wwecool09
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Post by wwecool09 on Sept 11, 2011 6:34:53 GMT -5
i think this is my best animation so far ;D if u think it wasnt very good or stuff then please comment how i can improve it
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Post by mrrocky619 on Sept 12, 2011 14:10:17 GMT -5
It was slow. the camera was shaking the whole time. there were tons of shaodws which were incredibly distracting. orton shouldve kicked him with his other foot. it was incredibly stiff meaning you need to move the joints more. cm punk was in a weird position, nobody actually goes into positions like that, he should be on his knees. and orton shoulve followed through with the kick. 1/10
if you just sped it up, kept the camera still and prevented the shadows it wouldve been like a 5/10.
keep practicing ; D
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Jynxx
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Post by Jynxx on Sept 12, 2011 14:12:55 GMT -5
Kinda slow, pretty choppy, and like Ry Ry said he kicked with the wrong foot. A follow through would have improved it alot, although i didnt think it was toooo stiff,
3/10, Not bad
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wwecool09
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Post by wwecool09 on Sept 12, 2011 15:01:44 GMT -5
It was slow. the camera was shaking the whole time. there were tons of shaodws which were incredibly distracting. orton shouldve kicked him with his other foot. it was incredibly stiff meaning you need to move the joints more. cm punk was in a weird position, nobody actually goes into positions like that, he should be on his knees. and orton shoulve followed through with the kick. 1/10 if you just sped it up, kept the camera still and prevented the shadows it wouldve been like a 5/10. keep practicing ; D RY RY how shouldi make it look not stiff in this animationwich joint should i move more and yeah sorry for the shadows it was raining  |
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Post by mrrocky619 on Sept 12, 2011 15:07:49 GMT -5
It was slow. the camera was shaking the whole time. there were tons of shaodws which were incredibly distracting. orton shouldve kicked him with his other foot. it was incredibly stiff meaning you need to move the joints more. cm punk was in a weird position, nobody actually goes into positions like that, he should be on his knees. and orton shoulve followed through with the kick. 1/10 if you just sped it up, kept the camera still and prevented the shadows it wouldve been like a 5/10. keep practicing ; D RY RY how shouldi make it look not stiff in this animationwich joint should i move more and yeah sorry for the shadows it was raining i try to move every joint in every frame. yours is stiff in the arms mainly so the arm joints need to move. |
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Squatch
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Post by Squatch on Sept 12, 2011 20:50:29 GMT -5
That was alright. I think the animation is extremely stiff in the entire body. The lighting is okay, but I think it could be a much better background (maybe I just like black backgrounds more.) Another thing to work on is a reaction. Keep working at what you're doing because you have potential!
3.4/10
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wwecool09
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Post by wwecool09 on Sept 14, 2011 5:51:37 GMT -5
That was alright. I think the animation is extremely stiff in the entire body. The lighting is okay, but I think it could be a much better background (maybe I just like black backgrounds more.) Another thing to work on is a reaction. Keep working at what you're doing because you have potential! 3.4/10 thanks for feedback anyways are u new to this board are u here from beggining cause for a year i havent seen u in this board and once thanks for feedback ill use ur feed back and i hope that makes me better in animating  |
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