theheatv1
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Post by theheatv1 on Mar 8, 2009 15:09:16 GMT -5
Hey everyone! I've been checkin out the pic feds for a few years now and finally decided to give it a shot. It took me a few months to get it finished between working full time and moving. I know there's a lot that can be improved on, but I hope you guys enjoy it! ;D www.freewebs.com/hspamraw/ |
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Deep Shadows
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MXW 6 is here! https://youtu.be/LiDlNuiKmjA
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Post by Deep Shadows on Mar 8, 2009 21:47:09 GMT -5
First comment...WOOT!
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Nice choice of a opening song...I've always liked that one. Shinedown are great.
The entrance looks pretty good.
Pyro effects look good.
Styles and Taz are a nice choices for commentary.
I like that you're using an original owner.
Eh, why a GM? Dusty is a cool choice though.
The first segment is very generic...it seems like every new fed does this.
Cool...an original. I like to see that in feds. Pretty good work on him also.
Eh, it kinda bugs me that some of the pics are so small. It's kind of hard to see what's going on.
It's good to see the original picking up the win. That's a good sign of things to come.
Good job with the graphics...it's really important that if you're going to use graphics that they be good.
Cool, I like how you're seperating yourself from other feds...using Cena in a different kind of fashion.
Wow, he just got owned! I'm guessing you're not a Cena fan? Haha.
You're picture quality is very good...that's a HUGE plus!
Nice...Edge & Christian together.
Thorn & Boogey...hmmm, could be very interesting. I like both of them.
Again with the small pictures, argh!
You really need to try and use artificial lighting such as lamps and whatnot. The flash is a bad idea.
Your poses are pretty good but watch the string. You really need to make sure and edit that out.
Cool, a women's match. It seems like a lot of pic feds these days leave the women out...except for valets or interviewers.
That match was a little too short but you had some good poses in there. I'd love to see a feud between Victoria and Beth. Those are two of my favorite Divas.
Hmmm, DDP as Cena's mentor? Could be interesting. I can definitely see it eventually falling apart...could be a pretty good feud, too.
You should really work on getting a new referee...the midget just isn't working, lol.
Oh, sh*t...I should've seen that coming, lol.
Nice ending...pyro looks really good.
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Overall I really enjoyed it. Like you said, there's much room to improve but you've definitely got potential. You've got a nice mix originality, which is a breath of fresh air. Keep it up!
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theheatv1
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Post by theheatv1 on Mar 8, 2009 22:03:36 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback. The smaller pictures were something I wasn't to sure of, but figured I'd just go with. Yeah I know I need a new ref lol. Thanks again for the feedback!
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Post by revolution on Mar 9, 2009 1:11:18 GMT -5
If that was your first show ever... that was brilliant. I loved every part of the show. The originality was great, graphics were pretty good, poses were nice. Very good job on whole show. My only complaints were the ref, and the small pics. They were pretty annoying to be honest. I loved the arena btw. Overall, that was a very very good show if it was your first. Keep it up, and this fed will get better and better.
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-LMB-
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LESS THAT 2 DAYS LEFT ONE REPLICA BELTS! http://myworld.EBAY LINK NOT ALLOWED.uk/lmb123_2008
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Post by -LMB- on Mar 9, 2009 13:43:13 GMT -5
Wow thats not that bad, For your first show you should be proud looks good arena is nice and poses were not to bad either i loved the cm punk match agianst y2j great match. keep it up buddy.  |
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Mar 9, 2009 14:36:21 GMT -5
Brilliant, better than anything i could do...got MSN? PM me.
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Post by deskjet on Mar 9, 2009 20:40:12 GMT -5
ok, this was better than I had anticipated. The announce team looks good the way they are posed. the heat? cool. blah, side by side poses, blah, going to the top of the page for the next segment. Quick ic match, not bad. good graphics and some good poses. Well done Kane promo. Tag match was good. Wow, a womens match. Nice. in spite of the figs, ver well posed. hmmm. cena and DDP. could be interesting. Solid Championship match. Nice set up with Kane and good graphics at the end. All and all, pretty good for a first show. Good pacing to the show with segments and matches. You set up storylines for next week, the commentary was well done, and the graphics were good. Only thing is the transition from page to page and the side to side pics. Other than that, a very very promising fed. Keep up the good work, and welcome to the board. +1 for teh womens match  |
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theheatv1
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Post by theheatv1 on Mar 10, 2009 10:51:12 GMT -5
Thanks guys for the feedback! I know what to work on for next show and hopefully make it better! Again thanks for the feedback!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 12, 2009 16:22:38 GMT -5
Nice pyros & background with the audience on it. Tazz looks odd with that Christian-style sunglasses.  Nice shiny World Title. Diva match? I'm not a fan of that in real wrestling, let's see how good it can be pulled off with figures. MVP? Cool, one of my faves. Haven't really seen him in pic-feds much. The Heat? Looks nice. Does he resemble yourself? Your style of having three ot four pictures at once for a move sequence looks kinda cool, but sadly the pics are way too small then.  I think your matches are way too short. Btw, are weapons allowed in Intercontinental matches?  Psycho Kane. o_Ô Beth cleaning house here. Nice backstage segment. Page motivating Cena? Weee, the boss himself is introducing the participants for the last match? Nice ending.
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|»Champ«|
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Post by |»Champ«| on Mar 17, 2009 3:27:14 GMT -5
Pretty good show here for a first. Tazz & Styles as the commentating team is always great! Nice world title you got there. MVP vs. The Heat was good, the size of the pics during a sequence of a move are pretty small, you should keep them normal size and then it would be great. The Heat gets the roll up for the win, pretty cool ending imo. IC title match... Cena vs. Sandman should be interesting to watch. Sandman had control most of the time and wins. That match was very very short. Very nice Kane promo there. E&C vs. Boogeyman & Thorn? Seems like an ok team. You should edit out the string on your poses... makes the show look better. Edge & Christian pick up the win and move on. Good match. A diva's match? Something different I suppose The poses were actually pretty damn good for diva figures, Beth with the steel chair! I hope this leads to a hardcore diva's match... that would be pretty cool Santino is still a god when it comes to figure shows. Nice DDP/Cena segment, lets see how it goes. The link to match 5 isn't working for me? I'll edit this when i can view it but heres my quick review on the show.
The show itself was good for a debut, the pic size must be changed for the sequences of moves. The matches should last longer. Approx. 40-50 pics I think the pic fed faq's says? Edit the string in your poses, it makes the show look better. But other then that, it's a great start to a fed. |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Mar 17, 2009 8:58:38 GMT -5
wow u have a lot of potential. i am really liking where your storylines are going so far (especially the cena one). your commentary is very good and your arena could use a little work but it is nice. You need to work on your poses. A lot of your poses were good, but then there were some that were really stiff. You're doing a great job. Keep up the good work and keep trying to find ways to improve. Great show. I hope to see more from you. Good luck =)
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