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Post by jakksfoshizzle on Dec 27, 2006 21:51:54 GMT -5
Eek, its very choppy. I'd like to see you retry it when you get better. 4/10.
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Post by CF9™ on Dec 27, 2006 21:53:47 GMT -5
Eek, its very choppy. I'd like to see you retry it when you get better. 4/10. thanks for all the replies guys
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Post by CF9™ on Dec 27, 2006 22:14:59 GMT -5
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Post by somguy on Dec 27, 2006 22:26:44 GMT -5
Rate and Reply please
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Post by CF9™ on Dec 27, 2006 22:44:04 GMT -5
Rate and Reply please rate mine and i'll rate urs
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Post by bubblyworld on Dec 27, 2006 23:37:23 GMT -5
"The One" Cenafan9: I like your shooting star press animation as its one of my favourite wrestling moves. Fairly smooth, just need to work on reactions and movements a bit. 5/10. Your pile driver animation is quite choppy in some places, and needs a bit of work of the lifting up, falling and reactions. 4/10. Cryptic: The backflipper flips around too fast, and there is barely any reaction from the guy on the ground at all. The person who falls off the turnbuckle is quite choppy. Work on reactions and smoothness. I give it a 4/10. I've got two animations here: Swanton Bomb: Second Swanton Bomb: Please Rate and Reply.
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Post by somguy on Dec 28, 2006 2:22:50 GMT -5
"The One" Cenafan9: I like your shooting star press animation as its one of my favourite wrestling moves. Fairly smooth, just need to work on reactions and movements a bit. 5/10. Your pile driver animation is quite choppy in some places, and needs a bit of work of the lifting up, falling and reactions. 4/10. Cryptic: The backflipper flips around too fast, and there is barely any reaction from the guy on the ground at all. The person who falls off the turnbuckle is quite choppy. Work on reactions and smoothness. I give it a 4/10. I've got two animations here: Swanton Bomb: Second Swanton Bomb: Please Rate and Reply. The first one is good but i can't see the dude on the floor because of the background..
and the second one...Um well movement of the ladder would of been good.
But 6/10
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Post by bumpmachine on Dec 28, 2006 5:01:01 GMT -5
plz r8 i'll be draft^^
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Post by bubblyworld on Dec 28, 2006 5:13:31 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply Cryptic.
Bumpmachine: I like it as it's a shooting star press. It's very smooth, good movements. The only problem I see with it is both the sticks bounce when the one lands the move but the ropes stay perfectly still? I give it an 8/10.
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Post by bumpmachine on Dec 28, 2006 5:24:04 GMT -5
added rope bounce
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Post by bubblyworld on Dec 28, 2006 6:45:11 GMT -5
Bumpmachine: I can't see anything wrong with it now. Pretty much flawless. I'm only giving it a 9.5/10 because I dislike the way the turnbuckle changes colour sometimes. My first attempt at my finisher, the Bubble Burster: My second attempt: I know how to resize animations in .gif format now so my future animations will be bigger and easier to see. Rate mine and I'll rate yours!
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Post by subwayboy on Dec 29, 2006 9:00:16 GMT -5
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Post by bubblyworld on Dec 29, 2006 11:20:48 GMT -5
The movements are a bit fast and choppy, but you've got the moves down. I rate it 5/10.
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Post by pero on Dec 29, 2006 11:24:52 GMT -5
Awesome Bomb, Im new too, and there is always one piece of advice people like Daz and Zach Zero give me; i'll share it with you too: Try Simple Moves. The moves you are doing are too hard for a begginner. Try Running, Swanton Bombs (Great way to get smoothness down) or try a Pedigree or something.
One of the Main Reasons your Animations are choppy and stiff is because you aren't smooth enough in Pivot, achieving smoothness can be attained by doing simple moves.
No! Im not bashing you, just simply stating an Opinion.
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Post by subwayboy on Dec 29, 2006 13:42:29 GMT -5
Thanks for the replies
Thanks bubbyworld for the sticks.
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Post by albn on Dec 29, 2006 20:38:18 GMT -5
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Post by subwayboy on Dec 29, 2006 21:19:19 GMT -5
Please reply.
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Post by bubblyworld on Dec 30, 2006 1:08:39 GMT -5
PayPahBoii: Your first animation was flawless, just needs a bit more impact when he hits the ground. 9/10 for that one! Your second animation was very good as well, just it seems like theres something wrong with it. 8/10!
3 6 Mafia: Your animation was quite choppy, needs work on the movements. Try simpler moves and work your way up to hard moves, rather than try hard ones right away and they come out bad. 5/10.
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Copey666
Mid-Carder
NOT THE ENGLISH AVERAGE!
Joined on: Apr 24, 2006 11:05:05 GMT -5
Posts: 130
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Post by Copey666 on Dec 30, 2006 8:34:13 GMT -5
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Post by taruntikkoo on Dec 30, 2006 11:49:58 GMT -5
Hey fellas. My first: I know its small but I didn't know how to resize, I do now My second: Please R+R. A Few queries: How do I make it faster? When I save it as a .gif, I put the Frame Delay to 1 and that's the fastest but still its slow . Would more frames help? One thing, how do I make it look like he's actually wrestling in the ring, i.e. behind the ropes? Also, if I want to make my own stick men, I can't make them in photoshop can I? By the way, the ring and stickmen are not mine, someone else made it on another forum (he said it was free to use). I'm thinking about making my one but I've run into a problem: me . I'm a lazy bastard
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