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Post by deskjet on Jan 23, 2016 20:14:11 GMT -5
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RBW
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There is no such thing as death: Life is only a dream and we are the imagination of ourselves
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Post by RBW on Jan 24, 2016 14:25:20 GMT -5
-Nice opening skit, establishes Mcintyres role nicely and interest is built for hawkins' match. -love the pyro effects, neat setup. Logos and name bars are all crisp, like a real TV production -The mid-air LBD pic was real good! Kind of made the victory acceptable, as I was pulling for Curt to win Ending Curt's job in BWR really puts over Mcintrye and the Bates as real bad apples! - Haigha looks sick! But Why is Alex Riley wearing that stupid man costume though?  -new tag champs. They are a force to be reckoned with! Not sure I recognise the title plate, but love uniqueness so all good - Liking the idea of a dark match recap, adds a little extra short but sweet flavour of the show. Oscura Dragon is a neat looking guy (indy wrestler or you invent him?) Wonder what Alex Shelley's deal is... love his mad-max jacket thing too - no wonder adam rose doesn't have massive guns, his lifting form is all wrong like how you captured his attitude and phrases nicely Really bizarre Woods/Haigha moment there... like to see what they get upto... shame Adam Rose doesn't have a big bunny pal of his own, like Woods does... - oh nice one Neville, loved the gauntlet. Pele kick and especially the Red Arrow scenes were posed amazingly. - Oooh, Deep plot with Zayn figuring out Mcintryes evil scheme! Love these mystery dramas and to see where it leads. Good writing too |
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Post by deskjet on Jan 24, 2016 18:22:45 GMT -5
RBW thank you so much for the thorough reply and the compliments. Glad you enjoyed the show:). Oscuro Dragon is a created wrestlers I made up and is actually an idea I borrowed from pic fed member Woods, and I just modified it a bit. I appreciate you checking out the new show! 
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Post by Deleted on Jan 26, 2016 8:06:19 GMT -5
Great show deskjet! I wasn't expecting to see the Bates Brothers jumps ship to Unbreakable, so that was a nice twist. Sami Zayn's going to have a tough time next week with those two. Nice to see Underland have already picked out their next victim. |
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Post by deskjet on Jan 26, 2016 19:24:10 GMT -5
Old Zeke thanks for the reply:) Always appreciated . Love the Aj gif in the sig too
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Post by attitudesback on Jan 28, 2016 15:52:20 GMT -5
Watched this last night, went over it again though just now:
Crisp production as always, making Wix work way better than I ever could!!
Amazing backstage segments - probably my favourite segments of yours
Bates brothers were a cool addition to the Unbreakable roster and I like Zayn being given such an important role even though he doesn't hold the 'main title'. Well done on that behalf.
Enjoyed this man, as always. Looking forward to where you take it next. Underland is a fascinating angle that is really getting me gripped too. Nice work.
