JL24FPS
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Post by JL24FPS on Nov 1, 2008 13:55:59 GMT -5
First off... I know I don't really have much of a ring... but it's the best I could work with... This isn't the best match ever, trust me, i know. It would help me out alot if you left me some feedback as far as what I need to improve upon... I'm the taller one with the long hair, I'm the face, and My name is The Royal Warrior. The shorter one is Prince, he's the heel. Just let me know what you guys think and help would be greatly appreciated! Let me know what you think about the promo at the beginning as well! Please and thank you!
Anyway... here's the vid:
AND I KNOW I NEED A DIFFERENT NAME BECAUSE IT'S SUPER UNORIGINAL... Just don't give me those types of comments because i've already heard them before! thanks again!
--ThememanXX
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Post by buxtonisgay on Nov 1, 2008 16:42:15 GMT -5
I'm going too try and leave you the best feedback I can without coming off as a dick. It's not going too work, but that's what I'm going for. 1. Kid needs a shirt, consider a singlet or some kind of gear like that. Psh. 2. Summerslam, No. 3. Too young too wrestle, ignore this comment. 4. Props for doing whatever you need too do too have a place too wrestle, consider a base, really easy too set up and not expensive, will help you guys out tons. 5. Match One - Good job showing the heel early, watch videos on here, the chaining on the left was good but it looks awful. Watch ACW videos or something since they're the only ones that seem too post, the chain work should look fluent if you're going too do it. Spoke too soon, the Arm Ringer was left, the headlock was right sided. Again need too work on chain work if you're going too do it, headlock takeover was bleh. Working the left leg was good followed by a terrible some kind of kick. You guys seem too have some of the concepts down it's just kind of .... in progress. ----- Why did he sit down and put a thing on his face for you to kick  Make it make sense, throw him in the corner and sit that mofo down yourself. The FACE low blow'ed you  Followed by a bunch of shots with...what the  is that, a cookie sheet? Need too work on move exectution, making some impact, weak knee drop. Way too many stupid shots with this damn "weapon" ... at least he's hitting your left arm. "5:21" What the was that.....? Weak Chair Shots, Botched RKO shouldn't make the video, Ending was a tapout from the arm work, Appropriate, And good job, I was waiting for you too sell that arm after the GTS. Overall I'd say your biggest problem is all of your stuff looks weak like there is no impact. I'd say you have some of the concepts down pretty well you just need alot of work on excecution. I tried not too be a dick and help, sorry if it didn't sound that way. |
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Post by claytonclayton on Nov 1, 2008 18:25:04 GMT -5
GOD SOO GOOD!
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Post by claytonclayton on Nov 1, 2008 18:25:31 GMT -5
SUMMERSLAM! WHAT A GREAT NAME FOR A SHOW! Awesome "ring" btw. |
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Post by ♦STONE♦(AKA Dirty) on Nov 2, 2008 9:39:17 GMT -5
Please never ever wrestle again.
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Post by claytonclayton on Nov 2, 2008 10:35:14 GMT -5
Woah...no need to be a jerk, dude. They're just starting out.
A-hole.
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JL24FPS
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Post by JL24FPS on Nov 2, 2008 10:57:21 GMT -5
yeah seriously... i clearly asked for some HELP above... no need to be rude...
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Post by claytonclayton on Nov 2, 2008 11:07:08 GMT -5
Yo I watched the insane sagas.
They suck.
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Post by wrenegade on Nov 2, 2008 13:23:16 GMT -5
wow. Lots of not so good in the vid.
First off you guys really gotta learn to bump. There wasnt one bump in the entire vid. If you dont bump, it makes everything look weak, and poorly executed. Bumping is the most important thing in wrestling and the most basic thing. Without it, theres really nothing worth calling wrestling.
The strikes also need a lot of work. I had no idea what you were going for half the time cuz you didnt keep your body tight as you did strikes. Example - Dropkick should be both legs together, and you land flat on your back. Don't flail about as you do moves, or try to brace your falls/bumps - looks weak.
Selling. Where was it? I saw you guys taking moves and getting right back up. That's not how it works. If you attack someone enough times in a part of the body, that part should be shot for pretty much the rest of the match. Make facial expressions, play up to the "Crowd" on how much the move hurt or how much pain the submission inflicts, etc.
Weapons - DO NOT USE WEAPONS UNTIL YOU LEARN HOW TO WRESTLE. Weapons do NOT cover up your lack of ability to wrestle. They make it look worse. You CAN NOT hardcore wrestle or use weapons until you know how to wrestle, bump, sell, pretty much until you have EVERYTHING ELSE down, then MAYBE you can begin to use weapons. But please, dont just hit each other with weapons. Thats just stupid. You have to be much more innovative and imaginative.
Watch wrestling. The Harts (Bret, Owen, Stu), Benoit, Dean Malenko, D-Lo Brown, Mr. Perfect, Val Venis - all great sound all around wrestling guys that are amazing at what they do. Watch how they fall, how they strike, how they play to the crowd, How they lock on submissions, how they SELL the submissions.
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JL24FPS
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Post by JL24FPS on Nov 2, 2008 21:42:54 GMT -5
Yo I watched the insane sagas. They suck. It's actually the "N-SANE Sagas" thank you.... and it's supposed to be us making fun of people who think they are "N-SANE", we aren't actually trying to be Insane... It's just a joke... |
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Post by claytonclayton on Nov 2, 2008 23:47:47 GMT -5
Looks more like you guys trying to imitate Jackass.
Reallllllllll cooooolll....
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Post by JL24FPS on Nov 3, 2008 7:02:02 GMT -5
Looks more like you guys trying to imitate Jackass. Reallllllllll cooooolll.... Nope... we are making fun of people who imitate jackass... thats pretty much what I said before |
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Post by wrenegade on Nov 3, 2008 10:49:05 GMT -5
Looks more like you guys trying to imitate Jackass. Reallllllllll cooooolll.... Nope... we are making fun of people who imitate jackass... thats pretty much what I said before One of if not the stupidest concept I've ever heard of. |
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Post by claytonclayton on Nov 3, 2008 12:14:45 GMT -5
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAX!
I legit lol'd.
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JL24FPS
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Post by JL24FPS on Nov 3, 2008 15:00:42 GMT -5
okay... well it really doesn't matter to me if you watch them and think they are funny or not... that's what you think... and all my friends think they are funny... that's good enough for me... they are supposed to be for fun... we aren't trying to be serious...
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Post by claytonclayton on Nov 3, 2008 15:05:15 GMT -5
Hahahahahahahahahahahahhahahaa!
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