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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2007 0:00:13 GMT -5
This is my first ever diary, so i'm not too sure how to start it, so i'll just start it with next week's RAW's last segment. Shane Mcmahon's theme song hits, as he slowly walks to the ring without a single dance move. He snatches a microphone from the ring-bell table, and climbs into the ring. The crowd boo him, as he puts the microphone to his mouth.
Shane Mcmahon: Last week, A tragic accident took place. Last week, I lost the most important being in my life, in the whole world. My million dollar Father, Mr. Mcmahon. Now, you see. Accidents don't just happen. Some idiot is brave enough to blow up my dad. Don't give me any trash about the car being faulty, My dad's limozine is checked by the worlds finest! That idiot will be found, and killed by myself, and The Samoan Bulldozer, Umaga. Or perhaps he wants to play Mr. Tough Guy and show himself. Because whoever you are, has a 2 Million Bounty over you're head!
Just when the crowd go silent, 'Stupify' By Disturbed hits the PA System. Joey Mercury, now known with a new character, Justin Cranney walks onto the ramp with no hair extentions and a new look. He has a microphone equipted, as he goes to speak.
Justin Cranney: 2 Million? Thats nothing. I'm your man, Shane. I blew up Vinny Mac. But I have my reasons. For 5 years now, Vincent has owed me over 5 Million smack-a-roo's. Yes, Behind your back, Shane. He knew it was coming to him, and then. Poof. You can bring Chris Masters onto me. Viscera, Randy Orton. Anyone! Even Umaga. I will kick there *Beep*.
Just then, Umaga waddles onto ther amp, attacking Justin with many vicious right hands. He catches him by the throat, but Justin punches him into the face, before whollaping him over the head with a microphone. He then pushes Umaga off of the ramp, into the electrical source before bringing the microphone back to his face.
Justin Cranney: Thats it? I still haven't got my money though, so Shane. You're Next, *Beep*! Other RAW Results - Lance Cade, Trever Murdoch & Randy Orton def. The Hardyz & Super Crazy - Kenny Dykstra & Johnny Nitro def. Bobby Lashley - King Booker def. John Cena Just something too get Lashley off of the Vince Mcmahon killing angle.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2007 0:24:01 GMT -5
RAW Preveiw
Blood will be shared, Insults will be traded. Shane Mcmahon take on his fathers killer.
Card
Street Fight Shane Mcmahon Vs Justin Cranney
Randy Orton, Trever Murdoch, Lance Cade & King Booker Vs Matt Hardy, Jeff Hardy, John Cena & Bobby Lashley
Santino Marella defends his Inetrcontinental Title againts Carlito
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Post by rkolegendkilla on Jun 14, 2007 2:01:47 GMT -5
Not a fan, so far.
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Post by blackcherry on Jun 14, 2007 3:03:44 GMT -5
a street fight between these two already on Raw?
im with Tom here, you gotta do something amazing with this to keep me reading
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2007 4:39:38 GMT -5
The show kicks off with Maria, backstage with 'Vince's Killer' Justin Cranney. She asks him about his, if any of his future in the World Wrestling Enetrtainment. He responds "Future? Yeah, I think I can make a good career were Vincent failed. Who knows, Wrestling may be the thing for me". She then outro's the interveiwer with, "Santino Marella defends his title, next". Carlito shares a few words with the crowd, talking about how he is going to get, yet another reign of terror with the Intercontinental Title. He is interupted by Santino Marella, who starts the match up quickly by pounding down Carlito. Santino & Carlito brawl until Victoria distracts Santino Marella by climbing onto the apron. Carlito then nails Santino with the Back Stabber, before gaining the 3 Count & The Intercontinental Title. Victoria & Carlito smooch in the ring, as Santino slowly crawls backstage.John Cena is padding up, the WWE Title on shoulder until he is confronted by Triple H. "You got a problem with me?". "John, It isn't long now before I make my Eleventh Reign as the king. Wer've got the King Of The Ring coming up later on this month, and thats when I will make my stand. Next week, The Cerebal Assasin will return to action, and I will smuther your blood all over Mcmahon's dead body as I please". Randy Orton and his team kicked off the match was a boom, Orton smashing Cena over the head with the title. From that point forward, the 'heel' team took heavy advantage, until Cena made the tag to Lashley. Lashley then dominated the whole team, sending them all down with several spears. Orton soon finished off Lashley by making a blindtag during King Booker choking Lashley, who span him around and planted him with the RKO for the pinfall victory. Booker soon swiped Orton with the Book-End, holding up the WWE Championship high, siganlling that he was after the title.Cryme Tyme & Candice Michelle are partying out back, until they are interupted by Kenny Dykstra, Melina & Johnny Nitro. Melina shares a few words at Candice Michelle, before arising her Womens Championship, but soon starts A massive 6-Person brawl. Shane Mcmahon is backstage with Finlay, Umaga & Viscera. He goes over how he killed Vincent Kennedy Mcmahon, and he will have to pay the price. He gives each man a bat, as the scene ends with all 4 men heading to the ring.
