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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2015 7:06:39 GMT -5
For some reason, my previous reply has been deleted. Another good effort man! Bray vs Ambrose was wild, reminiscent of their recent real life encounters. You did well to capture both guys craziness in this one. Nice ending spot with the elbow through the table. I like the idea of a heel Cody, I liked the U.S. title match. Great way to kick your midcard title feud off straight off the bat! New champion, a nice championship centered feud building here. Not that Cena and Batista is my personal dream match but this was a decent attempt at turning water into wine! You captured their moves well, I'm guessing the win over Cena will propel Batista in your fed now. It's goes without saying that if you sharpen up your poses and work on your production (edit string, camera angles etc) this could quickly become one of the elite feds on here. Thanks man, much appreciated! There's certainly much more to come from Cody over the next few months, stay tuned! |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2015 16:32:14 GMT -5
Great show the matches were great, and very entertaining, your storylines are very good. your arena is really good, i like the fan print out's in the backround. really good show and i can't wait to see more, keep up the good work.  |
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Post by Wicked on Mar 2, 2015 18:28:03 GMT -5
This show was pretty good man. I think you improved a lot man, Posing seemed to be a bit better. I liked the string, maybe edit it. Try to work hard at improving posing by bending joints a bit more and try to be a bit more realistic. Watch top ten moves of wrestlers before fedding and study matches better to get a better sense of peoples move sets. Also try hard to improve on the match quality, by making spots a bit more realistic. For example the missile drop kick onto the back and head of cody, you should of made it a ghetto foot stomp or made Cody stand up and take the drop kick in the head. Good work, just work on posing, match quality and you will be golden Ponyboy. Also make sure you take the extra step to make announcers and guys doing promo's posed in a realistic position and not weird with there arms up or in a weird position.
-DA vs. Bray was a cool match. Very Attitude Era esq. I like this Hardcore division. Some weird poses like that Sister Abigail, That weird laying on top splash thingy. Glad Mox won. Damn that ladder is fat.
-DB vs. CR was a cool match. I love the actual US title and I like your US division so far. Some weird poses in this match. Bryan did a lot of high flying like moonsaults, that is kind of weird. Cool finish.
-Nice Gene Mean.
-Cena vs. Batista was short but cool. Tista looks strong. Del Rio should be worried.
This episode was cool. Just work on stuff and maybe make an outline of a roster to show us what your fed is like, because it seems like I have no idea who is in your fed and you just keep debuting new guys every episode.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2015 18:32:02 GMT -5
Glad you enjoyed it Wicked! It's difficult with the roster. I only do 3 matches per show, and I've only done 2 episodes so far, so it's difficult. Episode 3 will hopefully be less confusing as I'll be reusing guys from the first two shows. |
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Post by Wicked on Mar 2, 2015 18:33:21 GMT -5
Glad you enjoyed it Wicked! It's difficult with the roster. I only do 3 matches per show, and I've only done 2 episodes so far, so it's difficult. Episode 3 will hopefully be less confusing as I'll be reusing guys from the first two shows. It'd be sweet if you posted in a thread with your roster, like this. gwv.freeforums.net/thread/18/gwv-roster |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2015 18:35:51 GMT -5
Glad you enjoyed it Wicked! It's difficult with the roster. I only do 3 matches per show, and I've only done 2 episodes so far, so it's difficult. Episode 3 will hopefully be less confusing as I'll be reusing guys from the first two shows. It'd be sweet if you posted in a thread with your roster, like this. gwv.freeforums.net/thread/18/gwv-rosterActually, that's not a bad idea! I've posted some other things on there like Title History, Royal Rumble Winners and The Streak, but never thought of doing a roster page. Thanks for the idea! |
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