Deco
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Post by Deco on Jun 3, 2021 17:03:10 GMT -5
First attempt at my own Pic Fed after being inspired by the countless many hours I've spent during the lockdown's watching so many awesome ones.
Appreciate anyone that wants to check it out. All comments and feedback welcome.
If I'm not already subbed to people on YT, let me know and I'll sub! sub back would also be cool.
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Tomoblivion
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Post by Tomoblivion on Jun 6, 2021 8:59:36 GMT -5
Hey! Cool to see a new face on here. First off, I gotta say, I loved your intro and I really liked the shots of the wrestlers, in it. Look really clever.
Good idea, with a tournament, you can't wrong starting off with one of them, I like the sound effects, makes it unique! Your matches were real good, I enjoyed watching them and I like the backround music, I love your logo, for your first attempt, this was brilliant. I was very impressed. I liked the pacing of your show and the segments were good, it was building a lot of story for future episodes. Really good attempt, I loved it!
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Deco
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Post by Deco on Jun 26, 2021 13:55:01 GMT -5
Hey! Cool to see a new face on here. First off, I gotta say, I loved your intro and I really liked the shots of the wrestlers, in it. Look really clever. Good idea, with a tournament, you can't wrong starting off with one of them, I like the sound effects, makes it unique! Your matches were real good, I enjoyed watching them and I like the backround music, I love your logo, for your first attempt, this was brilliant. I was very impressed. I liked the pacing of your show and the segments were good, it was building a lot of story for future episodes. Really good attempt, I loved it! Wow, thank you so much man. I really appreciate the feedback and support  |
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Tomoblivion
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Post by Tomoblivion on Jun 28, 2021 10:30:18 GMT -5
Hey! Cool to see a new face on here. First off, I gotta say, I loved your intro and I really liked the shots of the wrestlers, in it. Look really clever. Good idea, with a tournament, you can't wrong starting off with one of them, I like the sound effects, makes it unique! Your matches were real good, I enjoyed watching them and I like the backround music, I love your logo, for your first attempt, this was brilliant. I was very impressed. I liked the pacing of your show and the segments were good, it was building a lot of story for future episodes. Really good attempt, I loved it! Wow, thank you so much man. I really appreciate the feedback and support Looking forward to episode 2! |
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Post by wolvenbear on Jul 14, 2021 13:05:03 GMT -5
All right, I'll comment as I go. I feel you take waaaay too long on entrances. Your average entrance seems to take about 30 seconds. That really makes the show drag. This will be my major criticism, as I see it happens every match. In a 16 minute show, it's either serious filler, or time you could do something else.
Jeff Hardy v AJ was solid. You do a decent job on capturing a match with still frames.
I don't like Luke Harper. So, my bias against him makes me incapable of being fair to any angle with him.
New Day v the Era is a fun match. Surprised WWE never did it. I have no idea why Generation Me/Young Bucks came out. Considering you are on episode one, run ins can't have any build up. There should be something done with that.
I despise th music you picked for the matches. It grates seriously. I'd prefer silence than that loop.
Bryant v Shinseki was great booking. Fun back and forth. Again, I am confused as to why AJ and the Good Brothers came out, and then left without doing anything.
While the idea of Punk v Rollins is good, the promo had me scratching my head. First, who is Rollins in your fed? Why would he matter to the putting on of the show? Why would Punk come out of retirement to "shut him up", when there would be no reason to know he would make his messiah speech? The whole promo made very little sense.
Three solid matches that were fun to watch, and which the very "announcing" of perked my ears. A few pacing and minor issues don't take away from that. Seriously work through that angle in your head between Rollins and Punk before you do episode two though. Overall, 4/5.
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Post by RBW on Sept 25, 2021 19:49:39 GMT -5
Great production quality love the entrance stage and the lights solid Roster!! great Aj vs jeff - I'd just make sure the 3 count was more obvious, (like the ref hand going down for 3, and maybe a bell ring sound??) but I think the viewer knows what's up, so only a small opinion from me there Brody lee promo was goooood, and boy oh boy I love that back alley style, really suits his gritty character!! fun tag, and a dream match! nice respect at the end, happy vibes another dream match, Bryan vs Nakamura - really liked the BG music in this one, and great sportsmanship after a solid 5-STar win - and the fans applause helps add to that good feel ahah great way Punk shutting up the whining SETH - sets up a goood match for the future Really great first show, what a solid debut!! |
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Deco
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Post by Deco on Dec 4, 2021 15:03:54 GMT -5
So thanks to everyone that commented, offered feedback or responded to the first show. Honestly, I didn't expect anyone to check it out - so the fact people did, that's pretty awesome. The downside is - I didn't see a lot of this feedback previously, so I have already done the second episode which I'll post below, and I'll definitely take on board the feedback going forward for the next one. As is clear, I'm very raw and new to all this, still learning and figuring things out. Tried a couple of new things for this episode, and I'll gauge the reaction. Appreciate anyone that takes the time to check it out, and offer their thoughts! Thank you. (PS. I'm unsure if I was meant to be post this as a separate thread but seemed to make more sense posting it in the same one) |
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Post by Deco on Dec 9, 2021 17:11:50 GMT -5
Also, here's an extra random video for anyone really bored haha!
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Tomoblivion
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Post by Tomoblivion on Dec 14, 2021 16:22:28 GMT -5
Sweet match! I loved the end spot!
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Deco
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Post by Deco on Dec 29, 2021 17:39:03 GMT -5
Sweet match! I loved the end spot! Thanks man! Appreciate it |
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Post by Tomoblivion on Dec 29, 2021 21:31:55 GMT -5
Sweet match! I loved the end spot! Thanks man! Appreciate it I've subscribed to ya channel! |
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Deco
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Post by Deco on Apr 26, 2022 19:49:21 GMT -5
Here's my latest episode! DARK episode one.
Going to use DARK as like an additional hour to showcase some different people and matches.
Appreciate anyone that wants to check it out.
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Tomoblivion
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Post by Tomoblivion on Apr 28, 2022 13:40:22 GMT -5
Wow! Loved every minute of it! Awesome, awesome work mate! The matches were top notch, and the photo effects, as well the sounds effect, were kick ass!!! Looking forward to Episode 2! I'm very impressed! Keep it up friend! |
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Post by D Rock on May 3, 2022 15:11:18 GMT -5
I watched most of the Ciampa/Hardy match. Your work is really well done and the transitions were smooth. Great work!
Also, switching out Jeff's hands stood out in a positive way.
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Deco
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Post by Deco on Feb 23, 2023 12:58:42 GMT -5
Really appreciate the thoughts and feedback, thank you. I'm doing this with my little cousin, and it's all for him really so it's really nice to see people share their thoughts and enjoy it Thank you! Here's the latest episode for anyone interested. |
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