Ramos
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Joined on: Sept 19, 2007 13:58:31 GMT -5
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Post by Ramos on Dec 20, 2006 12:01:13 GMT -5
Violent Uprising RP
The Cursed Eagle is standing in a room that has dull grey lights just lighting it. He walks around the ring inside the gym hitting all the turnbuckles in turn.
Eagle: So here we are at Violent Uprising, I’m in a show up or you are fired match. I’m teaming with Pluto. You know what Pluto I hope you don’t show up just so I can prove I am a dominant competitor here in WFWF. I am against Dan Wildley and Chris Hammers.
I will prove that I am the Alpha Male in WFWF. Dan Wildley is a bitch and Hammers sucks ass. WFWF is now the new hunting ground for me the Cursed Eagle.
I will pin Willdley or Hammers on my own with no help from anyone
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Post by cureforthesickness on Dec 20, 2006 12:12:54 GMT -5
TAKE YOUR TIME! This roleplay looks like it took about a minute to write. Take your time. Express your thoughts fully. Describe your scene, go more in depth with your speech, bold/italic your text and speech to seperate them.
This was not a very good showing, to be honest. This was your chance to break away from the pack, and it really just seems rushed. From reading this roleplay, I'll tell you what I thought. I seen you, sitting at a computer, saying "well, my opponents aren't going to roleplay, so I don't have to write much to win". That's just my opinion. A definate step down from your previous showing in WFWF
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Ramos
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Joined on: Sept 19, 2007 13:58:31 GMT -5
Posts: 2,264
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Post by Ramos on Dec 20, 2006 12:23:14 GMT -5
yea obo you are absolutley right sorry people. I will just try harder in future
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