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Post by imdielawn on Mar 4, 2009 12:05:23 GMT -5
Dielawn's TNA 2009
The show starts off how AAO should have been.
Last Week's Results:
Against All Odds- February 8th, 2009Petey vs. Steiner Chain Mail on a pole.Winner: Petey Aj vs. Booker T Legends Title Winner: AJ via Pin Alex Shelley vs. Sabin Rematch (2 out of 3 falls)Winner: Shelley via DQ Beer Money vs. Lethal ConsequencesWinner: Beer Money via DQ from LAX Team 3D vs. Sting vs. AngleWinner: Sting via pin Morgan vs. AbyssWinner: No Contest 1. X-Division Battle Royal Ultimate X QualifierAbdul Bashir vs. Sonjay Dutt vs. Jimmy RaveWinner: Sonjay Dutt 2. X-Division Battle Royal Ultimate X QualifierShark Boy vs. Kiyoshi vs.Eric YoungWinner: Eric Young -ROSTER-
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Post by DTP. on Mar 4, 2009 14:11:02 GMT -5
I'm not digging the layout, ya know you can seperate a lot of jumbled text into seperate posts, man. Should be good though.
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Post by Jord on Mar 4, 2009 15:14:09 GMT -5
I'm not a fan of the layout either. Especially that you're calling them by their surnames like Jarrett to name one. I also don't like that you have a section on the roster titled "Left overs".
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Post by imdielawn on Mar 4, 2009 18:55:12 GMT -5
Modified* This is my first sim, let me know what I can work on. Or whether you like it. Thanks!
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Post by tnafan4life on Mar 5, 2009 0:13:45 GMT -5
...What did you do to the roster..
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Post by imdielawn on Mar 5, 2009 0:22:54 GMT -5
I removed all of the people that didn't wrestle and people that I thought should be released.
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Post by tnafan4life on Mar 5, 2009 1:23:41 GMT -5
Yeah, that's fine - but you released Bolt/Khan who play a pretty big role in the Knockouts division and Kip plays a decent size part with TBP. Plus, why would you get rid of 1/2 of your Spanish announce team? I know it doesn't affect the diary - it's just little details.
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Post by iyfwkidzc on Mar 5, 2009 20:38:39 GMT -5
He released both of the Spanish Announce Team, Urbina and Hector.
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Post by NOW that's WRESTLING on Mar 6, 2009 1:23:46 GMT -5
This whole thing terrifies me for some reason... :/
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Post by imdielawn on Mar 6, 2009 10:08:34 GMT -5
------------------------------------------------------------------ TNA iMPACT- February 12th, 2009The Frontline (Aj Styles, Petey Williams and Samoa Joe) starts off the show by entering the ring bringing the Legends Championship and Steiner's Chainmail. Getting a huge pop. Aj gets on the mic and points out that the Frontline got the advantage at the PPV and that it's just the beginning. The entire Main Event Mafia all come out to the ramp to tremendous boos. Angle grabs a mic and says the FL may have won the battle last night, but didn't win the war. He says that him and Sting have officially put their differences aside and realize that it's not about the World title, it's about respect and that the FL are in store for brawl. The MEM come down the ramp to the ring as Team 3D come down right behind them. Leading into the MEM being stuck in the middle of the two groups of the FL. Samoa Joe then does a flying corkscrew over the ropes onto Nash and Angle, while AJ and Petey flip over the ropes at the same time onto the remaining three. A huge brawl happens leading into security coming down and breaking it up. -COMMERCIAL BREAK- Match 1- Non-Title
The match starts out with Dutt exiting the ring and letting Young and Shelley to face off. Dutt enters the ring after a few minutes of Shelley and Young chain wrestling. Shelley gives Young a huge suplex and runs to the top rope. Dutt gets on the apron and starts hitting Shelley so he sits on the turnbuckle. Dutt goes to give Shelley a hurricanrana but is stopped by Young. Young then grabs Dutt into a reverse Death Valley Driver and Shelley drop kicks Young leading into Dutt getting the reverse DVD and Young falling to the ground. Shelley rolls up Dutt for the pin but Young breaks it. Young and Shelley get to their feet and are about to lock up again but Dutt gives Shelley and Enziguri. Dutt then bounces off the ropes and gives young a running hurricanranna. Dutt goes to pin Young but Young kicks out. Dutt gets up and bounces of the ropes again to give Young a standing shooting star but is stopped by Shelley and is tossed out onto the apron. Young rolls up Shelley but gets a two count. Young picks up Shelley but gets an enziguri. Shelley climbs to the top rope and gives Young a frog splash but Young moves. Young gets to his feat as Dutt jumps off the top rope and gives Young a body splash. Dutt then hits a shooting star on Young and pins him. Shelley breaks the hold and gives Dutt a sliced bread. Dutt rolls out of the ring. Shelley gives Young another frog splash this time hitting it, then gets him up for the sliced bread but Dutt takes the title and hits Alex Shelley with it. Sonjay then begins to beat down Eric Young with a chair. Suicide comes down and gives Dutt the DOA and takes the X-Division title. It then shows Shelley upset with Suicide's actions asking the refs "WHERE'S MY TITLE." Winner: Alex Shelley by DQ at 12:48 -COMMERCIAL BREAK-
Alex Shelley gets on the mic and says that Suicide needs to stop running around here acting like he owns the X-Division. Shelley is the X-Division champion, he owns this division! And at Destination X he wants Suicide to be a part of the Ultimate X as well so he can finally get his hands on him.
