GreatOneBNBPro
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Post by GreatOneBNBPro on Aug 20, 2008 19:56:22 GMT -5
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Cottage Cheese
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Post by Cottage Cheese on Aug 20, 2008 20:17:27 GMT -5
Its Better then youre First one its still not very good tho
Poses Are REALLY stiff
I like the Arena If the poses were better the Jeff VS Matt Match would have been good
You need to add more Backstage Segments + Interview segments
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Post by deskjet on Aug 20, 2008 20:34:11 GMT -5
This wasnt too bad of a show. Still gotta work on some of the poses. Didnt seem like alot of build up. Enjoyed the main event. iron the ring  |
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GreatOneBNBPro
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Post by GreatOneBNBPro on Aug 20, 2008 20:35:08 GMT -5
I'm workin on the poses man, its hard without using any string (even for arial shots)
Starting next month show, i'm gonna try to get more interviews/segments to introduce the rest of the roster, the first 2 shows i just was testing out things and getting feuds/champions set.
Just give me some time, this is only the 2nd show i've ever done, so with time, it will get better and better
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Post by deskjet on Aug 20, 2008 21:09:13 GMT -5
I'm workin on the poses man, its hard without using any string (even for arial shots) Starting next month show, i'm gonna try to get more interviews/segments to introduce the rest of the roster, the first 2 shows i just was testing out things and getting feuds/champions set. Just give me some time, this is only the 2nd show i've ever done, so with time, it will get better and better i have no doubt you'll get better. Trust me I'm constantly trying to improve too |
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easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Aug 21, 2008 6:57:45 GMT -5
Good that you made another show lets get too it I guess Jeff vs Matt was  . I hated that Team Canada kinda interfiered but what can you do about that. Still it was okay though. I do kinda like your arena though and I can see some improvement with your poses Kidman vs Hurricane was the vest match of the night!!! Good posing and good commentary, throw in some ladder spots and you got me hooked. Cena vs Boogeyman was also. and CM Punk gave the worst promo I have ever seen in my life. I would have liked to see you kinda build him up the same way WWE did but ohwell. Im glad Cena is kinda doing the Thuganomics deal seeing as I hate the whole overcoming the odds routine. Dude you have waaayyyy to many championships on your show. My suggestion would be to unify the XXX/Hardcore and International title to make it atleast seem a little more prestigous Diesel vs HHH was very enjoyable as well. I think its kinda cool that you paired Diesel and MVP togetheir and it really does work. This match had dare I say Good psychology to it. and I loved the ref bump. Although I was kinda pissed HHH took the powerbomb and still kicked out it was a good PPV. Do i sense a MVP vs HHH fued. That would be awesome. Anyway good PPV. I rate it about a 7.89. It wa a fair effort. Um some final notes. I like the team of Funaki and Raven but I definatly think you need a more established play by play guy in there-maybe Coach or JR or even Vince because the way I see it Raven is good on Color and Funaki is really just there for comic relief. And lastly you need a better referee! |
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