zaydsberg
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Post by zaydsberg on Sept 14, 2014 15:37:41 GMT -5
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Post by ace on Oct 1, 2014 7:20:33 GMT -5
I'm surprised nobody has commented on this. It may be a little old, but you deserve some feedback.
Came out good from what I can see, the mouth moving was really good. all of the moves seemed a little stiff, but it looks smooth and with a basic you cant expect much.
Good job!
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Post by Slim on Oct 1, 2014 7:41:34 GMT -5
Wow, never seen that!
Good work, I like this promo. The moves were pretty stiff, but they were smooth. Try to work on stiffness, but it's hard to animate with basics. The mouth-effect was great, you did improve, so keep it up!
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Post by zaydsberg on Oct 12, 2014 15:10:33 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2014 17:45:48 GMT -5
Nice job. How do you do stop motion. Every time I've tried I failed.
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Post by Slim on Oct 19, 2014 3:04:29 GMT -5
Cool animation, it was smooth, but it was pretty stiff. You haven't moved the joints at all. Maybe it would be a lot better if you have lifted Batista's legs, and Big Show's right arm. I liked the impact, especially the table break. But Batista's the reaction wasn't nice as it was unfinished and stiff. Big Show had no reaction also.. You really need to move all the joints after every pictures next time.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2014 10:29:37 GMT -5
Short, sweet and to the point. Looked good to me. Nice work.
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Post by Slim on Dec 3, 2014 15:22:55 GMT -5
The RKO looked really really stiff bro.. try to move Randy's legs and arms during that move. And same as Cena, watch the real move on YT.. It was pretty choppy you have a lot to learn. You should compete more on Wfigs, and I think you'll improve because people gives some great feedbacks!
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Post by zaydsberg on Jan 29, 2015 16:15:55 GMT -5
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Post by Slim on Jan 29, 2015 16:34:52 GMT -5
The animation was a bit too fast to me. You should've bent Cena and Orton's knees, and move Cena's arms too. Cena's legs movement at the end was a nice touch even though you should have put more reaction on both. And the shadows/string were annoying, try to edit them. Definitly better than your old RKO.  |
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Post by zaydsberg on Jan 29, 2015 17:54:08 GMT -5
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Post by zaydsberg on Jan 31, 2015 20:03:17 GMT -5
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Post by zaydsberg on Jan 31, 2015 20:14:17 GMT -5
DDT TROUGH THE TABLE !!! 
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