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Post by jonesy12345 on May 2, 2007 18:15:17 GMT -5
Thank you for noticing. No one ever replys to my animations. Karma for you.
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Post by jonesy12345 on May 2, 2007 23:09:54 GMT -5
New! Please R+R, A lot of time are put into these animations. The least you could do is leave a small reply.
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Post by kakajan on May 3, 2007 2:38:15 GMT -5
Tna:sorry bout not repling earlier.Aniamtion is floaty and the reactions have gotten worse.Defently not your best 6/10
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Post by bubblyworld on May 3, 2007 10:24:44 GMT -5
TNA: Smoothness: It is a little choppy, but nothing too noticeable. Good job on this point. 7/10.
Movement: Movement's a little stiff when he flips, and the jump looks a little weak so it looks floaty. Needs a bit of work. 5/10.
Reactions: The blue sticks reaction is fine in my opinion, just the red stick needs work as it seems very stiff. 6/10
Overall: A good animation, definately better than most of the animations you see around the Beginners Thread. Overall mark is 6/10.
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Post by bumpmachine on May 3, 2007 14:34:13 GMT -5
want to be drafted...
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Post by bubblyworld on May 4, 2007 8:14:38 GMT -5
Bumpmachine: Smoothness: It's incredibly smooth, especially in the slow motion part. Not much I can say. 10/10!
Movement: Very good, just it looks a little odd in mid-jump for some reason. 9/10.
Reactions: Good reactions, could be a little better in my opinion though. 9/10.
Overall: To be honest, I'm surprised you're still in the Beginners Thread. Incredible animation, period. Overall mark is 9.3!
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ThunderStruck
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Post by ThunderStruck on May 4, 2007 19:03:04 GMT -5
want to be drafted... drafted
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Post by kakajan on May 5, 2007 1:11:01 GMT -5
want to be drafted... drafted ] Congrats on being drafted.Now can an veteran pleases check out my animation.
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Post by bumpmachine on May 5, 2007 1:28:20 GMT -5
thx Thunder
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Post by ★Mr. Korn★ on May 5, 2007 3:12:35 GMT -5
Congrats Bumpmachine
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Post by ★Mr. Korn★ on May 5, 2007 5:35:55 GMT -5
The flip b4 the hurricanrana sux, but i think all the rests good.
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Post by drew200711 on May 5, 2007 11:58:35 GMT -5
First ani I `ve posted but I've made lots so plz draft me
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Post by drew200711 on May 5, 2007 12:02:00 GMT -5
another plz draft me
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Post by ratedrsuperstars on May 5, 2007 12:34:17 GMT -5
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No Gimmick Needed™
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little superstar! also known as slater07.
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on May 5, 2007 13:23:56 GMT -5
TNA:very nice, smooth bit of a better reaction would have been a 10 but coz of that 9/10 BM:well done on being drafted 50:getting better but still very stiff drew: you are no where near getting drafted,way too stiff and the mic one is CRA.P with a capital C. HBF:very nice, shame about the table has holes this thread is gettin big
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Post by drew200711 on May 5, 2007 13:40:01 GMT -5
once again another one plz draft me and give me advice to make my anis better and I'll take them to heart and respect the vets so plz draft me I want to become a great animator. [ftp][/ftp]
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No Gimmick Needed™
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on May 5, 2007 13:52:08 GMT -5
impact driver i really like the ducking, dont like the punch, like the accual driver, dont like the reaction
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No Gimmick Needed™
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on May 5, 2007 13:55:21 GMT -5
drew: why does laying guy move?you need to work on the mat and support quite smooth but he lands all wrong
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Post by kakajan on May 5, 2007 17:28:17 GMT -5
once again another one plz draft me and give me advice to make my anis better and I'll take them to heart and respect the vets so plz draft me I want to become a great animator. [ftp][/ftp] You are far from being drafted.To become a great animator starts in the B-thread cause thats where you learn all the basics and improve. As for the animation it is very stiff and floaty so i sugest adding maybe 20 more frames to make it smoother.Its also very choppy so i sugest to see how the wrestlers do it in real life and get realistic movements.4/10 HBF:Its close to being draft worthy in my opinion.Just work on reactions, maybe add a mat bounce and fix up the table break.8/10 5o ft taller.You should try mo basic moves first (eg pedigree) rather than moves like a flipping "rana".work on stiffness and floatyness(not sure if thats even a word.5.5/10 Slater:First things first you shouldnt bash him even if it was a small comment cause thats goin to make him want to quit and we could lose a next great animator. animation = working on running and reactions. Pickup is oh so effortless and very stiff.6/10 Heres a new move its a modified Skeela Driver.
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on May 6, 2007 5:55:15 GMT -5
my last impact driver for a bit. going to look for another move to do
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