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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2015 15:27:15 GMT -5
Enjoy!
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Post by Wicked on May 6, 2015 14:33:00 GMT -5
I really like your fed, however I think sometimes it seems a bit cookie cutter, don't take it the wrong way I just think you need to do something to set yourself apart from different feds. Posing is ok, sometimes a bit stiff.
-I liked Cesaro vs. Dolph. I like how you use the X-Division championship.
-Punk vs. JGABE was ok. I thought you used both guys well.
-Jericho vs. Bryan vs. Mick I mean HHH. was a good match. Again you used both guys well. Glad Trips won.
-Rumble was pretty good match. A lot of excited moments in there. Good job. I marked out for Rocky Manivia. I am so glad Brock didn't win! I am happy Seth got it. Great stuff.
Overall good show. Great work and keep it up!
I give it a 7 outta of 10!!
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Post by attitudesback on May 7, 2015 16:04:22 GMT -5
Yeah, as the mighty Wicked said you really utilise these guys well. Some of their movesets shone through, I felt MOTN would probably have to have been the Rumble. Seeing Rocky Maivia is not something that happens often although I am a massive Rocky fan so it was a welcome addition! I'd like to see some crowd prinouts/backgrounds as we can see behind the stage and it would make it look a little more like an arena. Orton's RKO on Maivia was pretty good, there were some solid poses in there. I've gotta say the improvements would be the arena/ring (turnbuckles/ring mat/ringskirt?) and maybe some of the posing. Deep Shadows possibly had one of the best YouTube feds I've ever seen - if you're familiar with his work I'd definitely check it out and get some inspiration from there. The audio/commentary in particular. Really solid offering here man. I gotta admit I never expect much but was pleasantly surprised! Looking forward to more.  |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on May 12, 2015 13:51:29 GMT -5
I find it very interesting that I am able to follow all of your matches without a shred of commentary. That is very impressive. I do, however, feel that a good federation incorporates dialogue.
Dialogue enables you to build feuds and establish character identity. To me, that is what makes a successful pic fed.
That being said, I am still very impressed that you are able to tell a story within the structure of a match. For example, Bryan vs. Jericho vs. Triple H did a spectacular job of telling a story through posing.
I look forward to seeing how you progress as a pic fedder and am grateful that you are a member of this board. Keep pumping out work an improving! Good stuff.
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Post by T on May 15, 2015 13:45:55 GMT -5
The ring looks smart with the white ropes and black ring 'mat'. Poses were really good throughout and you made the Royal Rumble engaging without it every getting boring, which is no mean feat.
Would like to see bits of commentary sprinkled here and there like Stu does with his W3A. Also, a match card accompanying this thread would have helped to give a bit of background about various rivalries and how the undercard came about.
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Post by The Champ is Here! on May 29, 2015 9:07:59 GMT -5
Not bad, some of your shots could use string, especially when you have someone jumping over someone else, they were jumping so high they should be in the nba lol, it would just add realism Cant believe justin won, that was a shock Rumble was good A little commentary would help, or post even promos like Wicked does, it helps us understand the fueds |
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