Tylor
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Post by Tylor on Sept 26, 2011 19:58:47 GMT -5
 Doesn't quite look like actual move, close enough. Not sure if I'm going to use it. |
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Ethan
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Post by Ethan on Sept 27, 2011 11:36:53 GMT -5
its smooth impact is alright as are reactions from receiver but the reactions from attacker are horrible he should at least sit back up, are you trying to copy a cenaslayer like style because i don't think it suits you, also the attackers leg fidgets horribly
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Tylor
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Post by Tylor on Sept 27, 2011 14:51:37 GMT -5
Ok. I'll fix the fidgets and reactions. Not sure if I was trying to copy a specific style, just didn't want to use my sprite styles.
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Post by picfedguy on Sept 30, 2011 22:32:08 GMT -5
It's a very nice animation, probably one of your best though there are some things that certianly need some tweaking. Like the animation at the start is kind of in a front view if you get what I mean and the attacker's legs are split and it's kind of hard to tell but the arms look like their both on one side where it would look much better if you had one in the place it is now and the other around the head area of the other stick. The arms on the Defending stick looked kind of off too, like they were inverted when they would've looked much better in the downward directions facing the same way as the legs. Also towards the end of the move the Attacker's arms kind of sloutch down when it would have been better had you had them go overhead like they were lifting the other stick all the way over to the end. Besides those movment problems the rest was good, it was smooth and the reactions worked though there were a few fridgets that hurt the flow like the Defending stick about half way into the move and the attackers legs towards the end. But yeah your best yet for sure, good job.
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