atm.
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Post by atm. on Jul 25, 2008 15:56:16 GMT -5
 Since the beginning people have wanted the best, well now it's here. New Breed Wrestling delivers hard-hitting wrestling, with the best superstars in the world today. On the first interview, CM Punk made his presence known by interrupting Michael Shane, NBW Owner, and requesting a title shot, only to be caught short by Shelton Benjamin, asking for a match with Punk at the first show. Punk accepted, but as it turns out Punk injured his hand a couple days later. So who is Shelton Benjamin to face? He will accept his challenge? Days later, Mike Mondo was interviewing new signee, AJ Styles, when another new signee walked in, Rob Van Dam. AJ told RVD he was a legend, but washed up and this is the "New Breed", and not for him, asking for a match, RVD accepted as well, but promised to teach AJ a lesson, and Aj Just hoped he could keep up. So here it is, the first episode, please comment in this thread, Thank you all.NBW Show One- nbwfed.proboards104.com/index.cgi?board=firstshow&action=display&thread=3 |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jul 25, 2008 15:58:23 GMT -5
this better be good LOL jk. 1st to reply will edit.EDIT
Very good show man i really enjoyed it. the poses were good and the action was easy to follow. the only thing i would work on is presentation. i know we already talked about this, but i would focus on presentation because right now it is your only flaw. i think i would have liked more build up to the matches, but it is your first show and that is hard to do when you havent had a show yet. i can see the storylines building and i cant wait to see if the RVD/Styles conflict goes somewhere. i really hope it does. Another match between them would be epic. i would also like to reccomend the use of string in some of your poses. i also feel like you need to resize your pics. they just seem a tad too big. try to resize them. ummm what else? oh yeah dont hold the camera too close. at times the pics were hard to make out because you held the camer so close to the figs, but that is a common mistake. good luck man this is a good start. cant wait to see this fed grow =) |
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Deep Shadows
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MXW 6 is here! https://youtu.be/LiDlNuiKmjA
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Post by Deep Shadows on Jul 25, 2008 17:55:11 GMT -5
What I didn't like: - Okay, well I'm already disappointed with the lack of originality..Mick Foley and JBL as commentators. =/ - I can see where you're going with the laptop but it doesn't look very good. I'd say get rid of it and just go with a simple entrance with no video. I think you're going for a indy feel anyway so that's the best way to go. - The commercial breaks are a nice touch but they're not really necessary. - I also noticed that your referee stays in the same spot for most of a match. And he usually looks like he's not even paying attention to what's going on. What I liked: - I kinda dig the way you have your ring flat on the ground. - The logo is cool. It looks like you spent some time making it. - Super Dragon custom.  I also think your pics could be smaller..500 x 400 px would be good. That would also make them faster to load for people with slower/older computers. Even with my computer being really good and really fast with DSL it still takes them a bit to load. I'm sorry if I was hard on you but you def have potential. Take those tips to mind a spend a bit more time with poses and actual "filming" of the show and the next episode should be really good. You should also try to be original..have some original characters or even take real wrestlers and just change them up..name, attire, gimmick, etc. Good luck! |
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Jul 25, 2008 19:50:51 GMT -5
What I didn't like: - Okay, well I'm already disappointed with the lack of originality..Mick Foley and JBL as commentators. =/ - I can see where you're going with the laptop but it doesn't look very good. I'd say get rid of it and just go with a simple entrance with no video. I think you're going for a indy feel anyway so that's the best way to go. - The commercial breaks are a nice touch but they're not really necessary. - I also noticed that your referee stays in the same spot for most of a match. And he usually looks like he's not even paying attention to what's going on. What I liked: - I kinda dig the way you have your ring flat on the ground. - The logo is cool. It looks like you spent some time making it. - Super Dragon custom. I also think your pics could be smaller..500 x 400 px would be good. That would also make them faster to load for people with slower/older computers. Even with my computer being really good and really fast with DSL it still takes them a bit to load. I'm sorry if I was hard on you but you def have potential. Take those tips to mind a spend a bit more time with poses and actual "filming" of the show and the next episode should be really good. You should also try to be original..have some original characters or even take real wrestlers and just change them up..name, attire, gimmick, etc. Good luck! Thanks, yah I dont have a stage so I cant do that. I dont know how to make a custom arena, nor do I have the money for it, I really wish I could do the set up some of you guys do. I use to do smaller pics, but they get blurry, and I thought took away from the detail. The labtop is kinda stupid I guess your right, so I understand, also alotta fed keep their ref in the same place most of the match till the end. I understand, tough love got it. Thanks hopefully I can improve |
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Post by iyfwkidzc on Jul 25, 2008 20:05:02 GMT -5
I just use construction paper, some SAR HIAC parts, and a Sharpie for my stage. lolz.
