Revvie®
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 4, 2006 15:28:47 GMT -5
Added a topic of roleplay tips from my own personal experience, if anyone wants to give a look over. Two things, both completely seperate. 1. While most of what I consider as a true "monologue" is just my personal opinion, I think you should take out that it's boring, or at least put an asterisk next to it. To me, there's no better roleplay then when someone's gimmick/feud/angle comes together, the blow off is about to happen, and the RP is in a monologue. Now, if you're talking about people who just do monologues every single week, I could see where you're coming from. I could do a monlogue against any opponent any time; it'd be no problem really. However, keep in mind majority of it would just be "I'm gonna beat you" in a roundabout way (which, lets be honest, that's the majority of them anyways). But to say monologues in general are boring? They're not. 2. What's the stance on how much we're supposed to mention our opponent(s) in a RP? Is this the type of fed where every roleplay is supposed to be intricated into our match, or can a roleplay have nothing to do with other characters and more or less just be about whatever my character is doing or what? Just kind of wanted to know. first of all I will make the modification you suggested, also whether you are doing a roleplay where you talk about your match and thats all you do, or you incorporate characters, the discussion with the characters should involve your match to some extent. I mean you dont have to have to have 3 paragraphs but it should be addressed atleast and make sense with the over all roleplay if you get my drift? Revvie  |
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Post by CBT on Nov 4, 2006 15:33:20 GMT -5
Yo my name's no longer "Austopsy" I am a face, but now I'm the "Natural Champion" CJR or the "King of Combat" CJR. You can pick either. Nice job though man, that must take some time to do. Now onto reading the card FINNAAALLLY. Yep. I'm really happy with the movement. I also did some tweaking the roster section, if interested check it out. I'm off to sleep. Thanks for the heads up man, I caught the face part, but not that you changed the sub-name. Does it add to your character? because 'the autopsy' seemed like it was a neccessary part of your name. not sure if the king of combat is. I mean, take Obo's for example. His can or can't be implied. Its a matter of choice, like.. "The Phenomenal" AJ Styles. While others are needed.. like Tha CBT.  I think you can get I'm saying. As for not noticing the obvious, when I talked with Shadow and put some matches together for the card, he revised very little. But one was EBR vs. Kurt Burton.. I thought, alright, both get a match, or whatever, this is a new start... Totally stupid to the fact, those 2 were opposing tag teams/factions. |
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Post by CBT on Nov 4, 2006 15:36:37 GMT -5
Added a topic of roleplay tips from my own personal experience, if anyone wants to give a look over. Two things, both completely seperate. 1. While most of what I consider as a true "monologue" is just my personal opinion, I think you should take out that it's boring, or at least put an asterisk next to it. To me, there's no better roleplay then when someone's gimmick/feud/angle comes together, the blow off is about to happen, and the RP is in a monologue. Now, if you're talking about people who just do monologues every single week, I could see where you're coming from. I could do a monlogue against any opponent any time; it'd be no problem really. However, keep in mind majority of it would just be "I'm gonna beat you" in a roundabout way (which, lets be honest, that's the majority of them anyways). But to say monologues in general are boring? They're not. 2. What's the stance on how much we're supposed to mention our opponent(s) in a RP? Is this the type of fed where every roleplay is supposed to be intricated into our match, or can a roleplay have nothing to do with other characters and more or less just be about whatever my character is doing or what? Just kind of wanted to know. Just now seeing this, gotta give you props man. Your dead on. I miss the days where people with more experience, and overall success. Helped out those that needed it, with more then just a reply to their RPs. Glad some people don't mind going old school.  |
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Revvie®
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 4, 2006 15:38:15 GMT -5
does that sound better to you? and yea i was refering to week after week rping for the most part, but you are dead on about the feud blow out rp issue.  |
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Revvie®
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 4, 2006 15:47:38 GMT -5
also the roleplay tips are basically for new ppl and such, more of an overview, alot of things you learn with time.
