mitch
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Post by mitch on Jul 20, 2007 10:02:54 GMT -5
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Post by bonzoman15 on Jul 20, 2007 10:25:21 GMT -5
oh awesome job. Benoit has an nice reaction, i would have never thought of doing a 450 backflip before. But in pic 12 i don't like how benoits legs are weird.
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Post by brm on Jul 20, 2007 12:11:43 GMT -5
I like the idea behind this, and you did a good job for the most part, but there is one thing that really bothers me. The punch was good, and I like that you went and used string for benoit's reaction. The jump off the ropes was good, but I don't like how Kennedy looks HUGE compared to the ring. Pic 6 is great, and may be the best pic of the sequence, but Pic 7 just kills it. Pic 6 to Pic 7 has just a horrible flow. Kennedy like, FLEW way up in the air for not reason, when his back should be just millimeters above the ladder. It just really throws off the seqeunce. I don't like pic 8 either, with Kennedy just like, frozen stiff in mid air. Work on positions, and making them more realistic. I do really like the reaction from Benoit on impact.
Not a bad sequence, but work on realism.
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Mushroom Stomp
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Post by Mushroom Stomp on Jul 20, 2007 12:47:57 GMT -5
cool pose i liike the punch.it doesnt seem realistic that he could pull that off.and it also looks like he was gonna do a moonsault double stomp in pic 8. but i thought the way he landed on benoit,and benoit has a pretty good reaction as well
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mitch
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Post by mitch on Jul 20, 2007 18:30:51 GMT -5
I like the idea behind this, and you did a good job for the most part, but there is one thing that really bothers me. The punch was good, and I like that you went and used string for benoit's reaction. The jump off the ropes was good, but I don't like how Kennedy looks HUGE compared to the ring. Pic 6 is great, and may be the best pic of the sequence, but Pic 7 just kills it. Pic 6 to Pic 7 has just a horrible flow. Kennedy like, FLEW way up in the air for not reason, when his back should be just millimeters above the ladder. It just really throws off the seqeunce. I don't like pic 8 either, with Kennedy just like, frozen stiff in mid air. Work on positions, and making them more realistic. I do really like the reaction from Benoit on impact. Not a bad sequence, but work on realism. Holy wow. Thanks brm |
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Post by ruckfules123 on Jul 20, 2007 23:24:55 GMT -5
NOT BAD
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Post by ultimatethey on Jul 20, 2007 23:34:28 GMT -5
A pose well done,Kennedy has good positions the only pictures i do not like is picture 1,2,3 the punch is good but i think Kennedy should have a reaction to the punch like he punche's Beniot and kennedy trips a little and gets back up then does the moonsault,Beniot i do not see a problem i think the reaction's are good so i give this pose 9/10
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TM Punk ™
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Post by TM Punk ™ on Jul 21, 2007 1:21:57 GMT -5
it's an awesome pose all together but I dont see kennedy doing a move like that,,... EVER lol
9/10
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