GreatOneBNBPro
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Post by GreatOneBNBPro on Oct 15, 2008 10:13:37 GMT -5
WFR Returns! After 6 months absence off of TV, WFR has been saved....find out who saved it and what plans he has for this company.... www.freewebs.com/wfrnoreturn/replies would be greatly appreciated.....i would really like some input.....good/bad |
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Post by dmallett4 on Oct 15, 2008 11:01:15 GMT -5
just viewed this. it wasnt too bad, considering i havent since anything from you before, although i have a few tips. your storylines seem similar to a lot of WWE's atm, such as jericho feuding with michael, and edge being champion. try and push your own stars, and make your own storylines. also, your poses, are extremely stiff, and the match flow. the opening match was the best of the night, with some nice fluidity. i like austin being commentator, although a lot of lines he said were not realistic. the battle royal was a mess, i didnt understand what was going on, the poses were extremely stiff, and the match was very short. the main event was the same. try to make the match slowly build up, with some big spots at the end. like, michaels hit a superkick to start the match, it just wouldnt happen in real life. and also, i dont like the fact that jericho 'swerved' on his debut. if your going to have a face turn into a heel, slowly build it overtime, not on the debut.
i see some potential here, keep working hard.
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GreatOneBNBPro
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Post by GreatOneBNBPro on Oct 15, 2008 12:59:50 GMT -5
well, i had done 2 PPV's before....but took some time off. This was just a return kinda thing. www.freewebs.com/wrestlingfigrevolutionthe jericho thing wasn't meant to be like the WWE at all...i actually haven't watched wrestling since mania really lol. Jericho was a heel earlier in my fed, which is the whole team canada kinda thing (minus christian who wasnt on the show). was just supposed to be like a re-introduction to the whole team canada thing. i'll work on the poses some more, its tough to do with RA figs, i wish i had all my DA's as they had much more playability. Austin being commentator is tough, he really never did any, so i think i may bring a new commentator in...just make up my own guy so i can say what i want and not have to worry about anything. i'll try to make the next ppv a lot better with longer matches, more fluidity and work on the poses. thanks for taking the time and giving me some real input |
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Teh Joker
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Post by Teh Joker on Oct 15, 2008 22:07:54 GMT -5
What You Liked - the 1/500 title  What you didnt like - poses are a little bit stiff. Favourite part of the show - Jericho helping Edge win. Rating - 3.5 good job man. just practice on them stiff poses |
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Dyamez
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Post by Dyamez on Oct 15, 2008 22:43:31 GMT -5
i must admit the poses were kinda stiff.
SCSA as announcer is ok as long as he gets a partner and he stays in cahracter with what he most likely would say.
I see you have BNB figs, why not use them? they're a lot more poseable.
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Post by hCo.Bro™ [brandon_lee] on Oct 16, 2008 1:40:16 GMT -5
Kind of a mess IMO. I do have to give you credit for putting a show togather though.
Lots of room for improvement here. For a redebut show, it did come off pretty weak. Yeah, you featured two title matches, but there was really no build up for them. IMO its best not to crown your champs in the first show, either preset them or use their vacancy to help build up your first big fueds. Your dialoge needs some improvement. Im not just referring to commentary, which IMO Austin was a horrible choice for commentator. The segments with Heyman and Michaels really did nothing to hype the show. And of course your poses could use some tweaking.
Kennedy vs Kenny was kind of random after finding out that there was going to be a battle royal for the International Championship and that they would face the winner...why not just put them in the dern thing? Kennedy and Tomko just doesnt spark much for me. Im not sure about your roster choice aswell... Atleast the stip for the main event made things interesting, with both men favorites in ladder matches. I have no problem with someone using a fued from t.v. aslong as youre mixing things up so its not the exact samething. I do kind of dig Jericho helping Edge win over Michaels. This could of been really good for a ppv with a few shows to hype it. I know youre probably refering to this as a ppv event or whatever, I wouldnt have gone that route.
Do keep it up. Right now there is nothing that makes your fed stand out.
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tirva
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Post by tirva on Oct 16, 2008 11:15:56 GMT -5
I watched most of the shows and agree with the things written above. The promos were weak. Michaels kicking Funaki was ok but still didn't do much. The poses were much too stiff. keep working at it.
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Post by Hollywood Asia on Oct 16, 2008 20:26:44 GMT -5
much better than the first show imo
Get some better title names though
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Oct 17, 2008 14:21:59 GMT -5
i thought this show was... OK. i can see a lot of potential in this fed though but i think you can do a lot to make it stand out and make it better. first, like everyone else has been saying you need to work on your poses. second, i think you could do a better job at keeping the viewers updated on the story lines and stuff. No offense but i don't remember your last shows at all. they were just not that memorable. try having updates and stuff like that to keep us involved...
what i did like was the pic quality. But I am a bit confused as to why some of your poses were great (sweet chin music pose) and why some of them... not so great. I think you just need to be consistent. i hope you continue to try harder and harder at making your fed even better. good luck man =)
don't give up just keep working. good job and i commend you for contributing to this board. =) |
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Post by GreatOneBNBPro on Oct 18, 2008 17:03:45 GMT -5
thanks for all the input wwefan. i'm tryin with the poses...its just a pain using RA's lol. I may switch over to a BnB fed once i get a hold of series 4 + the havoc ring...as they are much more posable.
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