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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Feb 1, 2007 4:57:38 GMT -5
Why do you have Elijah Burke?
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Feb 1, 2007 13:10:12 GMT -5
First/Last warning...
Reply to another diary blah blah or this gets locked blah blah.
It's not that bad a diary, just add more detail to the match results.
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Feb 1, 2007 13:37:49 GMT -5
oh sorry I didn't know we had to reply every time we put something in I thought it was just shows. Thanks for the comment I will reply to a few diaries in a minute It is, but you'd already posted a show.  |
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Post by Stuffs "Thunder" Liger on Feb 1, 2007 13:39:30 GMT -5
You've got a good start.
But there are a few things.
You could use a little more detail in the match results.
And another thing, the idea of using PWInsider isn't neccessarily a bad one... but instead of just coming out and telling us some of the things about your booking, I think going for rumors would be much more interesting.
Instead of "Shawn Michaels vs. the Undertaker at No Way Out", something more along the lines of "The Undertaker is the #1 Contender... but rumors are swirling that someone on the RAW side sees an opportunity and will challenge 'Taker for that spot at No Way Out"
Don't mention Palumbo's name, or that it will be a squash match.. instead, something like "A former WWE Tag Team Champion is making his return to the company and will be in action this week!"
Use a little subtlety to build some intrigue for your shows.
But you're off to a solid start and I'd like to see where you take it.
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Post by pero on Feb 1, 2007 14:20:26 GMT -5
Looks like a pretty good diary you have going here, as Ricky said, you need to add more detail to your shows, and maybe concentrate more on the layout, other than that this is not bad at all, and im looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
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Disappear Here
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Post by Disappear Here on Feb 1, 2007 15:34:24 GMT -5
I really like this diary. You have a good solid roster and some good storylines. Just a bit more details in your shows.
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Post by ROHWorld_Steven on Feb 2, 2007 14:43:17 GMT -5
Quite a good show, this diary is a pretty good one, there's just something missing i can't quite put my finger on, just keep going dude.
Reply to ECW please?
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Post by pero on Feb 2, 2007 18:09:36 GMT -5
Vito/Palumbo? Im just gonna keep my mouth shut, or you'll hate me forever.
Christian Cage vs Daniels? Sure ya don't wanna change the name of this Diary to "Impact"
Other than that, you seem to be doing alright.... I guess i'll read on.
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Post by Mr. PerpetuaLynch Motion on Feb 2, 2007 18:35:52 GMT -5
Ok, let me start off by saying the whole Chavo/Benoit thing is amazing especially with Harry Smith being Benoit's partner. I hope they have these little competition type deals leading up to Wrestlemania where tensions will boil over. The PWInsider thing is interesting though it's been used alot more lately. I'm thinking there has to be a way to spice it up and make it yours but I'm not sure what that is. The match results are great actually, more detailed then your first set of results...
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Post by Stuffs "Thunder" Liger on Feb 3, 2007 0:31:32 GMT -5
I think you've got a lot of options as far as where you could go with this.. and the show was a pretty solid one, except that none of your upper carders wrestled at all, but you advanced some mid-card acts, so that's OK.
Except there were way too many debuts... 7 in one show? That's a little high, and you should've spread them out more.
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ROHWorld_Steven
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Post by ROHWorld_Steven on Feb 3, 2007 10:08:31 GMT -5
Good show, Finlay v Daniels would be a great match IRL. I didn't like Cage losing but i understand why he did and HBK v Taker is turning out to be a good feud, well done.
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Post by BTG Motherpunker on Feb 4, 2007 8:09:15 GMT -5
I hope its Jushin Liger in Benoit's corner.
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Post by pero on Feb 4, 2007 10:45:57 GMT -5
Bet its Jericho....
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Post by pero on Feb 4, 2007 11:01:38 GMT -5
Hmmmm. Should be interesting to see who it actually is; hope you post the show soon.
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Post by pero on Feb 4, 2007 12:49:08 GMT -5
Really glad to see Cappotelli picking up a victory, and YAY I guess Jericho correctly. Someone give me a cookie   anyways dude, was a really good show, your doing well, the Main event, god, I'd kill to see them go at it in a singles match again. |
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Post by pero on Feb 4, 2007 12:54:23 GMT -5
OH MY GOD! HBK vs CHRIS JERICHO - THAT WAS MY FAVEOURITE MANIA MATCH TOO! LOOKING FORWARD TO IT MAN  |
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ROHWorld_Steven
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Post by ROHWorld_Steven on Feb 4, 2007 13:03:32 GMT -5
Loved NWO, great booking, HBK v Taker is priceless and great to see Jericho back in the fold, all in all a great diary, keep up the good work!
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Disappear Here
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Post by Disappear Here on Feb 4, 2007 13:09:22 GMT -5
Great Diary. No Way Out was brilliant. Taker/Michaels=Classic. Great to see Matt Capotelli get a win. Keep it up. Plz reply to my SmackDown! diary
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Feb 4, 2007 17:27:53 GMT -5
Everything here is good, just try typing the matches, EWR results suck ass. Reply to 1993 or get hurt. |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 5, 2007 7:17:53 GMT -5
ok mate i like your diary i can see a great wrestle mania from you your no way out was good pity finlays mtch never made int lol any way ill replay more in a bit got to go out doing a theroy course ok bye bye.
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