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Post by ljs on Jan 8, 2008 11:19:46 GMT -5
Yes, America-English Connection Wrestlingis here with First impressions. www.freewebs.com/aecw-fiReplies please  (Also AECW is posted first on the picfd zone  ) |
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Jan 8, 2008 11:26:14 GMT -5
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Post by ljs on Jan 8, 2008 11:28:49 GMT -5
woops, thanks man. I'll sort that out now.
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Post by greenjack1992 on Jan 8, 2008 13:37:39 GMT -5
If I'm honest with you, I don't like it. It was very difficult to get into the flow of the show, I don't know what it was. Sorry mate.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2008 15:33:58 GMT -5
This is my first review, so bare with me.
Commentary: ***
Promos: **
Poses: ****
Camera: ***
Story: ****
Overall: 16 out of 25
Summary: There was a lot of grammar errors on the commentary which cut into your score. The promos were kinda lack luster in my opinion, you need something more concrete to get into a fight over. You had some really great poses in the show and I know sometimes the camera was supposed to be blurred to show "speed" but other times it was just blurry. When it comes to story it seems like you have some idea of where it's going this show will hopefully build to something. I wouldn't mind reading more of these shows in the future.
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Post by thetaker13 on Jan 8, 2008 16:56:41 GMT -5
work on your poses
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Post by Villa on Jan 8, 2008 21:37:46 GMT -5
*Thumbs down* Work on everything, sorry
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Post by ljs on Jan 9, 2008 11:19:25 GMT -5
Ok, thanks for the Comments. I'll take it into consideration. |
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Post by ayoterror1rcwcorp on Jan 9, 2008 13:17:42 GMT -5
U didnt even introduce the show or commentators, lol, needs work though
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Post by Deleted on Jan 11, 2008 22:01:46 GMT -5
Yeah! Dude, really needs some work!
But you could get it straight when time comes or while making new episodes everytime, that's will take those bugs away!
Try copying some of the PIc Fed's style or even real feds! That would work!
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Post by ljs on Jan 14, 2008 12:10:08 GMT -5
Yeah, it will get better. TBH I shoulod have noticed when the commentary was getting easy  |
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Post by Dyamez on Jan 14, 2008 12:15:50 GMT -5
It's ok for a first show, i remember mine only having one match and like boogey said, just continue the shopw to fix those bugs. Some constructive criticisms: _use a tripod to avoid blurry pix -a desktop lamp would help illuminate your area instead of using flash -the storylines i think are solid, just make sure you reflect that in the pics and i bet you AECW will be on the map. -whatever anyone says, just have fun and continue your fed, you can never go wrong if your working on your show based on what you love doing. Looking forward to your next show |
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