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Post by sonstuds on Nov 4, 2006 15:52:32 GMT -5
As for not noticing the obvious, when I talked with Shadow and put some matches together for the card, he revised very little. But one was EBR vs. Kurt Burton.. I thought, alright, both get a match, or whatever, this is a new start... Totally stupid to the fact, those 2 were opposing tag teams/factions. How did it not make sense? I thought it made a lot of sense, especially considering the Anointed just faced the Revolution two (WFWF) weeks ago. |
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Revvie®
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 4, 2006 15:54:11 GMT -5
As for not noticing the obvious, when I talked with Shadow and put some matches together for the card, he revised very little. But one was EBR vs. Kurt Burton.. I thought, alright, both get a match, or whatever, this is a new start... Totally stupid to the fact, those 2 were opposing tag teams/factions. How did it not make sense? I thought it made a lot of sense, especially considering the Anointed just faced the Revolution two (WFWF) weeks ago. See I thought so too, i think CBT is sometimes brain dead, but yea, thats all speculation right now |
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Yukio Blaze
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Post by Yukio Blaze on Nov 4, 2006 15:55:01 GMT -5
I told Shadow this and I'm not mad about or anything, but on the last Odium I faced McGurk (and lost due to Obo pulling a Makassar Screwjob ) and now I face McGurk this week. Now this is ironic |
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Post by therealdealbookr on Nov 4, 2006 18:34:49 GMT -5
CBT doesn't matter, I was just pointing it out. I just scratched my whole page of RP, since I thought it was forced and I also wanted to try the first person view/story telling type of RP, especially after reading Revvie's new post roleplay tips.
I'm 'bout to read Reckless' RP, since he is my opponent.
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Post by Thunder on Nov 4, 2006 18:39:34 GMT -5
RP's up.
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Post by CBT on Nov 4, 2006 20:20:08 GMT -5
How did it not make sense? I thought it made a lot of sense, especially considering the Anointed just faced the Revolution two (WFWF) weeks ago. See I thought so too, i think CBT is sometimes brain dead, but yea, thats all speculation right now  you both.  I was more or less saying. The match wasn't bad, but I totally overlooked the fact Anointed just faced Revolution in a tag match.. I looked at it from a singles stand-point, not remembering the tag match. Reiterating what I say and using it against me is a bad thing, a very bad thing. Not to mention, its not very nice. |
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Post by Yukio Blaze on Nov 4, 2006 20:23:43 GMT -5
CBT 'bout to bus' a cap in a ass
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Revvie®
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 4, 2006 22:46:38 GMT -5
See I thought so too, i think CBT is sometimes brain dead, but yea, thats all speculation right now you both. I was more or less saying. The match wasn't bad, but I totally overlooked the fact Anointed just faced Revolution in a tag match.. I looked at it from a singles stand-point, not remembering the tag match. Reiterating what I say and using it against me is a bad thing, a very bad thing. Not to mention, its not very nice. you know I was just messing about |
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Post by Calvin on Nov 4, 2006 23:09:38 GMT -5
I just realized that with the exception of the odd post....CBT an dRev have the majority of all the posts in here!
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Revvie®
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 4, 2006 23:13:17 GMT -5
Thread Posters
Total Posts: 1,154
User # of Posts
CBT 182
Obo 100
Yukio Blaze 77
Migsy loves CBT 72
Shroom 70
The Top Gun: Justin Tyme 60
Calvin:Member of the Anointed 59
Reverend Shadow 58
xkaliburr 54
Kyzer 50
sonstuds 48
SomethingMore 44
"The Amazainic" Alex Sean 38
electricenigma 33
Thunder 32
Tater Loves Reverend Shadow 25
The Replacement: Mike McGurk 19
ICW 17
Shane 14
Methodcobra 12
Lunatic 11
©-§hields™: Silverstein fan 11
bartman 11
ZMaster 10
"The Animal" Immune 8
The Real Deal-RIP Rocky 8
Master of Destruction 7
Gana 5
talkingtoast821 4
geoff creeden. 4
cenaisraw 2
megan 2
hebtheeagle 2
Mark 2
sakukoivu 2
Boricua Hitman:est.1987 1
even with this we are now just tied, but i think CBT needs to lay off he has enough for a few ppl.
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Post by ICW on Nov 4, 2006 23:14:24 GMT -5
I left right when things change around here...
<3 me
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Post by CBT on Nov 5, 2006 0:34:18 GMT -5
You know, I'm seriously gonna kill the 1st born, of whoever re-posts that post count shit. Am I somewhat of a post whore? yes Do I have a life? yes Does the definition of having time on your hands, posting stuff like that? Damn right. So in other words. feel free to update that with my next 182 posts.  |
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Post by veronicaaaahhhh on Nov 5, 2006 2:45:37 GMT -5
I call "South Makassar Screwjob" HELL ING YEAH!  Here's my match for Odium: Kurt Burton VS The Hacker VS Saku
Burton throws a shot towards Saku as the Hacker reaches the ring. Saku and Burton exchange shots as the Hacker takes them both down with a mean clothesline. The hacker takes Burton and sends him into the ropes. Burton explodes back, The hacker awaits him, but Burton doges over and Saku cracks the Hacker down with a swinging DDT and motions for the cover.
