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Post by subwayboy on Jan 22, 2007 21:57:43 GMT -5
I have one, but thanks. I just thought it would be better for a botch.
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Post by Daz on Jan 23, 2007 4:50:02 GMT -5
MUAAAHHHHHH! ME IS A BACK BOOOOYYYY!!!!! Reply to mine and me reply to you!! ! jump is pretty bad, very stiff and the way he begins to uncoil and then decides to botch and re-tuck in is just plain bad. the reactions are too quick, use more frames for them (and the ani all around really) and make the stk sink into the mat before bouncing up because at the moment you have this weird 'glancing' effect.
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Post by kakajan on Jan 23, 2007 5:38:35 GMT -5
as daz said very stiff and choppy.You should aslo have the stks inside the rope
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Post by psychokangaroo on Jan 23, 2007 10:49:58 GMT -5
R+R added an other cool ending for the moon thingi.
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Post by Andrew on Jan 23, 2007 13:31:08 GMT -5
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Post by jonesy12345 on Jan 23, 2007 20:26:22 GMT -5
timeout- Nice job with this and and the flow is pretty nice, but I love the run and into the Spinebuster! 6/10.
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Post by Daz on Jan 24, 2007 4:07:20 GMT -5
timeout- Nice job with this and and the flow is pretty nice, but I love the run and into the Spinebuster! 6/10. get a new bg, one that wasn't saved as gif . jpeg. the quality is extremely screwed up which gives the whole ani a bad feel. pm me if you want me to make you one. i liked the idea for the ani although it isn't very well excited. the jump starts well for like the first 2 frames. then it just stops. use more, about 4 for the bend and 3 for the spring back up. and make the stk get a little height instead of going directly across, right now it looks floaty. it's also very stiff, don;t be afraid to bend the legs and the back joints, you'll get a much better look in the long run. when the purple stk catches the green stk his arms stay in the same position, think realism here, make sure you move the stks arms as if he's catching the opposing stk. maybe add him falling to a knee as if he can't take the weight before hitting the powerbomb. also don't keep the stk stationery for that amount of time, it looks very unnatural, when you start moving the stk keep moving it. maybe add the purple stk stepping forward before catching the green stk. right now he just pauses and it just has this very odd look to it. the reactions are ok for what they are, again very stiff. move the joints a lot more, however on the bright side you didn't get the glancing thing that a lot of 'noobs' get. overall it can be an ok ani, you've got a lot of work to do to get it up to a 6 or 7 rating but i see some potential. keep working at it dude.
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Post by o0firestorm0o on Jan 24, 2007 12:46:39 GMT -5
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Post by jonesy12345 on Jan 24, 2007 20:07:27 GMT -5
SABU!: Like it guys?
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Post by psychokangaroo on Jan 25, 2007 1:43:44 GMT -5
R+R added an other cool ending for the moon thingi. is it so hard to replay?
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Post by pero on Jan 25, 2007 5:02:50 GMT -5
Didn't you read the "No re-posting" Animations rule?
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Post by Daz on Jan 25, 2007 10:32:11 GMT -5
technically he didn't, he quoted.
and all of them are fast stiff and choppy. slow them down, use more frames and bend the joints more.
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Post by jonesy12345 on Jan 25, 2007 15:38:12 GMT -5
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Post by ThunderStruck on Jan 25, 2007 18:59:24 GMT -5
come on, at least try to move the legs running. You need a lot more frames, and take your time.
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Post by bik100 on Jan 25, 2007 20:21:04 GMT -5
Yea I need a Bg real bad and pivot 3.Can Someone Pm me some links for Pivot 3. Please and Thank You
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Post by jonesy12345 on Jan 25, 2007 21:55:53 GMT -5
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Post by Daz on Jan 26, 2007 3:29:12 GMT -5
bend the stks back more, work on arm movements. use more frames and at least try to do something for the reactions.
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Post by Andrew on Jan 26, 2007 16:21:54 GMT -5
Gosh thanks for all the replyz guys
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Post by Lemmy on Jan 26, 2007 19:42:13 GMT -5
Yea I need a Bg real bad and pivot 3.Can Someone Pm me some links for Pivot 3. Please and Thank You I'm not making fun of the ani but you need more frmaes added between movements or it can become jumpy, like yours. And if you need a background for pivot just pm me i can make some good ones i think
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Post by pero on Jan 26, 2007 20:36:12 GMT -5
My first time animating in about a Month, Im so ing happy with my Latest, I find it to be my best ever.
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