Post by Deleted on Mar 24, 2016 13:53:05 GMT -5
all star wrestling - episode 2
- first time checking out this fed. the classics bring something different to the board, which i like. the raw entrance stage seems weird, especially since the show isn't called raw or anything. maybe invest in some cut outs to put over the logo? cool arena set up though.
jyd/andre
andre's head scan looks freaky. some weird poses going on. did andre attempt a dive and jyd moved? it looked like he just randomly fell off the apron. nice ref pinfall audio bites. eh i knew what you were going for in this squash, jyd had minimal offense, but i feel like it could've been executed a tad bit better. jimmy hart as your owner/gm is cool. savage to the rescue. i like andre backing off. for sure see andre/savage rematch eventually. nice post match angle to jumpstart the show.
- heenan managing the 4 horseman is awesome. the pic you used for the interview w/the titles look really good. the defense against demolition should be good. i see the champs retaining via some HEEL tactics.
irs/warrior
it might be just me, but i feel like the superstars' entrances take too long. maybe cut each frame down by a second. its' pre-match promo really brought me back. nice touch. i like the switch up having warrior as the u.s. champ rather than ic. same thing, i know but i like it. i would've liked to see its get a little bit more offense in, but a glorified squash for warrior. sid justice with a chair! nice sneak attack. their match at summer slam should be great.
- you gotta have mean gene in a classics fed haha. yup, savage pretty much confirms the title match. i wouldn't mind seeing andre with a manager.
hardcore invitational
weapons galore! i like the rules and nice switching it up just giving a random title shot rather than adding an entire hardcore division. nice dialogue in the cactus pre-match promo. big bossman and cactus starting things off! kudos on giving actual entrance themes as well. some of your posing, match flow is kinda difficult to follow. i like the countdown clock. big splash through the table! woah, razor ramon going extreme. haha razor just chilling. lol at the close up of the low blow on razor. bossman is dead. papa shango! i'm digging the participants in this match thus far. shango/bossman are feuding, correct? bossman... still selling that table spot haha. shango is a weird mo'fo - cool continuing their stuff within the match though. part of me wishes hennan was on commentary, i like him managing too. ddp! this match is perfect for all of your mid-carders. ddp coming out with a bag (pun~!), cool superkicking the chair into razor. woah, that countdown came fast. big daddy cool! is diesel cool with razor? nice actually having pinfall attempts in this chaotic match. nasty jackknife power bomb spot to ddp. haha nice fire extinguisher effect. looks like its 2-on-1 for cactus. diamond cutter! that's it! i like ddp stealing the victory. i feel like there wasn't enough time for selling/recovery on ddp's part after the powerbomb to the floor. i like that he won though. the favorite was for sure cactus, and there were times i thought he would outlast the gauntlet and be the eventual winner. nice rebound win for ddp, since he missed out on a shot at the u.s. title. perhaps he will end up getting his shot next week? i don't think he'll walk away with the strap though.
- got enough tables for this contract signing? haha. again, good banter between both men. the realistic dialogue is such a great element in this fed. flair rejects the handshake. WHAT A HEEL. WHOO. nice ending to the show, a contract signing executed very well.
i really enjoyed this show. cannot wait for episode 3 and summerslam. i liked the squash matches to elevate superstars/feuds, and really stayed true to the 'classic' wrestling format. awesome show, jamie. you have some nice feuds going and i like the mixture of old school classics along with some 90's era stars (nash, razor, ddp, etc...)
Thanks for the detailed reply! I love it when a viewer gives me feedback on everything, it gives me a clearer direction of where to take things in the future. A few of the things you suggested I improve on have been done for Episode 3. I'm so pleased with the reaction to ASW, I can't even describe it.