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Post by Deleted on Mar 31, 2011 6:47:02 GMT -5
Yes this sucks, I haven't animated in a while, and my set-up has kind of collapsed so I can't animate in it for about a week, as well as that my sister accidently took my camera to her camp, so I am stuck with a webcam. Thanks for watching and reading : D
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Post by Andeh on Apr 1, 2011 2:42:45 GMT -5
What happened? Your setup is completely different to the last ani I saw. There is no ring? Anyway. It seems you have got worse since the last animation I saw from you. Sorry. It looks choppy for a few reasons. But when you actually watch it carefully the picture flow with Morrison is fine. The problems with it are the lighting and how fidgety Morrison is. In almost every frame, the lighting changes slightly. You need to try and get some natural lighting or test out using the lamp at different angles. (I think you was using a lamp). Now the fidgeting. Morrison slightly moves his body left and right in each frame while turning around. Makes it look extremely choppy. Then when he is in the air he gets closer and further away from the camera in each frame. Its where you arnt keeping your arm steady when holding string. Try and remember exactly where the figure was in the last frame before taking the picture. If you still cannot get the hang of it, then look to downloading programs that can onion skin the previous frame. That way you get closest to what the previous frame was. The reaction was good, with the camera angle change. But I think you got a little sloppy on the picture taking here as it gets a little choppy. Orton sitting up was choppy. Also Morrison's reaction to hitting it was not so realistic. Just kinda held his arms in the air and rolled over. Overall the animation was thought out well. You added little things like Morrison looking over his shoulder before he goes for it. And camera angle changes. It just lacked some small things that make it look alot worse than what it is. I don't know if it is rust, or a new camera or something. But this is no where near as good as the last animation I saw from you. Hang in though. You could easily improve on this.
Overall: 5/10
-Andeh
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Post by Scott! on Apr 1, 2011 8:17:25 GMT -5
i like it !
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