jan 23, 2014 20:11:30 GMT -5
Out of pure boredom, here is a chokeslam through a stage!
Honestly, I kinda liked it.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 24, 2014 2:58:18 GMT -5
Hey man cool to see a new guy trying out pivot, if you enjoyed it maybe you can post some more anis from other times you get bored? Overall I dig the ani for what I'm assuming is a first it's pretty damn good a lot better than my first lol, if you are gonna animate more pivot in the future I'd suggest working on getting less fidgets in your animations, smooth clear cut movements are a real important part of pivot and I'd say your main issue is that the foot placement and arms shake, overall I'd say you're good for a guy starting out and would be really interested to see how you develop if you continue with pivot.
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Jamie
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Post by Jamie on Jan 24, 2014 3:57:22 GMT -5
Hey man cool to see a new guy trying out pivot, if you enjoyed it maybe you can post some more anis from other times you get bored? Overall I dig the ani for what I'm assuming is a first it's pretty damn good a lot better than my first lol, if you are gonna animate more pivot in the future I'd suggest working on getting less fidgets in your animations, smooth clear cut movements are a real important part of pivot and I'd say your main issue is that the foot placement and arms shake, overall I'd say you're good for a guy starting out and would be really interested to see how you develop if you continue with pivot. Thanks a lot for the tips mate! I enjoy these comments more than the "nice job" ones. Will take these thoughts into consideration. Thanks.
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jan 26, 2014 9:24:07 GMT -5
It's great to see another member giving pivot a try. In regards to the animation, i'd say you did fairly well. At the beginning, what you may want to take into consideration is to be sure to take the necessary time to even out smooth balanced movements and try to reduce the small amount of fidgets that remain in the animation. You seem to understand the essentials of flow and spacing from this display so I wouldn't necessarily work on that atm. JC pointed out the main points you should work on but i'd like to support your attempt towards pivot in any way possible so i'd like to give you my input. Good animation and if you have any questions, feel free to pm me or leave a response in the chat thread.
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Jamie
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Joined on: Sept 14, 2013 15:54:23 GMT -5
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Post by Jamie on Feb 4, 2014 2:59:35 GMT -5
Thanks for the replies guys! Really enjoying the detail.
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