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Post by iyfwkidzc on Jul 27, 2008 0:53:39 GMT -5
A single light brightens a dark, damp alleyway as a silhouette is shown. The light brightens, revealing one Nick Jacobs.
NJ: Hello ladies, gentlemen, shemales, and others. My name is Nick Jacobs. And I shall face that David Schwimmer wannabe named Thug. I must say, he looks uglier than Charles Manson fried to a golden brown on a stick. And when I step in that ring, Thug shall perish. I can hear the dreadful announcers with their pre-pubsecent voices saying "Jacobs wins! Jacobs wins!"
The light burns out as dark laughter fills the alleyway in numerous echoes, leaving total darkness.
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Post by dsk2 on Jul 27, 2008 1:52:51 GMT -5
Is there a way to comment this?
Im sorry.
But dude, look at the guidelines.
This isn't an rp at all.
This is like an intro.
Finish it, please.
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Calvin
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Post by Calvin on Jul 27, 2008 3:19:51 GMT -5
dude.. not only was he late, which he already stated he was.. but why are you telling him what to do?
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Post by sonstuds on Jul 27, 2008 9:55:40 GMT -5
dude.. not only was he late, which he already stated he was.. but why are you telling him what to do? As for the RP at least you showed the effort to put something up, though we're not going to be able to count it.
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Post by dsk2 on Jul 27, 2008 10:42:40 GMT -5
Thats what I meant, I meant, it's not really long at all, at least he put some effort into it. The part he wrote was pretty descriptive, but it's late.. so yeah.
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Post by DTP. on Jul 27, 2008 13:44:41 GMT -5
Yeah, Nicky. You may need work
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D-Rock
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Post by D-Rock on Jul 27, 2008 20:49:01 GMT -5
Just a lil bit of work.
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Post by Swarm on Aug 6, 2008 9:34:40 GMT -5
... You couldn't have spared five minutes before the deadline to write that? Really?
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