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Post by wweuniverse47871 on Dec 19, 2010 8:00:11 GMT -5
Hey guys. I was going to post this on christmas eve or christmas day but I'm not sure whats happening at christmas. I think there's A family gathering so I decided to upload it tonight!
Anyway incase I can't get on Christmas day, I would just like to wish you all A Merry Christmas
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RCW
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Post by RCW on Dec 19, 2010 9:38:45 GMT -5
Ye I Liked It. Btw its spelt special.  . Anyway Great Match! It Flowed Pritty Well, Stiff on Some Occasions Which is ok in matches imo. i liked the two swantons. Some moves Needed More Pics! Overall Good Match! Would Like to see more. |
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NEW™
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Post by NEW™ on Dec 19, 2010 13:40:33 GMT -5
This was a good match. On the entrances it seemed a little choppy, so take somemore pictures on those parts, and also it seemed a little stiff and fidgety on the entrances. The running needs somemore work for like example on the clothesline, you need to speed it up and also have him go up in the air a bit more, the camera was not shaky, but it was a little blurry, the lighting was good and changed a tiny bit, so watch that a bit more, the camera angles were decent, saw string here and there, but did see some hands and stuff like that a bit during the match. But didn't really see any shadows. It was an ok length of a match, but it is one of your first, which is pretty lengthy. Not too floaty, also when you are doing the preparing-for-the-move parts, move everybody during the animation, don't just move one person. The reactions were ok, and the impacts need more work. Good job though. |
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Post by wweuniverse47871 on Dec 19, 2010 19:53:25 GMT -5
This was a good match. On the entrances it seemed a little choppy, so take somemore pictures on those parts, and also it seemed a little stiff and fidgety on the entrances. The running needs somemore work for like example on the clothesline, you need to speed it up and also have him go up in the air a bit more, the camera was not shaky, but it was a little blurry, the lighting was good and changed a tiny bit, so watch that a bit more, the camera angles were decent, saw string here and there, but did see some hands and stuff like that a bit during the match. But didn't really see any shadows. It was an ok length of a match, but it is one of your first, which is pretty lengthy. Not too floaty, also when you are doing the preparing-for-the-move parts, move everybody during the animation, don't just move one person. The reactions were ok, and the impacts need more work. Good job though. It's not my first match. I've made about 10 matches before.... |
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NEW™
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Post by NEW™ on Dec 19, 2010 20:29:38 GMT -5
This was a good match. On the entrances it seemed a little choppy, so take somemore pictures on those parts, and also it seemed a little stiff and fidgety on the entrances. The running needs somemore work for like example on the clothesline, you need to speed it up and also have him go up in the air a bit more, the camera was not shaky, but it was a little blurry, the lighting was good and changed a tiny bit, so watch that a bit more, the camera angles were decent, saw string here and there, but did see some hands and stuff like that a bit during the match. But didn't really see any shadows. It was an ok length of a match, but it is one of your first, which is pretty lengthy. Not too floaty, also when you are doing the preparing-for-the-move parts, move everybody during the animation, don't just move one person. The reactions were ok, and the impacts need more work. Good job though. It's not my first match. I've made about 10 matches before.... Pffft, I knew that.  |
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TTF4eva
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Post by TTF4eva on Dec 19, 2010 20:34:46 GMT -5
It's not my first match. I've made about 10 matches before.... So what? He can criticize all he likes, and so can I. What you need to do is follow through with a lot of the moves. What you do is, you do the build up well, but the actual move is not really seen well at all. Take a lot of pictures when animating the actual move itself, nice taunts (like the Matt Hardy taunt in the middle). I liked the creastivity with the backstage area, but I've also noticed that the match itself is incredibly unrealistic. Jeff Hardy doesn't get up straight away after a dive to the outside. For the overall video, I gave it 5/10. |
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