Neverfail Nao
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dunnolol
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Post by Neverfail Nao on Feb 23, 2008 18:20:19 GMT -5
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Feb 23, 2008 19:06:22 GMT -5
looks good so far love you CS figures
I'll edit later i promise OK so here i go. I'm just going to give you an overview of what i thought and saw. I thought this was pretty good for a first try. there are alot of things that need tweaking, but alot of things that are good. first off i think the face that you jumped right into things with a match was really good. you didn't take like five segments to explain whats going on. but the downside of that is it feels like you've had shows b4 this so i was a bit lost. The only things i would suggest for your shows are better length, better poses (I'm not one to talk about that) and just all around better quality. I enjoyed watching the show, but some of the camera angles were a bit so so. But great job for your first attempt. oh and 1 more thing. try and make an arena. it would be so much better that way. great show and keep doing your best. good luck
wwefan617=)
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Post by thetaker13 on Feb 24, 2008 9:10:41 GMT -5
quick advice get a scsa not a gymni for him edit later
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Neverfail Nao
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dunnolol
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Post by Neverfail Nao on Feb 24, 2008 10:05:26 GMT -5
quick advice get a scsa not a gymni for him edit later It's quick custom, and I use it 'til I get a SCSA, believe me, I'm not using it for fun. But thank's already for the replies!
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Post by hCo.Bro™ [brandon_lee] on Feb 28, 2008 1:05:04 GMT -5
Gotta give you major points for doing a fed...Not so sure just a rumble for the first show was the best move especially since ~SPOILER~ no one really won. Commentary could use some work, Bruno's comments at the begining came off more lame than funny =/...The arena isnt that bad, but I would try to professional-ize it later on...Other than the commentary, my biggest irk (and you may not be able to help it) was the fig choice, me, Im not a fan of mixing different types of figs, ex. DA RVD and TNA figs...like I said its my opinion but its better to use DA's mixed if you want to show height difference like Taker, Kane, Nash....Many may disagree about it...Over all wasnt half bad, like I mentioned above I give you points for atleast trying...Keep up the work and hope we see more from you!
I wouldnt mind trying to do a banner for you if you'd like =)
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Neverfail Nao
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dunnolol
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Post by Neverfail Nao on Feb 28, 2008 7:12:08 GMT -5
Thank you all for your comments! I'll try to improve. I'm aware of the fact that my "setup", is indeed just a "setup", not a decent arena. That's because my room is quite small, so And the camera angles might be weird at some instances, but that's because, like I said, my room is very small, so I don't have that much space to move around while filming. The length, well, it is short. I mean just one match. But don't worry, it was only the opening. Like a test, to see on what to improve. The first show, wich is coming soon *winkwink*, is going to be of "normal" length. I was thinking about four matches or so. About mixing the figs, well, I know the cons(bad sides?), the scale's don't match, but I'm trying to buy more RA styled figs from now on. So...I hope to see more comments soon.
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Post by theswizzer on Mar 3, 2008 21:56:58 GMT -5
bruto was hilarious! 10/10!
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Post by greenjack1992 on Mar 5, 2008 13:51:08 GMT -5
I really liked this! I'm looking forward to seeing more of NCW, Strauss should have won!
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Post by ayoterror1rcwcorp on Mar 8, 2008 12:38:23 GMT -5
I luved it, i went to watch/read it again and none of the pics were working though anyway 9.5/10 hope to see more soon
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Neverfail Nao
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dunnolol
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Post by Neverfail Nao on Mar 8, 2008 17:33:41 GMT -5
@ Ayo, the pics worked for me. Maybe your computer blocked the page, or just didn't feel like uploading? Well anyway, thank you all for your encouraging comments. You will be seeing more of me here at the pic fedding boards, whether you like it or not
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Post by ayoterror1rcwcorp on Mar 9, 2008 10:45:19 GMT -5
O yeah its working for me agian now
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Post by The Dude on Mar 9, 2008 13:55:40 GMT -5
It was kind of hard to follow. If you slowed down a little bit you could perfect it. Halfway thru it looks like you possibly got a new camera and started using string.
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Neverfail Nao
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dunnolol
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Post by Neverfail Nao on Mar 9, 2008 14:21:24 GMT -5
Well, about that. I didn't get a new camera, I filmed the other stuff at night, and the rest of it by day, so daylight makes a huge difference. But you were right about the string part :S I couldn't find any the day I filmed the beginning, but I found some the next day.
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