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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2014 14:07:34 GMT -5
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Mar 4, 2014 17:17:16 GMT -5
Fantastic animations you have here Rain. In this first ani, the lift up from Trevor was very smooth and you analyzed the joint movement exceptionally well. The movements throughout with Evans was pretty well done imo. The double underhook facebuster flowed quite well, the spacing was great and the impact seemed suitable for this type of move. The reaction from Evans could have been a little bit better at the end though.
The second animation was relatively nice I take it, I wasn't to keen on the arm movements during the initial running phase of the ani, it may have suited the ani more of there was further extension between arm struts to receive a more fluent and realistic motion, the leg spacing and joint movement was very nicely done so I didn't see any issues there. The diving senton through the table was nice although the transition over the top rope would have came out a tad more crisp, if you had Evans halt in place briefly for one or two frames then continuing with the sequence throughout just to make it flow a little better.
The impact through the table was very nicely done and I like the reaction from Trevor before impact. The third animation I like the way you allowed Trevor to gradually position him into front flip senton, that alone added an incredible amount of realism, the ladder wobble was just a bonus. The front flip senton itself had good spacing, it had great air time and the joint movement was very efficient and smooth. The impact was so brutal which I really liked and the slight double bounce from Evan after impact looked so nice.
The forth animation was solid from start to finish, the joint movement from Trevor was perfect along with the jump, the table break was good but for some reason I didn't like how it abruptly ended. The fifth animation was pretty vintage, at the beginning I like the squat from Trevor on the apron that looked very smooth, the jump had a nice amount of frames and I thought you did a darn good job with the transition and sequence from the top rope into the spear, the spear was very well done and I like the impact and reaction from both at the end.
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