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Post by spinebuster on Aug 18, 2009 6:18:11 GMT -5
for 8omvpo8's proboards
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Post by hjejmnse1 on Aug 18, 2009 7:01:50 GMT -5
Really,Really Bad editing. The black should have been darker. There was no jump. The table break was 1 picture. When Bourne was in the air his feet were on the ladder still. I didn't like the reaction on this.
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Post by spinebuster on Aug 18, 2009 7:14:56 GMT -5
ino there was bad editing , i only no how to make a table brake in 1 pic soz and it was to stop the string spnning and making bourne move
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Post by gazwefc on Aug 18, 2009 7:25:23 GMT -5
O s**t what did you do just paint over the strings in paint? thats just makes it look worse. If i see a string its 1mm of fishing line or cotton but you drew over that with big fat grey lines
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Post by spinebuster on Aug 18, 2009 10:21:24 GMT -5
at least i can animate u fag
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Post by JL24FPS on Aug 18, 2009 10:33:12 GMT -5
this is actually pretty bad.
first off, you gotta take alot more pictures. you need to have enough frames to make the animation look as smooth as possible. Another thing is you need to bend the figures. They can't be stiff. You need to get fishing line or a good editing program. Painting over the string with thick black lines is not a good thing. it makes the animation look alot worse. Add a reaction. it needs to be more than 2 frames. on average, a single animation from me is comprised of about 40+ pictures...
and last but not least... please don't be rude to any of the other animators. it's pathetic and immature. take some constructive criticism and better yourself at becoming an animator. calling names is getting you nowhere. These people are here to help you. we're all here to animate... not to be rude and obnoxious. show a little respect, please.
Just my two cents...
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Post by spinebuster on Aug 18, 2009 10:39:22 GMT -5
that took me 25 pics and wat the hell does obnoxius or watever u sed meen and respect them , theyre not respecting me and i sed in the title bad editinbg , maybe i will put up 1ST TIME TRYINGTO EDIT
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Post by JL24FPS on Aug 18, 2009 10:49:35 GMT -5
that took me 25 pics and wat the hell does obnoxius or watever u sed meen and respect them , theyre not respecting me and i sed in the title bad editinbg , maybe i will put up 1ST TIME TRYINGTO EDIT oh boy...  stop acting like you're better than everyone here because you aren't. you're new to this and i understand that... but you need to follow the rules and leave decent replies for animations. not just "awesome 10/10" leave a detailed reply about what you liked about the animation and what you disliked about the animation. Show the other animators on this board respect. Learn from them. Like i said before... Constructive CriticismNobody is "out to get you" we're trying to help... grow up. please. |
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Post by spinebuster on Aug 18, 2009 10:58:24 GMT -5
i am grown up and they are not rescpecting me so im not gunna respect them and i tried to edit and yuor commenting on that and i even put bad editing in the titlee and yet your still criticsing me
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Post by JL24FPS on Aug 18, 2009 11:06:22 GMT -5
i am grown up and they are not rescpecting me so im not gunna respect them and i tried to edit and yuor commenting on that and i even put bad editing in the titlee and yet your still criticsing me That right there is pretty childish if you ask me... but whatever. people are going to comment on the editing. its part of the animation. thats what they are gonna comment on. so if you know its bad then why are you insulting everyone? they are just trying to help you improve and they are pointing out the problems with the animation. |
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Post by spinebuster on Aug 18, 2009 11:08:13 GMT -5
YESSS ino they are but i hav already pointed out its bad editing but they keep on bringing it up
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