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Post by Deleted on May 2, 2014 10:22:10 GMT -5
Hey guyssssssss.
I paid attention to what a lot of you said about my last show, and I tried my best to improve in those areas. Bigeviljohn, I took what you said and tried to improve.
I changed my lighting, the music, the posing, the setup, everything. And here it is, ZCW Wrestlemania 1.
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Post by Deleted on May 2, 2014 10:59:02 GMT -5
OK, that's a pretty good show you've put together there. Good Points: -Good selection of matches. -Great posing. -Entertaining. -Nice photography. Bad Points: -The arena. Try and add a crowd or background of some sort as it makes it that little bit more realistic. -The music. Try and record your own commentary for the matches instead of using the music as that helps to enhance your show overall. All in all, you've made a good go of it there. I hope you don't take my comments personally, as I'm just trying to give you fair and constructive criticism. I think you've done a great job, and if you add a crowd/background and commentary, I think it will really enhance your show. I look forward to seeing more from you.  |
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Post by Deleted on May 2, 2014 11:58:23 GMT -5
OK, that's a pretty good show you've put together there. Good Points: -Good selection of matches. -Great posing. -Entertaining. -Nice photography. Bad Points: -The arena. Try and add a crowd or background of some sort as it makes it that little bit more realistic. -The music. Try and record your own commentary for the matches instead of using the music as that helps to enhance your show overall. All in all, you've made a good go of it there. I hope you don't take my comments personally, as I'm just trying to give you fair and constructive criticism. I think you've done a great job, and if you add a crowd/background and commentary, I think it will really enhance your show. I look forward to seeing more from you. Thanks buddy. I'll work on those. |
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Post by Deleted on May 2, 2014 17:02:10 GMT -5
You actually had some decent poses in there good work. The lighting changing sometimes from bright to dim you have to watch and it seems like you worked really hard on everything. But that music was super bad! Is that a girl song??? Seems really out of place in a wrestling match. The song for Cena and Eddie was better though. Nice presentation for what your second show here??? so just keep working on the basics. I did like that triple german suplex with ziggler, MVP and Alberto good for not using string. And some good action in that mini battle royal too.
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Post by Deleted on May 2, 2014 17:12:30 GMT -5
You actually had some decent poses in there good work. The lighting changing sometimes from bright to dim you have to watch and it seems like you worked really hard on everything. But that music was super bad! Is that a girl song??? Seems really out of place in a wrestling match. The song for Cena and Eddie was better though. Nice presentation for what your second show here??? so just keep working on the basics. I did like that triple german suplex with ziggler, MVP and Alberto good for not using string. And some good action in that mini battle royal too. Hahaha. That was 22 by Taylor Swift, lol. I appreciate you're seeing improvement in me. |
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Post by Wicked on May 2, 2014 19:11:41 GMT -5
I plan to review this on PFI bud but good M"eh"nia. Good to see my logo in there Bobby.
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Post by Deleted on May 3, 2014 4:26:55 GMT -5
I plan to review this on PFI bud but good M"eh"nia. Good to see my logo in there Bobby. Thanks budday. I couldn't leave ya out, Rickus. |
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