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Post by Kyzer on Jan 28, 2015 17:39:13 GMT -5
I'm going to be brutally honest here, and I know I'll likely get eaten alive due to me having a different opinion than most other people here. I feel that you're taking this 'man' mantra to the fact where after a while, it has no comedic element whatsoever, and is fairly annoying to read. This piece did not really do anything for me, and I don't think you'll get very far by only relying on the whole "man" shtick in every sentence you type. I suggest that you read other works and develop a style that is more appropriate for a somewhat realistic universe, and definitely tone down the "man" mantra. If the Old Spice guy wrote RP's, this is exactly how they would be. Not my cup of tea either. Because a bearded buck is the most serious thing I have ever seen. It's clearly a comedy character, Dex. In the history of the WFWF, only two INTENDED comedy characters (not counting Shane O'Rielley and Immune) have ever been intended to be long term characters, those being Brad Munroe, and Phillip Schneider. #ShotsFired So get that stick out yo ass brotha and appreciate the manliness before he takes his talents to South Beach. There's no hope for Markw to lighten up, he's British. You've still got a chance. King Kraig, Napoleon whatever his name is, Ripp Jackson. There have been more than two. And pretty sure you have always had a stick up your ass...or butt-plug, whatever you call it. This actually reads exactly like a King Kraig rp.
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Post by bad guy™ on Jan 28, 2015 18:19:56 GMT -5
Because a bearded buck is the most serious thing I have ever seen. It's clearly a comedy character, Dex. In the history of the WFWF, only two INTENDED comedy characters (not counting Shane O'Rielley and Immune) have ever been intended to be long term characters, those being Brad Munroe, and Phillip Schneider. #ShotsFired So get that stick out yo ass brotha and appreciate the manliness before he takes his talents to South Beach. There's no hope for Markw to lighten up, he's British. You've still got a chance. King Kraig, Napoleon whatever his name is, Ripp Jackson. There have been more than two. And pretty sure you have always had a stick up your ass...or butt-plug, whatever you call it. This actually reads exactly like a King Kraig rp. Kraig and Naps were never intended for longevity though. That was my point.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 28, 2015 18:41:19 GMT -5
I was excited for the first Stan McMann RP, I wasn't disappointed. A well done comedy character is something I will never not enjoy, keep it up. I'd agree though in that the big letters made it a bit difficult to read, but the content was superb.
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Post by Rated R on Feb 8, 2015 11:44:52 GMT -5
I get that it might not be some peoples cup of tea but anybody who doesn't see what you're doing here is missing out. I loved it, it's hard to care about realism when you're entertained. That's the difference maker, if something isn't realistic AND it isn't very good then it's a problem, but when it's like this it's hard to care about the realism. Just keep doing what you're doing man, it's great to have somebody just having a laugh and enjoying their writing on the board.
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Post by Danger10 on Feb 8, 2015 15:30:05 GMT -5
This was awesome and the music only made it 20x better. I already feel more manly just from reading this.
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