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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Dec 31, 2006 17:25:28 GMT -5
Took place yesterday and I think it turned out pretty good. You'll all see lots of improvement from all of us, especially Corey Crimson. CARD[/U] 1. Shawn Williams VS Corey Crimson #1 Contender for PHW Championship 2. VS Ace Submission Match - PHW Championship Music[/U] 1. Rock The Casbah by Trustcompany 2. Celestial Furnace by Disarmonia Mundi 3. Smothered by Spineshank Enjoy and please leave some feedy. -Sabastian
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Post by jaegermystr37 on Dec 31, 2006 18:20:01 GMT -5
Nice matches. Some good moves.
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Post by Focalin on Dec 31, 2006 19:11:23 GMT -5
Is it me, or is your latest video always you're "Best" and always improve. But, look all the same?
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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Dec 31, 2006 19:17:32 GMT -5
Never said it was my "best" and there's no problem with saying "You'll probably see some improvement".
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Post by Focalin on Dec 31, 2006 19:23:14 GMT -5
okay well 90% of the time you do and in regaurds to the 2nd part of the statement: I don't
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Joey T
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Post by Joey T on Dec 31, 2006 19:30:14 GMT -5
I was really impressed with the first match, I really enjoy your chaining, some moves were a bit sloppy but you guys keep improving every show. second match seemed to drag on for awhile, try to be more selective of your clips, most people don't like long videos. There were some moves you guys tried but didn't turn out too well, like the destroyer, don't put them in unless you absolutly have to. I love your little interesting submissions. I saw improvemnt
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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Dec 31, 2006 20:16:22 GMT -5
Thanks alot for the lengthy reply Tornado. But yeah, the Destroyer was pretty crapty. We've actually tried it at 3 different shows, but each time like botched it big time. But this one we thought was a decent enough attempt to put in the video..but after watching it a few more times realized it was still crapty. We'll keep working on it though. And yeah, maybe for the Chaining I should make the speed of it faster at parts, so it doesn't last so long. Glad you saw some improvement unlike Feanux.
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Post by cubedtwc on Dec 31, 2006 23:26:10 GMT -5
Is it me, or is your latest video always you're "Best" and always improve. But, look all the same? you're = you are.
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Post by cubedtwc on Dec 31, 2006 23:34:32 GMT -5
You guys have to stop doing long chain sequences, or learn how to chain better, that's what bothered me and made it hard to watch for the most part.
In the first match, if someone misses like he did on the swanton, either no sell it, or something, at the very least don't put it in the music video???
Anyways, I didn't see much improvment from your last video
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Post by leeandrews on Jan 1, 2007 3:51:12 GMT -5
Chain to long, and u need to learn how to chain insted of putting so much horrbily placed, wrong grappled chain in the video. NO NEED IN HELL for 3 songs.. One is all you need, LISTEN TO ME DAMNIT.. u always say "ok" then still make it liek 4 songs.
Dont put sloppy **** that looks dumb in.... u tend to wanna do that, only put the best of the match.
DONT show yourself counting the 1 2 3!, Even if u have no reff just fade out and show the winner.. simple.
Umm havent seen improvement sence like ur 3rd base match.
That is all
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Post by el kay are oh on Jan 1, 2007 13:43:54 GMT -5
Ok so, I actually watched the entire thing which is odd for me to do with PHW. Your arm drags are really bad. Chaining took up most of the video, which sucked. Ace I beleive is the best in your fed from this show, thats just me. Ok so this is stupid for me to say but GOD THERE WERE SO MANY KICKS! SO MANY! That is comming from a guy who all he did was kick in his matches. Yeah so slow down on that. 450 looked odd to me, Canadian.. "..."
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Post by el kay are oh on Jan 1, 2007 14:16:12 GMT -5
Oh and please, let me say one thing about your attire..
DRESSING LIKE ANDY, WHOS PROBABLY YOUR FAVORITE BYWER, WILL NOT MAKE YOU LOOK COOL, IT WILL MAKE YOU LOOK LIKE A STALKER AND FREAK. FAG
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Post by leeandrews on Jan 1, 2007 14:18:50 GMT -5
LOL!!! first u basically try to be shawn phoniex.. even go so far to change ur first name to shawn... now that lkro pointed this out....
YOU ARE TRYIN 2 BE ANDY!! LMAO! LMAO! LMAO!
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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Jan 1, 2007 14:32:56 GMT -5
Hmm...not trying to look like anybody. Cool fact. Andy wears a Blue shirt to match up with his Blue UFO's. I wear a Black Shirt and Blue and White Wrist tape.....Only thing is that I wear White Kicks and Blue UFO's....Means nothing. Judging who I'm "Trying to be" based on 2 things in my attire? Pretty stupid right there....and I never tried to look like Pheonix, My colors used to be Black/Red so I just did the obvious to make that work. Just get the off my back.
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Post by leeandrews on Jan 1, 2007 14:39:38 GMT -5
cool facts..... you knew andy wore a blue shirt to match and blah, proves u stalk him or just mark super hardcore for him, only reason we give u crap is cause u think ur in pro wrestler... get off your back??? get off suckin off big BYW names first.
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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Jan 1, 2007 14:58:21 GMT -5
Sucking big BYW names because I wear some of their colors? I think I'm a " ing pro wrestler" because of what? Hmm...I don't have an EGO...like ing LKRO because I wrestled 2 Supershows for 5 minutes and am friends with Andrews, Cubed and Phoenix....Woah....crazy...I wish I was ignorant like him. I honestly wish I knew why you have to keep doing crap like this...I do nothing to you...But you, Phoenix and LKRO just have to keep making fun of me all the time for reasons that you can only put together in your little World.
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Post by el kay are oh on Jan 1, 2007 15:03:56 GMT -5
By the way, I have a name, and it's Joey. Damnit. Dupree, please lock this damn thread before I blow up from Beling being a bitch about everything. And for the record Beling, I've been friends with Phoenix for about a year, how does that make me think I'm cool because I'm friends with him. Lee knows I don't have an ego anymore, and not to be a dick, but he was the one that noticed it the most from me, so shut the up, and start practicing more.
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Post by batistabomb93 on Jan 1, 2007 15:43:21 GMT -5
Well, I figured I'd post before this gets locked.
Anyway, work on your chaining a bit. Watch a few videos of others chaining. I know Shawn Phoenix can chain pretty well. Try to find your most comfortable attire and stick with it. Personally, I never had a set attire because the fed I was in wasn't very serious. Some very creative submissions, I wouldn't have thought of using some. React some more to submissions. The last move in the video you were using your hands only. Try to involve your legs as well. Pretty nice bumps. Work on your armdrags bud. Thats the thing that needs most improvement in this video. Nice choice of music. Improve on your video works a bit. Read some Tutorials on the internet.
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Post by MX5 on Jan 1, 2007 15:47:06 GMT -5
To much chain, and the arm drag in there looked like crap. The chain was repetitive so there wasn't a reason for all of it. There was just to many clips that didn't need to be in there. There were two matches so there was no need for a 9 MINUTE VIDEO.
Some advice from me to everyone in the fed, Get some new attire, its all teh same but different colors be unique and get your own styles
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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Jan 1, 2007 16:38:54 GMT -5
Ok thanks guys, What can I do better to make my arm drags look nicer?
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