Oh, and a lot of tape.
I will edit after I finish watching.
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Post by deskjet on Jul 25, 2008 21:39:23 GMT -5
Love the logo and good job with the explaination. LOL at JBL's face...what were you thinking Jakks!!! Love the dragon custom, May I ask where you got it  Very good opening match with good poses, pics, and length. Huh, quick Jericho/JBL match  . LOL @cryme Tyme. RVD vs AJ was an excellent match. Again very good pics, poses, and good match length. The 3 match thing worked well even if the middle match was short. The other two were good length and entertaining. OVerall an excellent debut show. A few things i didnt like was the navigation of pics. It was a new page on my computer each segment, so I had to close the previous ones down. Also the arena, and entrance needs work. Other than that You've got a very promising fed and one that has alot of potential. Keep up the good work |
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Jul 25, 2008 21:50:39 GMT -5
Love the logo and good job with the explaination. LOL at JBL's face...what were you thinking Jakks!!! Love the dragon custom, May I ask where you got it Very good opening match with good poses, pics, and length. Huh, quick Jericho/JBL match . LOL @cryme Tyme. RVD vs AJ was an excellent match. Again very good pics, poses, and good match length. The 3 match thing worked well even if the middle match was short. The other two were good length and entertaining. OVerall an excellent debut show. A few things i didnt like was the navigation of pics. It was a new page on my computer each segment, so I had to close the previous ones down. Also the arena, and entrance needs work. Other than that You've got a very promising fed and one that has alot of potential. Keep up the good work Thanks Deskjet, The Jericho/Shelton match was short for the reason of Shelton being the best, said in a interview with him, and he basiclly got caught completley off guard, theres more to it. I am actully working on a arena and entrance now, as for the direction thats the only way I knew who to do it. As for Dragon, I got him from former member Graver, for like $12 shipped. He was pretty good. |
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Jul 25, 2008 21:54:47 GMT -5
this better be good LOL jk. 1st to reply will edit.EDIT
Very good show man i really enjoyed it. the poses were good and the action was easy to follow. the only thing i would work on is presentation. i know we already talked about this, but i would focus on presentation because right now it is your only flaw. i think i would have liked more build up to the matches, but it is your first show and that is hard to do when you havent had a show yet. i can see the storylines building and i cant wait to see if the RVD/Styles conflict goes somewhere. i really hope it does. Another match between them would be epic. i would also like to reccomend the use of string in some of your poses. i also feel like you need to resize your pics. they just seem a tad too big. try to resize them. ummm what else? oh yeah dont hold the camera too close. at times the pics were hard to make out because you held the camer so close to the figs, but that is a common mistake. good luck man this is a good start. cant wait to see this fed grow =) Thanks man, Im working on a arena as we speak. But yah, RVD and Aj, I am working on an Angle with them too. Next show will be up hopefully early august. I will try to resize pics too. Thanks |
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Cottage Cheese
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Post by Cottage Cheese on Jul 25, 2008 23:15:29 GMT -5
*Will edit later not sure when because of work but I need to get off here for now*
From what I have watched so far poses are good Matches are good the interviews are good but you really really need a arena it would make it so much better.