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Jeremy Borash is in the back with Kurt Angle. Angle states that he has a secret to tell the FL at the end of the show that's going to hurt their group. Borash tries to get more information but Kurt says he will have to wait.
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Jay Lethal and Creed are in the ring on the mic saying that they are upset that LAX interfered in their match at the PPV which cost them a chance at the titles. Lethal says that they want to have a match just for competition at there are no hard feelings. LAX come down and accept the challenge.
-COMMERCIAL BREAK- Match 2-The match starts off with both teams shaking hands. Creed and Hernandez are the first in. Hernandez over powers Creed and tags in Homicide. The match starts to get fast paced and leads into Creed giving Homicide the Nip up to clothesline and tags in Lethal. Lethal and Homicide wrestle for a bit with Lethal giving the Lethal Injection. Creed then tags in. After a minute of arm bars and arm drags Homicide tags in and all four men enter the ring. The match ends with Hernandez giving Creed the border toss while Homicide blocks Lethal from interrupting the pin. Very solid match, Lethal and Creed shake LAX's hands again as Beer Money comes down. Robert Roode gets on the mic and says he doesn't care what team they face for their belts and that they will take on both teams at Destination X. Winner- LAX by Pin at 16:23-CUT TO THE BACK-
Jeremy Borash is in the FL locker room with Joe and Petey. Petey is sporting his own look, with a shaved beard and brown hair again. Joe says that the FL can take whatever the MEM throws at them and he's looking forward to crippling them. Match 3-
The match starts with brawling between Morgan and Abyss and Rhino and Magnus. The four men all exit the ring and brawl all around the arena ending in a no contest. Winner: No Contest at 8:24 Match 4-
The Beautiful People enter first with Anglina saying that Taylor Wilde and Roxxi don't deserve to be in the same ring as them. Taylor and Roxxi will never be anywhere close to being beautiful as either one of the Beautiful people. Roxxi tackles Angelina and Taylor starts giving Velvet some elbows. Roxxi and Anglelina roll out of the ring and start fighting. -COMMERCIAL BREAK-
The match continues with Velvet Sky and Taylor wrestling. Velvet and Angelina continue tagging each other in not letting Taylor get to tag out. Finally Taylor breaks free and goes to tag in Roxxi but Roxxi drops to the ground smiling and walks away. The Beautiful People continue to beat down Wilde and eventually get the pin. Winner: The Beautiful People by Pin at 11:51Kong comes down after the match with Raisha Saeed. Saeed on the mic says that Kong does not need the Kongturage and that she has defeated all that TNA has to offer. Starting next week, they will be starting the Kong challenge again. -COMMERCIAL BREAK- Main Event-
Aj Styles and Petey Williams come down the ramp without any other their team. Next enters Steiner and Booker T along with Sharmell. Petey and Steiner start the match off with Petey being quick and out maneuvering him. Petey goes for a spinning DDT but is tossed to the apron where he lands on his feet. Steiner goes to give him a clothesline but Petey counters and gives him a shoulder thrust to the abdomen, then jumps over the top rope catching Steiner in the chest with his knees, landing on the ground. Steiner gets the tag on Booker and he and Petey lock up. Booker moves Petey into the corner and starts giving him knees and punches. The ref tries to pull Booker off but he won't budge. Booker gets a four count, lets go and then gives him another knee and taunts the crowd. Booker gets the tag again bringing Steiner in. Booker whips Petey to the ropes and Steiner and Booker flip him over them giving him a double back body drop. Steiner then goes for the pin but stops and taunts with push ups. Steiner runs over to AJ and knocks him down. AJ tries to enter the ring but is pushed back by the ref as Booker and Steiner double team Petey more. Steiner and Booker continue to tag in and out and beat up on Petey. Eventually AJ jumps off of the top rope and gives Booker a flying elbow knocking Booker out of the ring. Steiner then goes for a clothesline, AJ ducks and hits the Pele. AJ pulls Petey over to their side and tags himself in. He bounces on the ropes, runs, and dives over the top onto Booker, getting a huge pop from the crowd. Steiner exits the ring and starts fighting with AJ. Petey gets up and bounces off the rope, runs and dives over the top rope landing on Steiner and AJ recieving a huge pop as well. Petey rolls Booker into the ring as AJ climbs the top rope. AJ hits the Spiral Tap on Booker and gets the pin. Winner: FL by Pin at 19:14 -COMMERCIAL BREAK-
