Squatch
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Post by Squatch on May 19, 2012 18:15:31 GMT -5
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Squatch
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Post by Squatch on May 27, 2012 13:52:58 GMT -5
I wanted everyone to know that if you review my show I will review your show.
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gwtpunk
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Post by gwtpunk on May 27, 2012 20:26:40 GMT -5
Really good show! You reviewed mine so I'll reciew yours.
Overall Thoughts: Good descriptions, high drama, and good action.
The first match was really good. It included two really talented men and it was a good overall match. I would have liked to see Bryan win, but Tiger won. In the match, both men had control which I enjoyed. The descriptions and commentary were great in this match.
The second match was short and sweet. I likes the end with the no contest because it helps the feud grow. I liked Smith dominating early on.
I enjoyed the third match alot. Dynamite dominated but RVD was made to look tough and he didn't give up. There were nice counters and good moves pulled off by Dynamite.
The final match was amazing! The match was intense and I really had fun reading it. Both men looked tough in it. There was good, back and forth action until Punk ruined it. That wasn't a bad thing though, because it will make a good angle. You can really feel the emotion in this match and how much these men really wanted the title. There were many bear falls in this match and also some good false finishes. I liked the description when submissions were locked in.
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Post by ICW on Jun 13, 2012 21:07:03 GMT -5
I like the sound of “Stampede Wrestling Alliance.” Sounds a little old school, which I know you’re a big fan of. The video was cool, not sure if it’s necessary to go clip-by-clip though.
Card looks great. Main event sounds awesome.
Bryan Danielson vs. Tiger Mask First match was really entertaining. One criticism: not a fan of matches being written in the past tense. It’s not a major gripe but I just think it makes everything “sound” better. As for the actual match itself, was rooting for Danielson so I’m a little disappointed he couldn’t pick up the victory. Tiger Mask is a solid choice, though…
Decent Punk promo…could’ve been more. Kind of a cookie cutter promo where the bad guy says he’s going to beat the good guy. Didn't have that Punk snarky-ness to it.
Colt Cabana vs. Davey Boy Smith Kind of a rushed match but it was entertaining. One question: why did the match end in a no contest? If Bulldog Hart interfered in the match and attacked Cabana, wouldn’t Colt be considered the winner by DQ?
Decent Hitman interview.
Rob Van Dam vs. Dynamite Kid Enjoyable match. Dynamite Kid winning the belt was pretty cool but I would’ve held off the title match until a future show. Chris Hero showing up was pretty cool and it’s interesting Dynamite Kid made his next match a triple threat match.
Bret ‘The Hitman’ Hart vs. Jushin Thunder Lyger Really interesting match. Punk interfering in the match was a little predictable but effective. Solid booking. Not sure about Punk actually costing Hart his belt though…would’ve had him interfere and Hart retain by DQ because a title vs. title possibility sounded great.
Solid first show! I actually dug this current vs. past wrestlers thing…it really holds true to “fantasy.” I would really change how you grammatically write your matches. Keeping watching tape of these old guys, listen to how every wrestler on your roster speaks, etc…
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