wwecool09
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You asked me to be back and i have returned! The real wwecool09 is back to be the awesome one.
Joined on: Apr 10, 2011 8:53:34 GMT -5
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Post by wwecool09 on Sept 23, 2011 9:17:09 GMT -5
sorry for long time no animation  and like always dont forget to comment on what should i improve on more and what mistakes i made! ;D |
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Post by mrrocky619 on Sept 23, 2011 11:59:38 GMT -5
It was incredibly stiff. very slow. all christian did was put his arm out... he didnt really do an actual clothesline, you shouldve had Christian run at mysterio rather than what you did. it was also uber choppy and a bit fidgety. the camera was a little shaky and some dim shadows apeared at the end. 2.5/10. all you really need to do is speed it up, make it less stiff and work on the actual mechanics of the move (christian following through with his clothesline rather than just putting his arm out.) and it would improve a ton. it would probably go from a 2.5/10 to a 4.5/10 at least.
just keep practicing.
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wwecool09
Mid-Carder
You asked me to be back and i have returned! The real wwecool09 is back to be the awesome one.
Joined on: Apr 10, 2011 8:53:34 GMT -5
Posts: 336
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Post by wwecool09 on Sept 24, 2011 4:55:05 GMT -5
It was incredibly stiff. very slow. all christian did was put his arm out... he didnt really do an actual clothesline, you shouldve had Christian run at mysterio rather than what you did. it was also uber choppy and a bit fidgety. the camera was a little shaky and some dim shadows apeared at the end. 2.5/10. all you really need to do is speed it up, make it less stiff and work on the actual mechanics of the move (christian following through with his clothesline rather than just putting his arm out.) and it would improve a ton. it would probably go from a 2.5/10 to a 4.5/10 at least. just keep practicing. ok thnx for feedback 1 question how do i speed up my ani? |
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