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Post by BT ROW's Rockstar on Apr 10, 2008 11:02:08 GMT -5
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Post by DK Almighty on Apr 10, 2008 12:29:29 GMT -5
not bad dont bitch on the super kick lol
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Post by HHH316 on Apr 10, 2008 23:25:43 GMT -5
I loved the sell on the RKO. If you do anymore of these I think you should post them, they are cool to watch.
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Post by [x] TEXACIDE [x] on Apr 11, 2008 2:19:56 GMT -5
Looked good to me, by the way where do you train? I'm a few hours north of Houston.
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Post by NOW that's WRESTLING on Apr 11, 2008 7:13:34 GMT -5
Looks good... but you float like crazy. It was scary.
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Post by BT ROW's Rockstar on Apr 11, 2008 13:11:08 GMT -5
Looked good to me, by the way where do you train? I'm a few hours north of Houston. I train at Booker T's place in downtown Houston. Best facility ive ever seen. |
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Post by GreatJunta36 on Apr 11, 2008 13:42:39 GMT -5
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Post by banting on Apr 11, 2008 14:57:32 GMT -5
Not bad. Just a few things i noticed though,
when selling the wristlock at the begining you sell it as its hurting your shoulder and your slaping your shoulder too say ouch, but if someone legit put you in an wristlock, you'd be pulling at your wrist, so slap your wrist and sell that, adds a little more realism towards the move.
When you hiptoss the guy in the white, make sure that your other arm protects his head and guides him down safely, because atm your putting your arm across his body which can cause problems for your opponent to push off your knee and might injure you or the other wrestler.
that sunset flip was sweet.
The bodyslam was very very nice too.
i won't say anything about the sweet chin music because its quiet obvious what parts need improving lol.
the Rko was good but it would look much better if you front bump that fully, rather than put 1 knee bent if you understand where i'm coming from.
apart from those few things it looked quite solid and neat.
+1
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Post by Kliquid on Apr 11, 2008 16:00:55 GMT -5
Pretty nice stuff. The guy in the white needs to work on his selling...
For you:
- Don't over-sell the smaller moves. The middle-rope legdrop doesn't need the 'ankles over head' sell. I hate when guys - even the perceived 'best in the world' do that sell too often -- it really makes it less impactful. If you do that sell all the time, everyone's going to be bored with it when you finally do it to a BIG impact move like a really violent clothesline or something like that.
- Obviously the superkick sell needs some work. I've always found that putting one hand up to block it is actually just as easy and a lot more believable looking than two.
- The fall on the RKO was brutal. I don't think it'd be bad in real-speed, but when you slow it down, you really almost point out the fact that your head never really came close to the ground.
Pretty good, though. You'll get better with more experience!
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Post by MARK-ISM on Apr 11, 2008 19:11:28 GMT -5
My observations, from a guy with 5+ years experience
- one thing you should work on, is not being so bouncy in the ring
- make sure to protect your opponent at all times, the Air raid Crash & hip toss come to mind
- dont put your hands up so early, it takes away from that arachnid(sp) kick (makes it look bad)
- nice spinning elbow, punches & chops
- your in ring presence was good
- I think the sell on that RKO was good, tbh
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