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Post by calelovesjoey on Feb 1, 2007 17:30:20 GMT -5
Alright here we go.. + Gear + Opening sequence givnig Jay heel heat + Opening chain sequence - Both Jay and Damien need to make it look like it's more of a struggle/challenge when their chain gets countered. You're doing the "go through the motions" stand. I used to do it too. -Arm drags should be taken by rolling straight forward into a 3/4 roll. You guys are almost barrel-rolling. Again, something I used to do that was wrong and corrected for me by Rickey. Post your right hand on the your opponent's left shoulder when you take the move. It helps you flip correctly and makes the move look tighter. +/- Jay: you give arm drags so close to right. They aren't bad because you have the concept but you should try to be more horizontal with the canvas when you deliver the move. + ...like damien did. haha + Test of strength. GOOD bump, Damien. + Heels sell their hands. Attaboy, Jay. - Tie up in the center of the canvas. + PALM STRIKE! +/- Wheelbarrel armdrag. PRETTY. Again though, Damien try to 3/4 roll rather than barrel roll. - Not a fan of the way that arm drag counter to arm drag looked. Can't put my finger on why. Sorry dudes. + Code Red Headscissors. Wow. Jay even crossed his legs so it looked great. So good, guys. +/- Gorilla Press Slam: Damien, it's probably going to be easier to switch Jay's head and feet around so that you're set up like a normal fireman's carry. Jay, cross your legs so that you aren't so awkward to hoist. Damien's post-move selling was AWESOME. + Great arm work. + Fireman's carry backbreaker. A little slow but still pretty wicked. + Headscissors Facelock to Suplex was SO CRISP. + Loving the combo. -? Did you sell the wrong arm, Damien? + Great STO cut off. + Double stomp was teh brutalz. - Something about Damien choosing to work Jay's legs with his DESTROYED ARM doesn't click too much. KnowwhatImean? + Skye clocking Jay spot. - Skye getting tossed out of the ring. Nobody's fault but his. What the hell?! + SEACREST OUT~! Good job guys. Best TWC match I've seen ever ever. Keep working, guys.
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Post by JCLS on Feb 1, 2007 17:56:19 GMT -5
-Lol sick entrance with the curtain thing. -Not sure what it's called but the head scissors from almost a canadian destroyer position?...Well whatever it is, it looked really cool. Well done. -Nice psycology working on the arm. Like that arm breaker move where you fall on your back with his arm on your knees. -Backbreaker from a DVD position looked nice. -Yeah I don't know my move names, sorry lol. -Ouch, brutal stomp. Must've killed.
What I liked about this match is it didn't have a BYW look to it, in that it wasn't over flashy or hardcore or anything. It was just very nice stuff from start to finish. Nice work.
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Post by cubedtwc on Feb 1, 2007 18:43:13 GMT -5
Alright here we go.. + Gear + Opening sequence givnig Jay heel heat + Opening chain sequence - Both Jay and Damien need to make it look like it's more of a struggle/challenge when their chain gets countered. You're doing the "go through the motions" stand. I used to do it too. -Arm drags should be taken by rolling straight forward into a 3/4 roll. You guys are almost barrel-rolling. Again, something I used to do that was wrong and corrected for me by Rickey. Post your right hand on the your opponent's left shoulder when you take the move. It helps you flip correctly and makes the move look tighter. +/- Jay: you give arm drags so close to right. They aren't bad because you have the concept but you should try to be more horizontal with the canvas when you deliver the move. + ...like damien did. haha + Test of strength. GOOD bump, Damien. + Heels sell their hands. Attaboy, Jay. - Tie up in the center of the canvas. + PALM STRIKE! +/- Wheelbarrel armdrag. PRETTY. Again though, Damien try to 3/4 roll rather than barrel roll. - Not a fan of the way that arm drag counter to arm drag looked. Can't put my finger on why. Sorry dudes. + Code Red Headscissors. Wow. Jay even crossed his legs so it looked great. So good, guys. +/- Gorilla Press Slam: Damien, it's probably going to be easier to switch Jay's head and feet around so that you're set up like a normal fireman's carry. Jay, cross your legs so that you aren't so awkward to hoist. Damien's post-move selling was AWESOME. + Great arm work. + Fireman's carry backbreaker. A little slow but still pretty wicked. + Headscissors Facelock to Suplex was SO CRISP. + Loving the combo. -? Did you sell the wrong arm, Damien? + Great STO cut off. + Double stomp was teh brutalz. - Something about Damien choosing to work Jay's legs with his DESTROYED ARM doesn't click too much. KnowwhatImean? + Skye clocking Jay spot. - Skye getting tossed out of the ring. Nobody's fault but his. What the hell?! + SEACREST OUT~! Good job guys. Best TWC match I've seen ever ever. Keep working, guys. Thanks a lot Cale, Chuey corrected my armdrags too, and Skyes bump was because he hadda hurt ass hahaha But really, thanks for breaking it down
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Post by Spicoli~! on Feb 1, 2007 20:16:32 GMT -5
thanks a ton for breaking that down cale. I'm definately going to work on those armdrag bumps, I honestly never knew you had to do a 3/4 roll out of them. The armdrag to armdrag counter is one that me and Derek Sparks have done alot, but I never me and Jay never really practiced it so it didn't come out as good. I'll hafta watch and see if I actually sold the wrong arm, then smack myself in the head if I did so. Either way though, thanks for going through that for us Cale, really cool to have you helping and showing us the right way to do things
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Post by cubedtwc on Feb 1, 2007 21:06:51 GMT -5
Yeah I rewatched it, you sold the left arm, so I am not too sure, However, I totally screwed up the arm drag you guys are talking about by going in way to slow and kinda "glitching" It didn't come out too well but it'll work. The match was ridiculouslly fun to work.
