TTF4eva
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Post by TTF4eva on Jan 31, 2011 1:06:26 GMT -5
My god, I don't think Ive posted an animation in ages here lol. Just wanted to here just for the lawlz.
Nah but in all seriousness just wanted to randomly post it here to get your take on it and see if I still 'have it' while doing the comedy videos.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 31, 2011 1:19:37 GMT -5
Not bad Blake.
It flowed alright, although stiffness is a problem here. It was pretty smooth, although that can be improved on too. Santino basically floated into the air and the joints didn´t really bend. Helms was really just there to be a target, didn´t really focus on him and thats where you went wrong. Helms could of at least tried to avoid it a bit more. Santinos kick was very nice. I love how you did a twisting dropkick and made him land on his gut, from the kick on it was very smooth.
Nice work.
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Post by TTF4eva on Jan 31, 2011 1:51:50 GMT -5
Not bad Blake. It flowed alright, although stiffness is a problem here. It was pretty smooth, although that can be improved on too. Santino basically floated into the air and the joints didn´t really bend. Helms was really just there to be a target, didn´t really focus on him and thats where you went wrong. Helms could of at least tried to avoid it a bit more. Santinos kick was very nice. I love how you did a twisting dropkick and made him land on his gut, from the kick on it was very smooth. Nice work.  Uhh you're right, he was the target. And of course it wasn't focused on him, it was all about the move itself. And he did try to avoid it, you can see he reacted before he hit him. |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 31, 2011 2:29:39 GMT -5
Not bad Blake. It flowed alright, although stiffness is a problem here. It was pretty smooth, although that can be improved on too. Santino basically floated into the air and the joints didn´t really bend. Helms was really just there to be a target, didn´t really focus on him and thats where you went wrong. Helms could of at least tried to avoid it a bit more. Santinos kick was very nice. I love how you did a twisting dropkick and made him land on his gut, from the kick on it was very smooth. Nice work. Uhh you're right, he was the target. And of course it wasn't focused on him, it was all about the move itself. And he did try to avoid it, you can see he reacted before he hit him. I guess you have a point, But I just left a crapty reply altogether so. Anyways yeah, Even if you should of focused on Helms a bit more it´s hard to do stuff to the target when they´re sitting down. Anyways I don´t see any rust here man, good job (Sorry for my crapty reply, it was a big day) |
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Post by NEW™ on Jan 31, 2011 17:59:29 GMT -5
Good job on this animation. It was smooth as usual, it was not too stiff, but watch the elbow joints of Santino because it was getting a tiny stiff in those parts, the camera was not shaky or blurry at all, and the lighting was good and did not change during the animation, which is good. Saw a tiny bit of string in the animation, but did not see any shadows or hands in the animation at all, which is great. Not fidgety or floaty, liked the sound effects in there, the squat before the jump was alright, needs a tiny bit more pics I think there, I like how Gregory was moving during the flips and whatnot, liked the camera shake on the hit part, the reaction needs some work and the impact (rope bounce) was good as usual.
OVERALL: 8/10
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Post by DB on Jan 31, 2011 19:20:59 GMT -5
Not too shabbs blake. This is a good animation. It flowed well on some parts, the choppy part was when Santino was on the top rope. The impact is probably the best part, especially when you used the effectvie camera change. Good animation all together, 8.5/10.
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Feb 1, 2011 15:01:02 GMT -5
Tbh, i didnt like it. I found it to be chopy and too slow. Might of looked better if you sped it up alittle. It was also kinda floaty. I know its hard to make it not floaty and weird looking while trying to do that move. I think what you did at the end with the shaking effect made that animation look worse. The only way having that effect look good would be if it was in a tribute type video. And if it match/snyc'd with the music. Good idea thinking of it though.
Overall i dont think it was great but it wasnt horrible. Def not your best and i think you couldve done better.
-Jesse'
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TTF4eva
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Post by TTF4eva on Feb 1, 2011 15:36:28 GMT -5
Tbh, i didnt like it. I found it to be chopy and too slow. Might of looked better if you sped it up alittle. It was also kinda floaty. I know its hard to make it not floaty and weird looking while trying to do that move. I think what you did at the end with the shaking effect made that animation look worse. The only way having that effect look good would be if it was in a tribute type video. And if it match/snyc'd with the music. Good idea thinking of it though.
Overall i dont think it was great but it wasnt horrible. Def not your best and i think you couldve done better.
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Post by bloodxtremefigures on Feb 2, 2011 8:32:33 GMT -5
so you take pictures & move the figures & use strings!? _____________________________________________________ What I say to your animation: - Good Lighting - Good Comedy Animater - Santino Marella - The effect of the Camera Changing [like SVR Games  ] - Good Reaction |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 2, 2011 11:34:58 GMT -5
ALL ANIMATORS GOES HD!
THATS GOOD!
BUT STILL A GOOD ANIMATION FROM YOU TTF4EVA VERY GOOD!
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