Nice Super Dragon Custom
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easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Jul 25, 2008 23:54:04 GMT -5
NBW is finally here
Kennedy .....Kennedy he looks like he is ready for Super Dragon.
Pics are a little to close but I still can tell whats going on.
Commentary through out the whole thing is excellent.
Nooo Kennedy looses. Looks like SD is getting the push right out the gate.
Very good poses. I have a feeling you added Daddy V to the roster just to make us jealous that you got him before us.
Man I hope Triple H comes out next show a beats the crap out of V.
Benji, Jericho should be awesome!!!!
WOW THAT WAS WAY TO QUICK
How the hell do you job the Gold Standard like that.
RVD vs AJ is a match of the year candidate!!!!
PELE WAS AWESOME
Finally the Guy who I wanted to win, WINS
BTW I Love that your using the Labtop as a TITANTRON people are hating but they forget that W3E DID THE SAME THING (Best pic fed ever)
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Jul 26, 2008 0:53:14 GMT -5
NBW is finally here Kennedy .....Kennedy he looks like he is ready for Super Dragon. Pics are a little to close but I still can tell whats going on. Commentary through out the whole thing is excellent. Nooo Kennedy looses. Looks like SD is getting the push right out the gate. Very good poses. I have a feeling you added Daddy V to the roster just to make us jealous that you got him before us. Man I hope Triple H comes out next show a beats the crap out of V. Benji, Jericho should be awesome!!!! WOW THAT WAS WAY TO QUICK How the hell do you job the Gold Standard like that. RVD vs AJ is a match of the year candidate!!!! PELE WAS AWESOME Finally the Guy who I wanted to win, WINS BTW I Love that your using the Labtop as a TITANTRON people are hating but they forget that W3E DID THE SAME THING (Best pic fed ever) Thanks Man, I kinda liked the Labtop too, I might try to mix it up so you cant see the buttons. IDK yet tho, Im working on it. lol, Keep them coming people, I want some comments, no matter bad or good I wanna hear your opinions |
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Post by Red Dragon on Jul 26, 2008 3:19:36 GMT -5
That was really good, no offence I didn't expect that, Lol at JBL wearing Bob Ortons gear good first match, cool to see Dragon built up as a newbie no one knows anything about, a great match all the fake finishes kept me on edge, great commentary but Kennedy getting staight up from a curb stomp? WTF! Cool striker promo, would have rathered a full match for Benj/Y2J and the codebreaker looked off, lol at the commercial,cryme tyme promo thing was good but whats up with Shad now being half Lashley and JTG being half Burke?, glad styles wan and some good poses in there to. Overall it was great you write JBL spot on, I'll be looking out for this for now on, keep it up, good luck
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Jul 26, 2008 3:34:23 GMT -5
That was really good, no offence I didn't expect that, Lol at JBL wearing Bob Ortons gear good first match, cool to see Dragon built up as a newbie no one knows anything about, a great match all the fake finishes kept me on edge, great commentary but Kennedy getting staight up from a curb stomp? WTF! Cool striker promo, would have rathered a full match for Benj/Y2J and the codebreaker looked off, lol at the commercial,cryme tyme promo thing was good but whats up with Shad now being half Lashley and JTG being half Burke?, glad styles wan and some good poses in there to. Overall it was great you write JBL spot on, I'll be looking out for this for now on, keep it up, good luck Haha thanks for the comment man, yah Jericho/Benjamin was meant to be short, that doesn't mean its over tho! As for the Cryme Tyme things, the da figure was Taller so I just slapped a head on there, and Burke had the cw body so I just put JTG on there, I kinda like them like that tho. Again thanks, keep them coming please |
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MAtNESS™
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Post by MAtNESS™ on Jul 27, 2008 4:51:39 GMT -5
Awesome My Favorite Fed. NewBreedOfWrestling.  WHAT I LIKED:Superdragon Custom Custom JBL NBW play by play Announcer Attire LOL Cryme Tyme Custom/Fixup WHAT I DIDN't LIKE:Nothing  FAVORITE MATCH/SEGMENT: Match-Benjamin and Y2J Segment-Big V would want to see more stars having debut segments RATE THE SHOW: 9/10 Really awesome show I wish i can post my NBW fed too.but someone used it first and doing a great job :)keep it up im ready for ep.2 PS:Can't Wait to see Vampiro and Charlie Haas debut .tHE ONE. |
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Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Jul 30, 2008 21:16:26 GMT -5
Watching and replying here. Kennedy talking crap  SD! HOLY HELL! Glad Dragon won the match Big Daddy V's Free agent challenge will be amazing. Shelton & Jericho was a good match Cryme Tyme segment was cool Yesh AJ beat RVD Great show man |
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Post by jdash on Jul 31, 2008 20:47:25 GMT -5
Poses were great action was top notch, very good show my friend great first effort well put together.
