CWE RAW EPISODE 6 (THATS WHAT HE DOES !!) - IS ON AIR !!!!!!

The last time I watched your fed it was overall a mixed bag. Hopefully this show has more of the good and less of the bad. Cena's promo was pretty cool but I had problems telling if Mark Henry was talking or vickie was talking. Still need to improve on punctuation and grammar. Pic quality's pretty good. Del Rio and Brodus Clay is one of the most boring matchups ever but the match was good. I'd say too short but you don't expect Del Rio and Brodus Clay to put on a nice long match. Hart Dyansty and Primo and Epico was good. Aj's promo is a good example of your need to improve your grammar.

"And i'm out here tonight. To warn you of a certain person. And that person is the man who calls himself the Celtic Warrior. Sheamus.
See CM Punk is not here tonight. Due to receiving medical treatment. From the attacked he suffered last week. At the hands of his
opponent at The No Way Out Pay Per View. Sheamus. " There's such a thing as a comma you know.

Anywho. Oh great the nexus like that's not a tired old idea. I'll keep an open mind though. Oh wait no they're "Generation Next" Doesn't help when 4 of the ? members are from the nexus and they're all wearing Nexus shirts. I found Barrett's promo odd and very out of character, which made me glad Sheamus showed up. Why exactly did the guy you're not calling David Otunga stay on the apron the whole time? Now it's Ted Dibiase vs.. Claudio Castawhatever. I'm so confused. You're giving the majority of the superstars their WWE names but then you're changing a couple names. I wouldn't be surprised if you renamed Evan Bourne Matt Sydal like everyone does..Claudio/Ted was short but I expected it to be. What was the point of the backstage segment with Claudio? Just so you could make an innuendo? Cena match going good until Claudio comes out. Why did Claudio go after Cena? He's not even the champion. And why didn't the match end?

Overall:
Pic quality good
Matches mostly good

Grammar and punctuation is down the toilet
I'm pretty sure there were no feuds continued nor setup besides the Nex- Generation Next vs Everyone and Batista vs Cena. I expect more after 6 episodes.
Pretty much nobody who was talking sounded like they were supposed to besides Cena and Mark Henry and that's because they're both so generic.

Overall.. it was good but nowhere near great.

Not your strongest episode, but it was still very good. I'm looking forward to Smackdown!

Don't worry about replies people are busy and will get to review it soon. I liked this show and like everything going on in your fed. Storylines are good, very WWE 2011 esq with a few twists added one, I used to think you weren't that creative when you first started your fed up, and now I like it all and I like the subtle WWE 2011 differences with some cool stuff going on. Picture quality got a lot better. Posing wasn't the best and can use some work, try to bend the joints on your figures and don't be afraid to PM me or another member if you need help posing a move.  Good show my friend.
-The opener was cool. I dig the whole nation of domination team Mark Henry has with Long.
-The first match was good. Very WWE Raw esq as in it wasn't too long but the guys got there Chocolate Shark in. I like the way Del Rio took down Brodus throughout the match, it was booked well. I like the but kicking Mark Henry.
-Man your Tyson looks like it has seen some better days. No hair on it's head and one knee pad. The Dynasty look really hurt from what happened to them. Nice Tag Match can't wait to see the Hart that HHH will have a match against.
-Nice Johnny Curtis Promo. Good way to debut AJ. I liked having the Nexus come out. I just realized that you are calling the Nexus Generation Next which was a real faction in ROH, and a team I am using with Bourne, Shelley, and Sabin. Aww what a nice Sheamus.
-Claudio vs. Dibiase was short and didn't have the best posing. It was ok. I like Cody comming out and what's going on with Sheamus and Jericho.
- The main event was match of the night. I liked the end that added to feuds.

Good show buddy and don't worry about replies.  

-Nice opening segment, putting Henry in the spotlight
-Clay/Del Rio was enjoyable, and not as one-sided as I thought it would be
-Tag match had a cool sub plot with Tyson's ribs
-AJ/Sheamus put a nice twist into the feud
-You've been very patient with that Cody storyline. Credit to you for that
-Hectic ending to the main event but really good

A very impressive show. I think the thing that you're best at is intertwining all of the different characters and storylines into each other, rather than keeping them apart and just having people interact with their feud opponent. Really liked seeing that, good work!