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2… Burton breaks it and locks Saku inside the Feedback, but the Hacker nails Burton with a superkick- Burton rolls out of the ring. The Hacker takes Saku, but Saku nudges back with an elbow across the throat. Saku motions for the German suplex, the Hacker blocks it and sends Saku down with a snapmare; Saku bounces back and the Hacker takes him down with a sitout powerbomb. The Hacker raises his arms to the crowd, but Burton clips him down with an enziguri. Burton sends the Hacker into turnbuckle with a slingshot suplex, but the Hacker saves himself by leaping on the ropes. Burton leaps into Hacker, hooks him into a reverse headlock, and leaps back down; driving his knee forward, he sends the hacker through a modified variant of the backbreaker. The Hacker wriggles over the mat; Burton is met by Saku who drives him down with a rolling spinebuster. Saku goes for the cover.
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2… The Hacker intercepts the three count with an axe handle across Saku’s back side. The Hacker sends a stomp across Saku’s face and raises him by the hair. The Hacker nails Saku in the chest with a stiff chop, but Saku recovers and returns the favor with a shot of his own. Saku and The hacker lock into a tie-up. Trying to gain the upper hand, the tie-up leads both men around the ring, before both men draw away. Burton returns and sends a shot into the Hacker’s jaw; the Hacker returns with a shot of his own; Saku punches Burton. It’s a triangle shots; Hacker-Saku-Burton, Saku-Burton-Hacker, Burton-Saku- Hacker. Burton kicks the Hacker in the midsection and throws him out of the ring. Saku takes Burton and throws him out of the ring; crashing over Hacker. Both men take to the outside. Saku climbs up upon the turnbuckle and watches over as Hacker and Burton recover in the outside. Saku turns over and takes air with a moonsault and crashes into Hacker and Burton. Saku grabs the hacker and drives him shoulder first into the steel steps. Burton clips Saku down with a flying clothesline, but Saku motions out of the way; Burton takes the floor. Saku hooks Burton and drives him into the floor with the Finnisher. Saku returns to the ring with Burton and motions for the cover.
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2… Burton reverses the cover with an inside cradle’ goes for the pin.
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Burton grabs the tights.
2… Saku rolls away and returns to the vertical base, but Burton jumps him with a Lou Thez press. Burton sends hard shots over Saku’s face, but The Hacker drags Burton away and locks him inside the Decapitation/Triangle Choke. Burton squirms over to the ropes, but Saku takes Burton’s leg’s and locks him inside a sharpshooter. Burton refuses to tap. Saku releases the hold and motions over to the turnbuckle, but the Hacker takes him down with a running neckbreaker. The referee checks on the Saku, as Burton nails the Hacker with a low blow. Burton takes Hacker and sets him up for an Electric Chair Drop; Burton hoisting Hacker upon his shoulders. Saku leaps into the ropes, springboards, and flies into the Hacker, connects and takes hold of Hackers head; Burton finalizes the electric chair and sends the Hacker into the mat as Saku punishes the Hacker further with a bulldog. Saku dives in for the cover…
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2…Burton breaks the three count. He quickly hooks Saku’s arms and plants him with an Acid Crunch. Saku squirms over the canvass as Burton covers him.
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The Winner: Kurt Burton
Gave Burton the win, seeing as he was the only person to RP. I could've written it better, but I'm trying to reignite the fire when it comes to writing matches. |
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Post by skylerstriker on Nov 5, 2006 7:08:46 GMT -5
Hey everyone. Just introducing myself, I guess.
The name's Adam, or Skyler if you're going by character. I've been fedding since early June and although I've only managed to win one title with Skyler since then, I've gone toe to toe with some infamous people in the fedding world, such as Dark Prophet, Reckless Jack, Jon Michaels, Jack of Blades, and numerous others, and fared well against them all.
I'm here by Yukio's invitation. I guess my present to him next week for bringing me here is beating him in the PWA to make sure I can get my first World Title the following week.
Hope you all enjoy having me around. Peace out.
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Yukio Blaze
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Post by Yukio Blaze on Nov 5, 2006 10:52:53 GMT -5
I call "South Makassar Screwjob" HELL ING YEAH! Glad to know that you like the name. There wont be a screwjob this week |
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