Cryme time was funny and you hit them right down to the T great job friend
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Teh Joker
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Post by Teh Joker on Jul 31, 2008 21:01:28 GMT -5
and here we.. GO! WHAT I LIKED: the Super Dragon custom WHAT I DIDN't LIKE: the ommercials. FAVORITE MATCH/SEGMENT: Match-Shelton Benjamin vs. Chris Jericho Segment- Big Daddy V segment RATE THE SHOW: (8-9)SMACKDOWN/RAW |
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Aug 1, 2008 1:34:58 GMT -5
Shoutouts! The One: Thanks for replying and I am glad you like NBW. Like I said over pm, in anyway I could help, please help haha, PM me back dude. Ramos: Thanks, I really liked your fed too.  em when they say your customs are not too good, I thought they where fine, and there simple customs for wrestlers. Jdash: Yep, I tried pretty hard on them poses, hopefully I will get a new ring soon so I can make a arena and Impress everyone. Teh Joker: Dude, I cannot wait for FTW, hopefully it will be up soon. Glad to be trading w. you partner and thanks for the comment. |
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Post by Extreme on Aug 1, 2008 11:17:56 GMT -5
Alright here goes....
First match was good had a nice length, liked the ending.
Second I'm guessing is just to hype Jericho?
Third match is was pretty good also, although I think when RVD goes for the 5 Star AJ should more roll out of the way then just bounce up. Seems more realistic.
This definitley has potential to be good, although I think you should get a set arena. Basically get some cardboard and stuff for the background so the focus is clearly on your fed. I really do not like the lap top has an entrance, even just a little walkway would do.
Be consistant with your pics, some were big some were large. For the most part they were alright though. Also take your time to make sure ever pic is the same great quality.
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Post by kc on Aug 1, 2008 21:38:58 GMT -5
I've never seen this fed before, must be your debut? Hopefully you can impress.
Why is Chris Masters just standing there holding two titles in the opening segment? No reasoning behind it, really.
lulz at JBL's shirt. It's Mic Foley, not Mick. A Laptop entrance is the ghetto~ist thing ever in the history of Pic fedding. Super Dragon!? Awesome, I wasn't expecting him to be Kennedy's opponent. Hopefully you know his moveset. Curbstomp~! Wow, this is awfully one sided early on. And Dragon comes away with the victory, Ok. decent match, I'd just work on poses and use string. It makes the entire show better.
Not really a fan of these YouTube videos, Punk's debut should ne nice. Cool little BDV/Matt Striker promo as well. The Free agent challenge should be fun.
The Jericho debut could have been done a lot better. Wow, way to job Shelton. Meh, don't really care for Jericho in this fed. I hope to god he doesn't get pushed all the way to the top and becomes the NBW champion.
Haha, Chilli's shill. Out of all the things you chose to shill, it was Chilli's. Heh. King of the Hill!? Haha, this is getting better and better.
The main event was the MOTN, but that really isn't saying much. Like I said before, the show would have been a lot better with string.
I'll be on the look out for this fed, I'm sure It will improve throughout time. The main thing is the poses.
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