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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2015 19:14:53 GMT -5
review it or we're not friends
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Post by attitudesback on Feb 28, 2015 21:29:48 GMT -5
This was interesting. The lack of a ring is surprising from the get go. I watched the whole thing, and definitely enjoyed parts of it. Guerrero definitely looked like a heel? I believe that was his intention. The Main Event was pretty good for what it was, some of the poses throughout were actually not bad. I did however have huge problems with it. For starters, the lack of ropes, which just seemed to change mid show. Then after that, in the middle of the Main Event the ring mat completely changed - where is the consistency? It all seemed quite odd, especially when there were 4/5 superstars out of nowhere fighting what seemed to be Evolution, a tired concept, but I'd like to see what you do with it. Another point I had was where is the promos? Who's who? What's going on here? I'm not sure of your other work from memory but I had no idea why whatever was happening took place. It's good that you've managed to put out a show but there's obviously many things you can work on. Posing, Lighting, Backgrounds, Inclusion of commentary/audio, Promo's.. It's a start, and I think if you keep at it with this base of sense of story and some decent posing, you might become a top fed.  (We're friends now I take it? lol  ) |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2015 0:31:50 GMT -5
This was interesting. The lack of a ring is surprising from the get go. I watched the whole thing, and definitely enjoyed parts of it. Guerrero definitely looked like a heel? I believe that was his intention. The Main Event was pretty good for what it was, some of the poses throughout were actually not bad. I did however have huge problems with it. For starters, the lack of ropes, which just seemed to change mid show. Then after that, in the middle of the Main Event the ring mat completely changed - where is the consistency? It all seemed quite odd, especially when there were 4/5 superstars out of nowhere fighting what seemed to be Evolution, a tired concept, but I'd like to see what you do with it. Another point I had was where is the promos? Who's who? What's going on here? I'm not sure of your other work from memory but I had no idea why whatever was happening took place. It's good that you've managed to put out a show but there's obviously many things you can work on. Posing, Lighting, Backgrounds, Inclusion of commentary/audio, Promo's.. It's a start, and I think if you keep at it with this base of sense of story and some decent posing, you might become a top fed. (We're friends now I take it? lol ) Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to review this. Just to give you an idea of what's going on in my fed.. Evolution has been running roughshod over the company since April of last year. Guerrero is a face. Evolution are currently feuding with the biggest stars in ZCW. (John Cena, Evan Bourne, Daniel Bryan, basically all babyfaces) Those are basically all the feuds I have right now. |
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Post by attitudesback on Mar 1, 2015 0:59:00 GMT -5
This was interesting. The lack of a ring is surprising from the get go. I watched the whole thing, and definitely enjoyed parts of it. Guerrero definitely looked like a heel? I believe that was his intention. The Main Event was pretty good for what it was, some of the poses throughout were actually not bad. I did however have huge problems with it. For starters, the lack of ropes, which just seemed to change mid show. Then after that, in the middle of the Main Event the ring mat completely changed - where is the consistency? It all seemed quite odd, especially when there were 4/5 superstars out of nowhere fighting what seemed to be Evolution, a tired concept, but I'd like to see what you do with it. Another point I had was where is the promos? Who's who? What's going on here? I'm not sure of your other work from memory but I had no idea why whatever was happening took place. It's good that you've managed to put out a show but there's obviously many things you can work on. Posing, Lighting, Backgrounds, Inclusion of commentary/audio, Promo's.. It's a start, and I think if you keep at it with this base of sense of story and some decent posing, you might become a top fed. (We're friends now I take it? lol ) Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to review this. Just to give you an idea of what's going on in my fed.. Evolution has been running roughshod over the company since April of last year. Guerrero is a face. Evolution are currently feuding with the biggest stars in ZCW. (John Cena, Evan Bourne, Daniel Bryan, basically all babyfaces) Those are basically all the feuds I have right now. Cool man. Do you do a monthly show? Would be cool to see this stuff happen with promo's and stuff like how I do Nitro for example. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2015 1:01:26 GMT -5
Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to review this. Just to give you an idea of what's going on in my fed.. Evolution has been running roughshod over the company since April of last year. Guerrero is a face. Evolution are currently feuding with the biggest stars in ZCW. (John Cena, Evan Bourne, Daniel Bryan, basically all babyfaces) Those are basically all the feuds I have right now. Cool man. Do you do a monthly show? Would be cool to see this stuff happen with promo's and stuff like how I do Nitro for example. Yep, shows once a month. Except for Mania because that's happening in April. I will be releasing a RAW episode once a week from now until Wrestlemania to help with build, containing promos, interviews, etc. |
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Post by deskjet on Mar 1, 2015 6:36:11 GMT -5
The posing was pretty good throughout. I have the same issue I have with most youtube feds, and that's nothing against you, but It's just wrestles doing moves. No back story, no interviews to advance the storylines. Maybe do something like Mighty Menace does and have your interviews/segments before/after the show so I have a reason to be interested in the feuds and characters. The ring and arena are terrible. Sorry to be harsh but a proper ring could be made/bought and an arena is just as easy as taping some poster board on your walls and cutting out an entrance way. I can tell you put sometime into this because like I said the posing is well done. I'd suggest more effort into other areas of your fed and it could really be enjoyable.
-your friend, deskjet:)
-PS..Can I borrow 20 bucks...friend:)
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2015 16:36:52 GMT -5
Good show and good posing, i like the fact that we have both pic feds and youtube pic feds, on here as they are all good to watch. i like your arena. very entertaining to watch and i hope to see more of ZCW soon, good work keep it up. |
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Post by Robert69 on Apr 18, 2015 11:50:52 GMT -5
Wrestling without a wrestling ring -- weird, but -- I kind of dig it? I think I do. Feels sort of primal. Boo, Bourne! Eddie/D Bry -- dream match, even if I'm not big on D Bry. Did you crack Eddie G's torse at some point or was it just the way light was hitting him? Boo, Bryan! 'Chamionship'  Random appearance of ring ropes/posts YEAH, WYATT! Can never be mad at HHH winning. Decent ending. Quality poses throughout. |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Apr 19, 2015 18:44:53 GMT -5
The lack of ropes was a little off-putting, but there is definitely some potential here. Some of your poses are very well done. I just think you need to bend the joints a bit more.
What makes pic fedding so interesting to me, is when people build storylines. And that was not so clear in this show. Try filming some backstage segments where your roster can engage in feuds. The matches are fun, but they are more enjoyable when there is motivation behind the matches. A story that I can keep in mind about why I care about this match so much.
The show was also not so cohesive because the ring kept changing.
I love your roster and think that you can be a great addition to this board. Please keep filming and posting and honing your craft. Looking forward to seeing you grow, buddy! Thanks for posting for our enjoyment.
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