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Post by deskjet on Jan 28, 2016 16:49:05 GMT -5
Watched this last night, went over it again though just now: Crisp production as always, making Wix work way better than I ever could!! Amazing backstage segments - probably my favourite segments of yours Bates brothers were a cool addition to the Unbreakable roster and I like Zayn being given such an important role even though he doesn't hold the 'main title'. Well done on that behalf. Enjoyed this man, as always. Looking forward to where you take it next. Underland is a fascinating angle that is really getting me gripped too. Nice work. thanks so much for the feedback. Always appreciated. Glad you liked the backstage segments. I like doing them because they help fill out the show a bit more and I thought they set the stage better for things on this episode. Always nice to see people are interested in the UNDERLAND storyline still, especially my fellow co-winner:). Read ur post on the discussion. Take the break imo, if ya need it. You deserve it:) |
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Post by Wicked on Jan 30, 2016 3:35:45 GMT -5
-Interesting with Drew and cocky heel Crimson. -Great production. I popped hard for the bates coming out. This handicapped match was cool and I like the even more of a cross over with Talent. The Bates in your fed remind me of some good ol Genext from UGW. I like the LDB name instead of the Dooms Day Device. -I wish we could've seen Dragon vs. Hideo. Interesting with Shelley. -Adam Rose against the Underland seems dope. -Neville's gaunlet was cool. Cool to see Rory, Dango and Mahal in a fed. I liked the end bit with Sami. - Sami has some balls. Good end to the show with Sami as the dominant face. Overall a sweet show with cool storylines. I am excited for the next one. |
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Post by deskjet on Feb 1, 2016 21:30:52 GMT -5
-Interesting with Drew and cocky heel Crimson. -Great production. I popped hard for the bates coming out. This handicapped match was cool and I like the even more of a cross over with Talent. The Bates in your fed remind me of some good ol Genext from UGW. I like the LDB name instead of the Dooms Day Device. -I wish we could've seen Dragon vs. Hideo. Interesting with Shelley. -Adam Rose against the Underland seems dope. -Neville's gaunlet was cool. Cool to see Rory, Dango and Mahal in a fed. I liked the end bit with Sami. - Sami has some balls. Good end to the show with Sami as the dominant face. Overall a sweet show with cool storylines. I am excited for the next one. thanks so much for the reply! Glad you enjoyed it. Ugw? Genext? Ha someone remembers:). Gotta tease that dragon vs Itami ya know? Really appreciate the support man:) |
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Post by Wicked on Feb 1, 2016 21:34:07 GMT -5
-Interesting with Drew and cocky heel Crimson. -Great production. I popped hard for the bates coming out. This handicapped match was cool and I like the even more of a cross over with Talent. The Bates in your fed remind me of some good ol Genext from UGW. I like the LDB name instead of the Dooms Day Device. -I wish we could've seen Dragon vs. Hideo. Interesting with Shelley. -Adam Rose against the Underland seems dope. -Neville's gaunlet was cool. Cool to see Rory, Dango and Mahal in a fed. I liked the end bit with Sami. - Sami has some balls. Good end to the show with Sami as the dominant face. Overall a sweet show with cool storylines. I am excited for the next one. thanks so much for the reply! Glad you enjoyed it. Ugw? Genext? Ha someone remembers:). Gotta tease that dragon vs Itami ya know? Really appreciate the support man:) How could I forget.  Part of me wishes we could see that fed carry on. |
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Post by deskjet on Feb 1, 2016 21:39:54 GMT -5
Wicked thanks so much for the reply! Glad you enjoyed it. Ugw? Genext? Ha someone remembers:). Gotta tease that dragon vs Itami ya know? Really appreciate the support man:) How could I forget. Part of me wishes we could see that fed carry on. Maybe someone will make a cameo appearance in BWR some day |
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Post by slowgraffiti on Feb 6, 2016 17:55:26 GMT -5
I'm really digging the synergy you and Titch have between your two brands - Unbreakable feels like the NXT to BWR's WWE and being the obviously huge NXT fan I am, I can definitely get into that.
Love to see some crossover between the two character wise but it's the unique characters you've made that really help to make you stand out. It's always been one of your talents, and characters like Underland and Oscuro Dragon are so interesting since they can't be found anywhere else. Hopefully you can keep cranking these out, you've been on a great run recently!