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Post by Joey T on Feb 1, 2007 21:22:02 GMT -5
okay, so i finally watched this match, and it was good.
i want you both in my pants
thats all
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Post by carnage on Feb 2, 2007 1:27:35 GMT -5
okay, so i finally watched this match, and it was good. i want you both in my pants thats all ^i agree^
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Post by fcwkrypt on Feb 2, 2007 3:47:16 GMT -5
make that 3 of us
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Post by Focalin on Feb 2, 2007 5:04:20 GMT -5
that makes 5 of us.... ...then we can go to math class cause 1 of us ed up counting..now..I'm not pointing ANY fingers
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Post by Deleted on Feb 2, 2007 13:34:32 GMT -5
wow i just like splooged in my pants from this match good job cubed and dupree i love both of you ;D
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Post by Spicoli~! on Feb 2, 2007 13:43:17 GMT -5
thanks most cuddly man in america
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Post by amberlavigne on Feb 2, 2007 21:54:18 GMT -5
code red headscissors was so done by me and zayne in 7 Deadly Sinz 6 like last March, then me and dupree atempted it at 2xw and it failed.....anyways
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Post by cubedtwc on Feb 2, 2007 22:38:05 GMT -5
Yeah I marked out when we did it and when I told zayne he told me that, I cried. We'll do something neater then. And I love you.
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Post by soadmonsterb on Feb 3, 2007 16:46:19 GMT -5
fun
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2007 11:03:44 GMT -5
Critiques: HORRRRIBLE duck downs when dupree goes for the lock up. Looked way to planned. Check it, when you go for something like that, Cubed, you need to be quick with ducking. Don't just duck and walk...that looks dumb. And Dupree go for a lock up like you mean it and when he does duck it, stumble a bit. Nice chaining Arm drags are ok. Try to be quicker with em and make it look like you're tossing your opponent around. Try watching some *cliche* steamboat armdrags and armdrags used in fast paced japanese promotions. You're a small guy so use your speed and momentum to carry the bigger guy over. Dupree your armdrags are pretty good. Only thing I could see is it was a lil light. You should muscled the out of him there. Still looked pretty clean though. *marks* test of strength spot. Done very nicely. Good pyschology useage there. *unmarks*.....what the tie up and weak ass slap? nice wheelbarrel into an armdrag pretty lame doublearmdrag....looked very weak *marks* for the headsciccors spot *unmarks* for the effect used decent arm work. Don't just hold that move in though, wrench it. Double stomp to the arm was nice Still liking the arm work. He's a big guy so take out the arms and it makes it tuff to do the power moves. Lets hope by this point you stick with that same pyschology. aannnnnddd apparently you didnt. Dupree you just had your arm worked on quite a bit...and now you're lifting him like you're superman? BOOOOOO on that part. You shoulda teased the arm being hurt. Try to lift him but then drop him due to his arm being hurt, he goes for a move but you block it and hit him with a fierce kick. Ok so....the arm was worked and used as a filler for the match. Imma just forget the arm was ever worked. nice STO double stomp was sick Powerbomb to a cloverleaf was f'n nice...but thats more of a finishing move IMO. Over all a decent match. You 2 could sue some work with pyschology and making the moves look better. Other than that you guys were good. I see you all improving greatly.
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Post by Spicoli~! on Feb 7, 2007 16:05:06 GMT -5
thanks for all the feedback guys
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