No Gimmick Needed™
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little superstar! also known as slater07.
Joined on: Jan 28, 2007 13:02:18 GMT -5
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on May 9, 2007 10:12:40 GMT -5
well done to kakajan from being drafted
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Post by drew200711 on May 9, 2007 16:28:48 GMT -5
how come my back rounds have bad coloring
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Post by xtreme101 on May 9, 2007 16:29:15 GMT -5
don't double post
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Post by drew200711 on May 9, 2007 17:17:47 GMT -5
I just made this one and probaly my best so I go into training so if someone can help me wit my skills it would be very influencal to me so I `ll be back but new style and new moves start now so help me out plz
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Post by drew200711 on May 9, 2007 18:27:00 GMT -5
new style plz rate and reply thanx
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★Mr. Korn★
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Post by ★Mr. Korn★ on May 10, 2007 1:25:22 GMT -5
Theyre still stiff as crapDrew, And why does your green guy look constipated. REally stiff choppy, and REally bad flow. /2/10
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ThunderStruck
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Post by ThunderStruck on May 10, 2007 6:31:36 GMT -5
Why do you keep doing the same move? Kakajan: Your anis are a bit choppy, maybe put the speed to 17-21. Aniwise, 8/10 TNA: The jump is effortless, and its a bit stiff and floaty. It lacks impact, too. 7/10 I'd like to seee more from you, however you're not drafted yet, keep working at it. You definetly need a better reaction its the most important part of the ani, and you can start by adding 4-5 more frames to the end of that ani
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No Gimmick Needed™
Main Eventer
little superstar! also known as slater07.
Joined on: Jan 28, 2007 13:02:18 GMT -5
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on May 10, 2007 11:41:49 GMT -5
sorry,stupid ps3 ive deleted it now
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Post by ratedrsuperstars on May 10, 2007 13:27:26 GMT -5
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No Gimmick Needed™
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little superstar! also known as slater07.
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on May 10, 2007 13:45:42 GMT -5
hbf-very nice no real problems but imo i would have done the acual flip a tad earlier but thats just me. 9/10
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No Gimmick Needed™
Main Eventer
little superstar! also known as slater07.
Joined on: Jan 28, 2007 13:02:18 GMT -5
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on May 10, 2007 13:56:08 GMT -5
drew tbh i really like the phenix(sp?) but you really need to work on reaction. 6/10
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Post by dxcena on May 10, 2007 14:07:16 GMT -5
My newest R+R
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Post by drew200711 on May 10, 2007 19:35:52 GMT -5
these are my newest few so reply plz I like this one but I admit the reaction to the ssp is kinda I think this 1 is pretty smooth but the table break was.....eh
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Post by copkilla on May 11, 2007 14:30:55 GMT -5
Here is my newest it's a pedigree R+R please ;D
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No Gimmick Needed™
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little superstar! also known as slater07.
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on May 12, 2007 4:00:01 GMT -5
drew you are getting better but just add more frames into them and add some reaction. c-dog very good, not to keen on the table break but its very smooth all round
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Post by drew200711 on May 12, 2007 6:53:21 GMT -5
drew you are getting better but just add more frames into them and add some reaction. thanx,since I've made more I've learned that the reacton is very important to a good ani so i'll work on that
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Post by drew200711 on May 12, 2007 8:40:35 GMT -5
My two newest made these yesterday
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No Gimmick Needed™
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little superstar! also known as slater07.
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on May 12, 2007 10:48:15 GMT -5
drew- on the first one I think the walking, the jump, the flip are all very good. I think the bit were he gets up is very celver but not to good( thats why not many people do it). The end isn't that good, he gets up a bit stiff and stays in the same position, the punch isn't great IMO I would have had him just swing at him, the fall to the ground I would have had him going forward and you also have a reaction which makes the stick look alive if you get what im saying and round off the ani. the second is good again, the punches are very good,the double hand chokeslam ok, the pick up is smooth but I would have have him just go BANG right at his feet and also the reaction I would have him reach to his neck instead of his head . for both I would give 8/10 And C-Dog i would join but your the only one on rambo
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Post by drew200711 on May 12, 2007 11:23:34 GMT -5
I made these a couple of minutes ago pretty good right Angel's Wings Sunset flip powerbomb rom the ladder
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No Gimmick Needed™
Main Eventer
little superstar! also known as slater07.
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on May 12, 2007 15:04:14 GMT -5
drew-the angel wings isn't good, floaty, he stands on the rope table break isn't good at all sunset flip is alot better, great punches, i would have pulled his head down, good jump but don't like the arms, going over is smooth don't like his legs going behind the ladder as he's just gone over it so would smack his legs on it, reaction is ok lol at the head bounce
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