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Post by deskjet on Feb 7, 2016 9:40:12 GMT -5
I'm really digging the synergy you and Titch have between your two brands - Unbreakable feels like the NXT to BWR's WWE and being the obviously huge NXT fan I am, I can definitely get into that. Love to see some crossover between the two character wise but it's the unique characters you've made that really help to make you stand out. It's always been one of your talents, and characters like Underland and Oscuro Dragon are so interesting since they can't be found anywhere else. Hopefully you can keep cranking these out, you've been on a great run recently! Thank you so much for the reply:). I will take the NXT comparison as a HUGE compliment. I only hope that I can get it to half that level of greatness. It's been a lot of fun working with Titch and as always I appreciate him letting me tag along on his already great product. I'm glad you enjoy and recognize the uniqueness I try to bring to the show. Pic fedding really satisfies that drive to stretch the creative bug and I enjoy thinking of new characters, storylines, etc. It's a challenge I enjoy. Thank you for commenting that I have a talent in that regard. It means a lot:) Ya know...In all my past pic fed incarnations, I'm not sure I ever made it to 10 episodes before bailing lol. With more money just plopped down on this hobby, I think making 10 episodes, and more, is an attainable goal:) Thanks again for checking out the show! |
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Post by Woods on Mar 4, 2016 17:28:02 GMT -5
Loved the starting segment in the office with Drew and Crimson.
Awesome seeing the bates brothers on Unbreakable! love the little union jack touch ups you added to them, makes them stand out. Hawkins got crushed!
Nice flashback to the dark match, found the Adam Rose segment hilarious until Underland came in, then things got creepy!
The Gauntlet main event featuring Neville was a great way to show case his talent. And shows that he has a very promising future on the BWR brand as a whole.
Can see a few differences appearing between the Bates Brothers next week in the US title match. Looking forward to it!
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Mar 7, 2016 11:49:02 GMT -5
I like where you are taking this, i like that you and T work together, but seperate The opening match was solid, nice to see you bring the Bates over, and them as tag champs should be fun, hopefully we see some more teams debut soon Nice to see Hideo debut Your main event was great, sweet red arrow Great stuff deskjet |
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Post by kc on Mar 20, 2016 16:34:41 GMT -5
bwr unbreakable #7
i really like this fed and how you affiliate yourself with titch's bwr. opening contest was a fun squash that furthered storylines. i for sure see ryder and hawkins making a return somewhere down the line and getting revenge on the bates brothers. i like how you are incorporating the same stars as titch as well. you guys are really expanding this pic fed in ways i've never seen before. striker and carlito make a fine announce team. the arena set up is cool as well. the layout of the show can be a little slow at times being done in flash on wix, but that doesn't take away from the presentation of the show. i liked the dark match highlights. awesome to have video itami/kenta win his debut match. i'm curious about what shelley is doing with the briefcase. some great storylines developing dj. bates being awarded the tag titles makes perfect sense due to mcintyre being a mega heel gm. you really have some good divisions set up (main being north american title, us title, and now tag titles.) i liked the figamanaia rewind as well. i still need to check out those matches. thanks for reminding me haha. that creepy bunny guy (reminds me of donnie darko) is a very unique addition to this fed. mcintyre is really stacking the deck on this show, eh? haha. neville, from shatter, making his debut and runs the gauntlet. i absolutely love at times incorporating the same roster as titch. woah, didn't expect fandango to go down from just a moonsault. who's next? one of the mccalister's! where's his quilt? haha. well, that was quick. nice touch of realism with the mid-match commercial break. once again, good presentation all around. mahal with a chair! neville is making quite a splash (no pun) in his debut. nice red arrow pose. nice debut for neville. it was a glorified squash, but it got him over as a legit star here on unbreakable. zayn/neville feud over the us title would make me happy. really, really happy. detective sami zayn on the case here. i still see zayn retaining the belt next week with help from neville or something like that. i like these 1-3 match shows filled with great segments, dj. i'll have to go back and catch up on your shows. i liked this episode. sometimes the whole evil gm 'stacking the deck' can be a little much, but i like what your doing with unbreakable. can't wait to check out episode eight.
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Post by deskjet on Mar 21, 2016 11:03:22 GMT -5
Woods and The Champ is Here! thank you for the reply. Always appreciated:) kc Thank you for the reply. Glad you're enjoying what titch and I are trying to do. It's been fun. Great seeing you around the board! Hope to see you back more frequently. Always appreciate your encouraging words:)
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