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Post by Deleted on Feb 6, 2014 12:57:58 GMT -5
This one of my best animation Please give me advice
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2014 16:49:59 GMT -5
It's gonna need to be your best;)
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Post by Scotty on Feb 8, 2014 9:48:42 GMT -5
Nice job It was smooth which is always good, just stiff. One thing first too, PLEASE don't use so much sticky tack. its really distracting and looks awful. Bourne should have bent down before he went up for the jump. He should have springboarded off the ropes more too, instead of just hitting them. The flip was pretty stiff too. Try moving his legs inward as much as you can, then outward a little and then back inward as he gets lifted for the powerbomb. Dean was a little stiff after the bucklebomb. Also, Bourne should have fully extended his body back in agony as he hit the buckle, and then go back to normal. Seth was stiff during the spear. Would have liked if bourne went into the air too. Threa reaction was pretty bad. Should have shown bourne crying holding his stomach while seth recovered
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