WFW - SLAMBOREE!

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Great stuff here, the first match was fast paced and high flying, my motn honestly, just wish punk had won, and I am a big fan

The khali vs big e match was solid, and you told a good story, big e working over the leg was super smart, and well done

No clue what's going on with foley but it's looking cool

The hogan vs bryan match was good, I like that you went out of the box and made bryan heel, wish the ending had been the other way, your blood looks good, and you did a good job of not turning a no dq match into a hardcore

Interesting turn of events in your main event, I look forward to where it goes

I think this was another improvement, and it felt like a ppv to me...like a minor ppv, like badd blood, as opposed to a major one like Wrestlemania

My biggest critique, is split up your show, took forever to load all the pics

Good stuff though

Well, this is a nice surprise to come home to after a s****y day at work! Let's go!

-Loving the stage!
-Nice Ring skirt!
-Rooting for Brock tonight, of course.
-Nameplate graphics look good man!
-Nice match to kick off the show.
-INCREDIBLE poses in this one!
-I love the blurry effect you use for action shots. It really adds to the atmosphere of the match.
-Congrats to RVD! That was one Hell of a match!
-Nice segment with RVD and Maria.
-Had a good chuckle at Khali's nameplate. 'Great', ha ha ha!
-Boo, Khali, Boo! I wonder what happened with the lights going out? A reference to WCW perhaps?
-I'm really liking the way you're rebuilding Mankind after his last match.
-Cool Hogan promo.
-What a bloodbath!
-Now Dwayne, that's no way to talk about BROCK F'N LESNAR!
-That belt looks pretty good on HHH...but it'll look much better on Brock.
-Batista attacking Brock? I'm torn...
-Huh, guess there's no Evolution reunion here then!
-Somebody ran over Hogan? Vince Russo, calling it now!

Great show attitudesback! The posing was good overall, but there were a few stiff ones (don't even think about posting that meme Robert69!) in the main event. Great show, worth the wait!

Eh, sure, why not. Looking forward to seeing this, your first supercard. A little late so don't expect me to go into too much detail.



Rey/Punk/RVD should be an interesting opener. Some weird stuff like Punk doing a Nutcracker Suite/Bam Bam's thing, or whatever, the sitout over the shoulder piledriver. Although it wasn't exactly that. Would've had him hit Rey with a kick to the head instead whilst he was in midair. This match was horribly short. I get you're going for the X Division style, and that's fine, you can do a fast paced match, but this had to be 40-50 pictures tops. The posing was okay, and RVD should be decent as champion. Nice promo post-match although I would've liked the wife angle to come into play during the match.

Time for Big E/Khali, this probably won't be very enjoyable considering you blew the Khali/Big E angle on Episode 3. Still should be a decent match, but it could be a great match to me if the story wasn't screwed up. This was pretty much a squash. Big E got some offense in though. The flow was pretty awful in parts of the match, in fact it never really felt like it flowed well together, some shots like them recovering could've helped a lot. One thing I have to applaud is Big E focusing his attack on Khali's legs. Very smart tactic that makes a lot of sense, especially in a real life situation. Would've liked to see Big E win but Khali was definitely the best choice after Episode 3. Mankind cuts a promo that uses the words "darkness", "souls" and wonderful a bit too much, says be ready Khali, WE will be, and then bursts out into laughter. No idea what you're on to make Khali/Mankind a feud, but I'll reserve judgement until it actually happens. The thing I can judge is the promo, which was a little off. It made Mick sound more like a lunatic then the actual original Mankind character. Photography was good though.

D-Bry vs Hulk Hogan is next.
Daniel starts off okay, but not very technical. I don't agree with the hardcore stipulation, because Daniel's never been the kind to be hardcore. Hell I think this feud would've been a bit better if you based it around Daniel thinking he's a better wrestler then Hogan. Daniel could mock Hogan's hulking up, his general lack of wrestling ability, he could've insulted his age, etc. Instead the feud is Daniel hit Hogan with a barbed wire bat, now they're fighting. This honestly sounds like it was reserved for two different guys, but you slapped it on Daniel/Hogan. What do I know? Daniel produces the bat out of thin air and hits Hogan on the outside. Hogan wins after....a match. If I'm looking at this as just a match, it was okay. There could've been more inbetween the weapon shots but not much more. It was waaaay wayy too short for a PPV match. None of the posing was bad, at all. You're getting pretty good with the elites. But as Daniel Bryan vs Hulk Hogan, it was pretty bad. Hogan wrestled like he does in real life, but Daniel kind of threw real life out the window. If I imagined Daniel doing weapon shots, it'd be technical stuff. Boston crab over a chair, using a chair to attack legs/arms, not straight chairshots.

Good Rock/HHH promo. You got those two down pretty well.

HHH hits a pedigree 5 frames into the match itself. No words. Brock kicked out at one, how surprising. After what could be better described as a bunch of finishers and suplexes, much less a match, Batista comes out, powerbombs the ref, helps HHH retain, then gives HHH a Batista Bomb of his own.

