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Post by Almost Like Flacco on Jun 13, 2006 9:53:25 GMT -5
Christian Shields is standing on the 50 yard line of a football field at night. The fields lights are on and you can see the dew on the blades of grass. Shields is in his standard all black apparel and sunglasses. He looks straight up at the sky.
It all started back at House Show 4 when I won my first match in WFWF and began my undefeated streak.
He looks forward.
The streak continued at House Show 5 in the three-way dance when I picked up my second victory. Then, all of a sudden, my momentum was cut short.
He looks down at the ground.
I suffered my first loss at my first Pay-Per-View event, Scars and Stripes, in the battle royal. Of course, nobody really expected me, a rookie, to win it. I was in there with everyone else on the WFWF roster.
He looks forward again.
Tonight, everything will turn a complete 180 degrees in my direction. Round one of the House Show Championship tournament against Baricua Hitman. Him and I have met in the ring before, so I know what to expect from him.
He begins to walk to his right while looking ahead of him.
This championship, this whole tournament is just another hill on my path to the mainstage, the limelight, and the WFWF Championship. Like all the other hills I've encountered, I will rise up and overcome it. All the other entrants in this tournament better beware because Christian Shields is starving, and the only thing that will satisfy this hunger is the WFWF House Show Championship.
The camera stays in place as Shields walks off the field. He gets in his car and drives off screen.
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Post by Kyzer on Jun 13, 2006 10:42:14 GMT -5
The speech was good. I think you could have described the scene more and gone more in depth about your opponent, but you show promise.
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Revvie®
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Somewhere between Reality, and the Absurd
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Post by Revvie® on Jun 13, 2006 23:12:30 GMT -5
I think im going to have to go along with what kyzer said....but i do think as time goes by you will become one of the better rpers...keep it up Rev.
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El Manny of Fresh
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The name is El...as in The.
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Post by El Manny of Fresh on Jun 15, 2006 22:11:47 GMT -5
BTW, not to nit pick or anything, but my name is The Hitman Manny C, not boricuahitman, thats my site name. Good RP, something to work at
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Post by cureforthesickness on Jun 16, 2006 10:59:05 GMT -5
BTW, not to nit pick or anything, but my name is The Hitman Manny C, not boricuahitman, thats my site name. Good RP, something to work at but you just recently changed to Manny C, and considering I had already made a graphic and half the results, that's what you are recognized by for this show
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