Sami Hazard
Main Eventer
I don't answer to a higher power, I am a higher power.
Joined on: Mar 17, 2006 18:27:17 GMT -5
Posts: 3,390
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Post by Sami Hazard on Jul 5, 2006 17:49:44 GMT -5
Spider is in a garage practicing with his metal band as lead singer
Spider(scream/metal singing): Once again... We will dominate Once again... We reunite Once again... two wannabee assf***s will be decimated As I live through this pain, you feel me My pain! My agony! My suffering! F**k you all!
Spider walks away from the mic and starts talking
Spider: You all know the deal with me and O.K.A.M.A. Well to add on, we are actually cousins, I was taken in by his family when my PARENTS PERISHED IN A FIRE! I was 5, he was 7. His parents beat us. Which years later got us into drugs and drinking. And all of a sudden, his parents won the lottery and O.K.A.M.A turned on me and allied himself with his parents. And I lived on the streets. The only things that kept me alive were my music and drugs. And I thank WFWF for bringing us back together.
Spider grabs a guitar and smashes the camera with it
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Post by cureforthesickness on Jul 6, 2006 15:15:15 GMT -5
really short. Go in depth with your detail. You had a good base, but you ended it way too quickly. Expand on your thoughts. Make your thoughts extremely clear and in depth. Talk about your opponents as well. Go more in depth about everything
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