Ace Gervase
Main Eventer
Joined on: Nov 11, 2002 16:09:33 GMT -5
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Post by Ace Gervase on Sept 6, 2014 0:55:39 GMT -5
Please reply, let me know what you think. It took me a long time to set this up so any comments are very welcome. Oh and please vote for the belt that will be the NEW TWWE CHAMPIONSHIP TITLE!!!! Preview linkEpisode 1 link |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 6, 2014 1:11:13 GMT -5
I don't remember you, but the first thing was posted before I started my pic fed so that's prob why.
Presentations pretty cool. First match was meh. Screwy finish #1 and hopefully the only one. I thought HHH/Ziggler was fine but he shouldn't have kicked out of the pedigree. Brock/Sheamus was pretty good. Edge vs Swagger was the best match of the show for me. You're already better at posing then I am, so that's good. Matches were pretty decent. Not going to judge the storylines just yet because this was your first show. Seemed a little short, could do with more backstage segments. I also couldn't really differentiate Cole from Lawler, because they all sounded the same.
So, work on making people sound like they do in real life, add in some more backstage segment, and maybe lengthen your matches a little and you could have a pretty good show.
3/5
Decent matches
Good for a first effort
And PS: Where were all the title belts?
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Post by Deleted on Sept 6, 2014 14:24:02 GMT -5
Wow man this is great!
You have definitely impressed me with your high production values especially for a first show! From your office setup to your backstage area to your huge entrance and arena setup you did a really great job here.
You took the time to piece together your vision and it really shines through here. The matches were also pretty good for your first time with good photo taking and not to shabby posing especially for a first timer.
You really got something nice here and I know it took you a long time to produce your first show but try and stick with it hopefully you had fun doing all this which is th emain thing here but good luck this board needs more fedders that can put out high end stuff!
Congrats man you earned it!
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Post by attitudesback on Sept 6, 2014 14:41:35 GMT -5
This was awesome man! Like said above me, the production value, poses, matches were all pretty perfect! This was really good, I was actually surprised by it in all honesty, everything felt very clean and impressive but I will have to say some of the shots were a little blurry and I did notice on Sheamus there was string left on him for poses that didn't need it. Only little things like that but this was really impressive, even more so because it's a first show.
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