Tylor
Main Eventer
Joined on: Dec 23, 2008 18:17:08 GMT -5
Posts: 4,437
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Post by Tylor on Jul 5, 2011 18:59:59 GMT -5
But it has people.   |
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Post by alexgg on Jul 6, 2011 12:14:06 GMT -5
People disgust me. YOU MONSTER.
Animation is pretty good, you've improved since I last saw, like quite a bit.
Its stiff stiff and fidgety in places, but it's not really choppy.
The running is good, but the feet need to land forward more, and the arms need to keep at a smoother pace, looking jaggerd at the start and fidgety.
You need to work on a running jump, because the bending down of the body dosnt work, the legs dont seem to have enough spring in them to do a dropkick and a then a moonsault off the rebound, he also floats for a while there too.
Green seems to fly away in this, and the fall/landing is stiff, not much reaction.
It has good flow, but stiffness is something that needs to be worked on.
Good work.
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Post by laz22 on Jul 7, 2011 13:00:26 GMT -5
The running is ugly, the kick was alright, floaty and stuff, moonsault paused in the air, but it was smooth, but a little stiff in some moments.
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Post by picfedguy on Jul 8, 2011 1:50:24 GMT -5
Well this disappoints me, you have a title like that and then no cheesey pun to back it up? For shame. The running looked kind of stompy - I'm not exactly sure how to fix that because I suck at animating running, but if you go to Darkdemon they should have some good tutorials there. Though I can't help with the stompyness I can help withe the weird body movements, so during the running the back looked weird right up until the stick started getting ready for the move, this is because you were doing the running too quickly and not leaving yourself enough time between each step to get a good smooth movement, same with the arms. The Green sticks reaction was pretty bad, you should have started animating the reaction earlier so again, you'd have enough time to make a nice clean movement. The moonsault was good 4hough you should have speed it up as the stick got closer to the table so it'd be spaced, joint movement was good but the movement of the stick to the right looked off, probably because it wasn't spaced. Reaction looked rushed and weren't so good. It took you awhile but your really starting to get the hang of this, good job.
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