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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2007 11:43:54 GMT -5
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[glow=red,2,300]C-dog:Belive it or not here i am facin a tombstone,But this tombstone is special.....Specialy made FOR my next opponent.When i said i was turning into a monster i gave it some thought .....NO i dont need and freaking thoughts If im a monster then this grave yard is the place for me and seperah ...if im goin to hell your coming with me....[/glow]
I may not have been here for a long time but after a while u will see why im the doogggg
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Yukio Blaze
Main Eventer
WFWF Record: 58-54-03-02
Joined on: Dec 15, 2004 21:50:34 GMT -5
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Post by Yukio Blaze on Mar 2, 2007 12:16:52 GMT -5
Yeah, I know you really havent busted out that many rps, but this one is really bad.
You will need to expand a lot on description and speech. You can do that by looking at rp's by Obo, McGurk, Shadow and so many others. While I do think you could put out some good rps, you just need to find your itch first.
Good luck
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Chris182
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Post by Chris182 on Mar 2, 2007 17:19:55 GMT -5
ummm yea not so good....try to make it longer and give more detail it a RP.try to tell a story....what your wrestler is going thought in life or something like that.
well good luck on your match. ;D
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Calvin
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Post by Calvin on Mar 4, 2007 23:57:20 GMT -5
People have no idea how to say stuff...
Ok first of all.....this needs a LOT of work. Obviously this is your first e-fed.
You need to make a setting. And by that I mean, something that will relate to the theme of your rp, something thatm akes sense. like ask yourself "where would my character be?" and create a setting. Next is to describe it. Describe basically the 5 sences when doing this. MOstly is what you can see. But basically give us the atmosphere of the setting...as if you were literally there. Make it real.
Next is your speech. You speech should be in the style of your character. Find you style, that'll be the hard part. Do you want him to be emotional, aggressive, etc. Then write as if the character was like that. Remember to relate to your theme. Going off topic is a BAD idea. Like for example, if your theme was success...talking about like....what you are drinking....isn't going to do much for your rp other then make people wonder why you are telling us what you are drinking. That's for the description for the most part. Basically, that's all you gotta know about speech.
Basically, go in big depth inyour rps too. Don't stop until you think we have the WHOLE picture of what you want to tell us. If you aren't happy...then most likely we won't be...unless you're like some people who are like I HATE THIS! and people are like I don't know why you hate this...it's one of your best. Good luck in the wfwf.
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