Shane Mcmahon, accompinied by Finlay, Umaga & Viscera, all manhandel the life-less Justin Cranney like he's a slab of beef in a meat factory. Battering him down with baseball bats, allowed Shane Mcmahon to litrally sit on the top rope with nothing but a smile. After Justin had been floored, Shane nailed him with a huge Leg Drop, but Justin wasn't done as he kicked out. Shawn Michaels sprinted down to the ring, wearing his Casual shirt & Jeans, and destroyed all 5 opponents, before hitting Shane with a superkick. After Justin locked in the Sharpshooter, Michaels quickly dashed Justin with a superkick, allowing Shane to get the pinfall 3 count. The Heartbreak Kid soon arose Shane's arm into the air, an alliance being made.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2007 4:47:09 GMT -5
RAW Presents: King Of The Ring On Pay-Per-View WWE ChampionshipJohn Cena Vs King BookerKing Of The Ring FinalsKing Of The Ring Semi-FinalsKing Of The Ring Semi-FinalsWill Be Updated As Matches Are Announced.
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 14, 2007 7:06:30 GMT -5
I'm sorry, but this diary is absolutely terrible. It's hard to tell what's just a segment, it took me forever to realize you actually had a match.
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Post by chaz on Jun 14, 2007 7:37:14 GMT -5
Hi Leon.
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Post by Rated R on Jun 14, 2007 9:44:05 GMT -5
This diary is horrible, the layout needs alot of work, i mean how is anyone meant to know who is even in the match. This needs alot of work if it is going to work.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2007 14:43:26 GMT -5
^ You read the preview, dumbass.
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Post by hazuki on Jun 14, 2007 14:44:44 GMT -5
God its Leon again
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Post by Rated R on Jun 14, 2007 14:47:40 GMT -5
Your preview may say what matches are on the card, but the results dont say what is a match and what is a segment. Not everyobdy wants to read the entire card if they dont have much time, so maybe they want to see the result of a certain match. I was just trying to give you some advice.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2007 15:23:48 GMT -5
God its Leon again ?
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Post by hazuki on Jun 14, 2007 15:25:45 GMT -5
God its Leon again ? If your not Leon you just stole his CM Punk Micro then.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2007 16:25:49 GMT -5
Link from source that its his?
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Post by hazuki on Jun 14, 2007 16:30:13 GMT -5
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 14, 2007 18:36:50 GMT -5
Not to mention your backstory writing/shows suck ass.
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Post by duan on Jun 14, 2007 21:18:17 GMT -5
this diary is NOT duaner approved...
Ricky, do your thing, this is becoming spamfest '07 pt.2.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2007 21:49:39 GMT -5
Hazuki, He stole it from me. 1st one is mine, 2nd one is his.
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 15, 2007 7:23:50 GMT -5
FFS, is it REALLY that hard to admit it's you, Leon? God, nobody cares, just fess up to it.
Edit: Honestly, this isn't worth keeping open because all it's going to turn into is more of a spam-fest than it is, and I'm not going to allow it.
Leon, you have my MSN. All you gotta do is admit it's you.
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