AJ and Petey are celebrating as The Main Event Mafia enters the ring and beats down Styles and Petey. Angle has a huge smile on his face as he gets on the mic. He shows a camera in the back with 3D and Joe beat up. Angle says the MEM has gone a long way on getting the respect from the young talent and that he will do whatever it takes to get there. He says that tonight, the MEM will be unstoppable and that's a fact. "You see, I noticed a trend going on. The MEM makes a large stride, and Foley or Jarret show up and give the FL what they want helping them get an advantage. Thats a trend we aren't going to see anymore. You see, the MEM has a little something up our sleeves, an equalizer. I know a certain someone that has bought into the company as well, and happened to buy in on half of the company. Making Jarret and Foley only owning 50% of the company. Many of you know this person already. Allow me to introduce him for you. Myself, Kurt Angle." The MEM claps and smiles as Angle taunts the crowd as the show ends.
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Post by imdielawn on Mar 9, 2009 22:53:08 GMT -5
Does anyone even go in this section? 212 Views with only 6 responses to just my roster?
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Post by ICW on Mar 10, 2009 5:45:36 GMT -5
Gotta be a little more paitent, buddy. I'll have a review for your show soon. You might want to consider putting your roster information in a seperate thread on the help board and posting just your shows on the main board.
In the mean time, there are several shows that could use your input. I'm sure if you read/reply to a show, the favor will be returned.
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Post by WCWA Online on Mar 10, 2009 11:04:19 GMT -5
Does anyone even go in this section? 212 Views with only 6 responses to just my roster? well, obviously if there's been 230 views, someone is coming to this board.. you're just not going to have people breaking down doors to instantly reply to your stuff, especially when you're brand new to the board and have yet to replt to anything. be glad people are so curious to view your stuff..
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Post by WCWA Online on Mar 11, 2009 12:10:51 GMT -5
alright, I got a chance to look over this.. decent, but there's room for improvement. The most noteable thing I'd suggest is to expand your backstage segments. Segments and vignettes are very important for the series and characters as a whole. If nothing else gets written in full detail, that needs to be. Stuff like the Angle segment and the Petey segment felt like meat and potatoes and nothing more.
I'd also suggest a bit longer matches and more detail put into the matches. Rather than just saying they are fighting, like in the girls match, explain what they are doing, how they are doing it, etc. Then in the tag match, they went almost 9 minutes with no detail or action at all.. Just make your things feel and read more like you're actually watching the show and not reading an online overview of the show.
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Post by imdielawn on Mar 12, 2009 16:50:09 GMT -5
Sorry for all of the hassle with this, but could the mod please lock this. I'm going to re-do it with EWR. Thanks for the comments.
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Post by ICW on Mar 12, 2009 21:23:21 GMT -5
I really do hope you are not quitting fantasy booking because of the comments WCWA Online and myself posted...
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Post by imdielawn on Mar 13, 2009 7:59:05 GMT -5
Not at all. I just think it's going to be better for me to do it with EWR.
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