I'm going to try to put this as best as I possibly can, this was so phoned in it wasn't even funny. Heh, I still sounded like a dick putting it like that, but I'm sorry, I really can't find any better way to put it. I used the handy dandy quote function to see how many pictures were in this show. 184. One hundred, eighty four. To put things into perspective, this is 30 pictures more then the shortest match from my Hardcore Heaven PPV. If you go by the old standard of 60 pictures per match, 100 pictures per PPV match, this should've been 240 or 400 pictures. None of the matches felt like they were PPV quality. And heck, there wasn't even more then 4 matches. This isn't a "PPV", hell it wasn't as good as any of your regular episodes, excluding #4. I honestly can't constructively criticise this. None of the matches were good, as matches, because none of them went on long enough to become anything special. Or anything bigger then usual matches. The posing and presentation was decent to pretty good. Some promos were pretty good (HHH/Rock, Hogan) some promos were uh... there (Mankind). Overall....ugh. I'm at a loss for words. This isn't going to come off the best, probably because I'm real tired, but my opinion would stay the same regardless of what time I viewed it.

Pointers (which your latest episodes didn't make me think you needed, considering they were much better then this "PPV")
A Pay Per View, must feel like a PPV. There were 4 matches, one more then you usually have. None of these were "PPV" length (I'd suggest 100 for the opener, 120 for subsequent matches and 150 for the main event, 200+ if you want it to be great.). The matchups themselves weren't bad. I'm not saying go the Richard or me route of doing PPVs with insane amounts of pictures (1500 to however many pics Rich took for his latest show, I'm guessing 3000+), but at least make it longer then a normal show. I'd say 600 pics would be good, for the very minimum.

Try and make the wrestlers behave as they do in real life. It's clear that you're going for that (as everyone else bar Mankind and Daniel behaves as they do in real life) most of the time, so I'm not sure if going super far off with certain guys was intentional or due to a lack of understanding of their characters/wrestling style. As an overall pointer, not everyone needs to behave exactly as they do in real life, but they shouldn't be that far off from how they act in real life. Daniel being hardcore in your fed is too far for me, adding a few extra moves to anyones moveset wouldn't be.

Honestly, the fact this felt like you sat down and filmed for an hour is probably the worst part of this. It let me down so..so much. It delivered in no areas, it wasn't even given a chance to deliver. If it's like this because of time constraints, then you should've waited a little longer to put it out until it felt more complete.

I can't rate this. I can't type any longer. Please never do anything like this again. #1-3 beat this out way more then I'd ever guessed. I like you. I like your fed, but I can't praise this. Take my advice and make Starrcade a show to remember.

Mankind is not the normal 'Mankind' so it deviates a little. Daniel Bryan's extreme stuff didn't pay off the way I envisioned it/planned. I never like doing long stuff, it's not something I find easy to watch so it translates into wanting something easy to view that doesn't consume too much time. Starrcade will be so much longer. That I can assure you. It's only just starting out man, I've got 6+ matches/ideas for Starrcade. I've been quite ill since I started making this so hopefully I can get back to normal health and put out some insane stuff by the time Starrcade comes around! Thanks for checking it out.

Thank you man! Really glad you enjoyed the show. This is where WFW starts to get interesting!

Thank you DJ! Glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks guys for checking it out. Glad you enjoyed it!

I really love your arena set up dude, it looks badass - I love the WCW type vibe coming from your show.

The Triple Threat was a fun match I was hoping for Punk to come out on top but RVD winning is cool too - hope to see them face off in a single's match at some point.

I wasn't so hyped for Khali vs E but you made it interesting with the Mankind promo. I'm looking forward to seeing more of him and finding out who "We" are. Not so sold on the idea of Khali as IC Champion though.

Hogan vs Bryan was very well done. The poses were excellent and I love the idea of Bryan using absolutely anything and everything to beat The Hulkster - too bad it didn't work though. I like how you put your own spin on the characters. Hogan Wins LOL! Kidding aside, brilliant match.

I really enjoyed the promos between the matches - that's something I may do in my future shows. It's a nice way to show new viewers (Like myself) what the storylines are and why these guys are wrestling.

Triple H vs Brock was very well executed. I loved the Pedigree at the very beginning and how Brock kicked out at 1 (And people say Cena's bad haha). It made Brock look like an unstoppable beast which essentially is what he is. Interesting ending with Batista's interference, I liked it.

Very solid show 8.5/10

-Nice arena
-Ending to the CW title match came about well, liked to GTS on the steps
-Wasn't as keen on the IC Title match. Everything seemed to happen in the same corner
-Glad to see you're continuing to rebuild Mankind
-A few nice poses in Hogan/Bryan, although the match itself was strange. Seemed like Hogan just got beat up and then hit one move and won. Him winning made sense, but maybe the execution could have been better
-Liked the ending to the main event, as it kept Lesnar strong and made sense that Batista would believe he could beat HHH more easily than he could Lesnar
-Interesting attack to setup an angle for the next season already

Pretty enjoyable show overall. The first and last matches were my favourites, and now you've got the first season done you can build, improve and add more wrestlers to it. Nice work.