EMW Figure Shelf
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Post by EMW Figure Shelf on Jun 10, 2011 23:19:52 GMT -5
After being on Youtube for 4 years and 4 months, I have finally moved the product to WF! go down below to watch the first episode! (WARNING, THE PICS ARE HUGE SO SOME PEOPLE BEWARE!) picfedkings.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=uw&action=display&thread=2Enjoy! Feedback is highly appreciated and let me know if there's any flaws I need to work on! |
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Post by deskjet on Jun 11, 2011 4:47:18 GMT -5
While your pic resolution is nice, they are WAAAAAY too big. Nothing is more annoying then having to reestart your computer becasue it freezes from the download,lol. Your arena is unique with the various pictures, but certainly not as good as it could be. Overall, there's nothing real distinguishable about this fed either. It's just a varieity of figs and pics put togehter with no real storyline and lacking commentary, if there is much at all. I suggest using pix resizer for getting your pics to 480x620 to start, with more commentary explaining what's going on. Good luck  . |
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Callum1993
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Post by Callum1993 on Jun 11, 2011 7:10:11 GMT -5
I like the idea of your fed man. The mix of Ruthless Agression, Deluxe Aggression, ToyBiz, Mattel and TTL. I think maybe you should maybe cut down on all the different types and choose a few. Your pics are quite blurry and need resizing. I liked the idea of the New Nation kinda like the Nexus in a way. What really bothered me though was that:
1. You have 2 commentary teams yet hardly any commentary. It really bothers me that there's no reaction to big moves.
2. There were no promos or build up's to matches meaning there was no direction or story behind the matches.
3. You use way to many high flying over the top moves try to limit them a bit.
However what I liked was:
1. Your Arena I liked
2. The Nation storyline
3. The commentary that you did was quite witty but there wasn't enough of it.
Overall I would:
1. Make Pics smaller and less blury
2. Do promos and build feuds
3. Less high flying moves
4. Add more commentary and have only one commentary team
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EMW Figure Shelf
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Post by EMW Figure Shelf on Jun 11, 2011 11:45:13 GMT -5
Thanks so much for the feedback! Like I said before I was on youtube for so many years and this format worked so this is kinda new to me. I will humbly take in the advice but my only question is to DeskJet and that is, how do you resize the pics and is it a long process?
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EMW Figure Shelf
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Post by EMW Figure Shelf on Jun 11, 2011 11:48:30 GMT -5
Also, the distinct this about this fed is there barely is storylines. I personally feel Storylines are what make wrestling a circus so I try to focus less on them.
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Post by deskjet on Jun 11, 2011 12:02:24 GMT -5
Thanks so much for the feedback! Like I said before I was on youtube for so many years and this format worked so this is kinda new to me. I will humbly take in the advice but my only question is to DeskJet and that is, how do you resize the pics and is it a long process? This explains it a little bit: www.mouserunner.com/Feat_PIXresizerCell.html It's quite simple and quick. You can resize multiple files in seconds and the program is free to downlaod. I noticed your comments on storylines and havee to disagree. Personally, I think storylines help people invest in what you are showing. If you make the storylines something people can be interested in, it'll draw them in. It can be a mere storyline of wrestler A vs wrestler b for the title. It becomes a circus on tv when they do crappy nonsensical storylines...to that I agree with, but I do think storylines are essential to creating interest, especially in pic fedding. lmk if you need help with figuring out pixresizer  |
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Post by danmorganbrand on Jun 11, 2011 17:00:09 GMT -5
Thanks so much for the feedback! Like I said before I was on youtube for so many years and this format worked so this is kinda new to me. I will humbly take in the advice but my only question is to DeskJet and that is, how do you resize the pics and is it a long process? It becomes a circus on tv when they do crappy nonsensical storylines Like R-Truth? There were some spots that it was pretty dark, if you take time in each ep. by having some better quality pics, better lighting, more commentary and some direction for your rivalries and alliances, this fed can become popular, IMO... |
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EMW Figure Shelf
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Post by EMW Figure Shelf on Jun 11, 2011 17:16:48 GMT -5
It becomes a circus on tv when they do crappy nonsensical storylines Like R-Truth? There were some spots that it was pretty dark, if you take time in each ep. by having some better quality pics, better lighting, more commentary and some direction for your rivalries and alliances, this fed can become popular, IMO... thanks for the advice! I will definitely improved. This Episode was directed for Youtube so I kinda shifted gears to here last minute. I will put more effort and definitely fix all the flaws. Minus all the flaws, I hope you all enjoyed this overall! |
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StingerSplash
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Post by StingerSplash on Jun 11, 2011 17:22:56 GMT -5
I'll finish watching later, but besides the pic size it looked good from what I could tell. Except that you're using Shane as your Owner when he's UWA's Championship Committee Head.  . haha |
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Post by danmorganbrand on Jun 11, 2011 18:52:27 GMT -5
I'll finish watching later, but besides the pic size it looked good from what I could tell. Except that you're using Shane as your Owner when he's UWA's Championship Committee Head. . haha[/b] But we already knew that... |
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StingerSplash
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Post by StingerSplash on Jun 11, 2011 20:27:29 GMT -5
I'll finish watching later, but besides the pic size it looked good from what I could tell. Except that you're using Shane as your Owner when he's UWA's Championship Committee Head. . haha[/b] But we already knew that...[/quote] I was making a joke.. |
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Jun 11, 2011 20:56:03 GMT -5
I just skimmed through it, bro, to be honest. Not that I didn't like it or anything. I think you can add story (if that's what you want) to your stuff without making it a soap opera, after all, your guys compete for the gold, right? That in itself is a storyline that will carry along the action and justify the actions of your heels and faces. The only thing I can complain about, just from a watcher's POV are indeed the picture sizes. No matter how awesome the photography looks, it always seems to look its best around the 500x size range. |
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EMW Figure Shelf
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Post by EMW Figure Shelf on Jun 11, 2011 21:38:13 GMT -5
I just skimmed through it, bro, to be honest. Not that I didn't like it or anything. I think you can add story (if that's what you want) to your stuff without making it a soap opera, after all, your guys compete for the gold, right? That in itself is a storyline that will carry along the action and justify the actions of your heels and faces. The only thing I can complain about, just from a watcher's POV are indeed the picture sizes. No matter how awesome the photography looks, it always seems to look its best around the 500x size range. both things are currently in the works. I always look to improve so when the next episode comes around, expect more commentary, smaller pics courtesy of DeskJet, and good storylines, but also consider NOD a storyline |
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