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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2009 6:26:03 GMT -5
these are my first poses so dont be harsh ;D ;D ;D ![](http://i719.photobucket.com/albums/ww196/patricksoames/DSC00415.jpg) leg drop ![](http://i719.photobucket.com/albums/ww196/patricksoames/DSC00416.jpg) swanton bomb ![](http://i719.photobucket.com/albums/ww196/patricksoames/DSC00417.jpg) edge about to spear kofi
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Post by gazwefc on Aug 19, 2009 6:35:49 GMT -5
im not feeling it to be honest, sloppy camera work, no atempt to remove the strings 4/10. Although i must say i like Edges stance
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Post by haggard on Aug 19, 2009 19:00:11 GMT -5
Blurry, stringy, and Edge isnt doin anything. Thats not even a pose, the ropes are holding him up. Back to the drawing board for you.
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Post by Deep Shadows on Aug 20, 2009 0:42:31 GMT -5
Blurry, stringy, and Edge isnt doin anything. Thats not even a pose, the ropes are holding him up. Back to the drawing board for you. He pretty much said it all. You need to do some homework. Check out some of the better posers on the board and take tips from them.
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Post by schaef24 on Aug 20, 2009 19:34:45 GMT -5
blurry and stiff was first reactions in the leg drop it seems as if hes droping on his legs and not his trought swanton was ok weird positiong and no editing at all kinda bad but keep trying
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Post by wyoming on Aug 21, 2009 10:58:09 GMT -5
Well,the first pose was very blurry. Jericho had no reaction. Sting was seen. Get a white or Black background. So it is easy to edit. Next time don't move the camera or don't make the figure move while you take the picture. I didn't like the angle either. The second pose the string was seen again. THe pose looks unrealistic. A swanton doesn't look like that. Jericho has no reaction agian.It was also Stiff. Next time give a reaction to the victim. The next pic needs string. Read the Rules. Edge should go lower. His one hand should be on the rope not most of his arm. Use what I tell you so you can improve.
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